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Reviews for Falling

By : SnowySilence
  • From kogaluver on August 22, 2006
    This fic is so wonderfully original and well written. Even though the chapters are short, they hold a lot of emotions and feelings in a conscisely descriptive manner. Koga and Inuyasha are in complete character which, in and of itself, makes the story a joy to read. I wonder if Kagome died during childbirth since you said they left the night the baby was born. Maybe they were attacked when Kag was giving birth and he couldn't help her in time. Snowfall was correct when she said it was a compliment to your writing they we are mulling over what the next chapter could hold about what's happened. Also, I really look forward to the lemon between Koga and Inuyasha ^_~ I think Inuyasha needs someone to hold him and take care of him for a change. I also wonder if Inu will get pregnant or not. It doesn't matter to me one way or another. I just can't stop thinking about what's going to happen next. This really is such a refreshing and original plot.

    I truly hope that you continue this fic. I'm the queen of taking forever to update so I won't pressure you about updating soon. We all have real lives to live and, in my case, write when inspired or my family allows me the time, lol.

    Thanks again for such a great read so far. I hope to see future chapters ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    Kogas Hentai Luver
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 18, 2006
    Oh, this is nice. Very, very nice. I am enjoying it. Well written. I love the fact that there weren't any 'flashbacks'. I believe that Kouga would take Inuyasha in under these particular circumstances. And it is sweet that his softer side is getting a bit of exposure. I haven't read much Kouga/Inu, but this seems original to me. I hope that Kagome isn't the 'evil bitch of the west' in this one, even if she is dead. I am curious, as most of your readers probably are, about whether or not Inuyasha still wears the subjugation beads. No pressure; I'm sure you'll get to it. But, it is as compliment that you have me mulling over what the next chapter could hold.

    Great job and I look forward to the next chapter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Lore on August 12, 2006
    I really like this story and I hope the lemon comes soon
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  • From ANON - Carrie on August 09, 2006
    I really love what you've written so far, I can't wait to hear what comes next! =D
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  • From ANON - tellnoone_noonetells on August 07, 2006
    YEAH!!!!!!! An update! I've waited so long!!!!!! Glad to see u didnt give up on this story! I'm also happy to see the chapters are getting longer. I normaly hate stories with deaths in them, but it works so well in this story I cant hate it at all. I cant wait for an update. And I beg u to never leave this story up in the air this long again. I had almost givin up on the hope of u updating, and had almost cryed!!!! How about u leave a little note so we know the story is still going? PLEASE!!!??? FYI Your getting even better at writing YAOI from what I'm reading. Keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - shaesullivan on July 30, 2006
    Very good story, very visual but one question; What happened to Inuyasha since we can peice together that Kagome's probably dead?
    Characters: 10
    Story: 9
    Language/Spelling: 10

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  • From ANON - Sekre on July 29, 2006
    Great story so far ^^
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  • From ANON - Dante on July 24, 2006
    Wow, I had totally forgotten about this story. It's great that you are continuing with it.

    D_
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on July 23, 2006
    OHhh>..This is soooo good! Please continue and while I know you have a life.....*Gets down and begs* Please don't be like the others that take months and months to update...PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Toni on May 18, 2006
    I really enjoyed your story so far but, on this site, I can't tell when you last updated. I hope you add to it soon because I think it is a unique plot that I hadn't run across before. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Pic\'s Pixie on September 11, 2005
    this is an awesome fic, please continue soon, i luv this its so cute yet so sad, please let kouga help inuyasha soon :) great job so far
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on July 04, 2005
    GRATE STORY, AND I HOPE THAT YOU WILL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK....TELL ME DID KAGOME DIE GIVING BIRTH TO HER BABY GIRL, CAUSE I GOTTA KNOW? ANYHOO I TOTALY LOVED THIS STORY, AND I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU WILL ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO IT SOON PLEASE, CAUSE I'LL BE WAITING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT O.K.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on April 22, 2005
    *poke* *pokepoke* *pokepokepoke* Update? Pwease? *bounces* I wanna see what happens! I've never seen a fic like this before! I'll give you cookies!! Just update!

    **Zeph**
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  • From ANON - bell on April 04, 2005
    I LOVES IT!!! its great it really is please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kirei Kitsue on March 22, 2005
    ok, my first thought is "YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!!!!!" where the hell is the rest of this wonderful piece of fanfiction?!?!?!?!?! You had BEST finish this or you will feel the wrath that is "Ye Pharoh's Anger"!! but seriously, your characterization is wonderful! the way you have the children melded into the fic is splendid! very realistic and natural. I like you "Kouga speech pattern" much better than that of some of the fics i've read. it flows a lot more nicely. Inuyasha is sooooo sweeeeet! WHERE'S THE REST?!?!?! grrrr
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