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Reviews for A Lifetime Loving You Part 1; Seasons in Owari

By : AlyssaW
  • From botticelliangel on June 25, 2005
    hi! i havent finished reading this yet, but could you do me a favor hun? please go back and fix the errors from the aff crash from a long time ago? I keep getting distracted by them and its making it hard to read =(
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  • From ANON - Kari on May 28, 2005
    wow that was wonderful, i cried so freaking hard. poor kagome i feel so bad for her and that damn kikyou making everything so freaking hard. but does inuyasha really really love kagome? i guess i gotta read the next part of this awesome story.
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  • From ANON - kittyonnails on January 28, 2005
    I'm really liking this so far. It could use a spell check though.
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  • From ANON - youkai tsuki on February 17, 2004
    This is for Amanda:

    People always want to take the easy way. Wh. What's wrong with taking the road less traveled
    even if it requires a little more work. Why give up on someone just because they were created
    in part by an evil person.Does this mean that they will be evil also? I think not.
    A little hope and a little faith can take you along way in life. As a mother of 4,
    I would never consider giving up on any of my children.



    youkai tsuki
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  • From ANON - SDR on May 01, 2004
    Dear Sammie,

    Once again, this is a story and no, I was not aiming for anything light hearted. This is a dark and agusty romace story, a dark drama if you will. This has been the style of Rumiko Takahashi in all of her works, and thus was the aim of this story as well.

    I will take your advise and post a warning in my first chapter. I would have hoped that AFF.net had some sort of protection so that 13 year olds do not get the wrong idea about such events.

    I'm sorry you feel this way about my story, once again.

    I'm sorry I don't know the true affect either. But either way, this is my story. If you don't like it, then please, stop reading it.
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  • From AlyssaW on April 27, 2004
    Dear Sammie,
    I'm sorry you feel this way about my story and that you have taken it so personally.

    I agree wiou tou that the rape and the psycological things between Kagome and Sesshoumaru are vauge, but over coming the violation of rape is not the center point of the story. I didn't want the story to be depressing and tragic and sad, even though the experence Kagome and Sess go through is there. I appologize for you and other's who feel this way and have gone through experences of rape or sexual abuse.

    I still argue that this is a story, not reality. It is centered on Inuyasha and Kitsumi (the child) and the both of them over coming their own demons. A struggle to love something that was created by your enemy and to protect them from the pain evne though you're going through enough pain yourself. Kagome is scarred, and i know it is vauge but she hides it to be strong for her daughter, and Sess is in a state of denial if you have read part 2 (but since you see things this way, I'm sure you will miss that pof tof the story).

    Magic also plays a part in the rape, and Naraku is the criminal for using Sess and Kag in his building plot, thus the conceving.

    The story is to show that hope can be found even when everything looks bad, and following what your heart tells you.

    I'm sorry you find this unrealistic and that you hate what I have tog together, but I have a decent audience and people who understand that this is just a story. I'm sorry that you have taken this so personally, and I hope you find stories more to your liking.

    SDR

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  • From ANON - Liz on March 25, 2004
    Great story!!! im off to start the next one!!

    With much Love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~
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  • From AlyssaW on February 17, 2004
    Dear Amanda,

    I have sent you an e-mail but incase anyone else has questions about this factor, here is my answer.
    Since Kagome comes from a religious background, I believe Kagome doesn't believe in abortion. In any case, there would not be a story if Kagome just got rid of the child. In time you will see that Kitsumi is not evil at all (if you haven't noticed all ready). Only one element of Kitsumi is evil and that will be shown in a later chapter (in Part2).

    SDR
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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 17, 2004
    I've only read up to chapter 9, but I'm very confused about something. Why on earth can't Kagome get an abortion? They do have them in Japan. Plus, that would be the perfect weapon against Naraku; he doesn't know about the future, so she used modern medicine and technology to defeat his evil plan. Why on earth would she agree to have this evil baby meant to kill and destroy people and created out of magic-induced rape???
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  • From ANON - youkai tsuki on February 15, 2004
    Hooray!! My favorite story is back, with nanceance of it being deleted.
    I'll see you on the IM. Happy writing!


    youkai tsuki
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  • From ANON - GgBg4u on February 15, 2004
    I loved your first chapter, you are a wonderful writer. I like how you started it off, it left me wanting more! I will ask you to update soon but I won't get out of hand with it.:-)
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