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Reviews for The Father I Always Wanted?

By : 12blue12
  • From ANON - lilcaliphny on April 04, 2004
    this is a very good story even though inuyasha kissed kikyo i hope it is still a inu/kag fic but it is still great
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  • From ANON - Elise/Demon Child on March 24, 2004
    This is such a good story. I just can't wait to see what happens next. This story is really different from any other Inuyasha fanfic I've come across. The only thing I might change about it is Kagome's mom's character. She seems a little aquiescent. When I see her in the series I imagine a very strong person who is not easily fooled. Couse maybe she is being spell bound the most in this tale. Anyhow keep up the good work and UPDATE!!! Otherwise I may have to force feed lime jello. HeHeHeHe

    DC
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  • From ANON - shewny on March 23, 2004
    NOW WRITE MORE I WANT TO HEAR MORE PLEASE!!! :(
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  • From ANON - rachael on March 22, 2004
    chapter 6 was awesome, please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - lil_angel0426 on March 22, 2004
    GREAT STORY I want to slap him so bad right now. He is a good evil character. Is InuYasha gonna save Kagome from him? I hope so. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - CeltGdds on March 21, 2004
    I'm all for the angstyness but KAgome in my opinion wouldnt be stupid enough to get help now that she knows Kento's like supernaturo who why doesnt she? I mean Inuyasha could just kill him or try to or something or Kaede could help her out. It's just a thought.
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  • From ANON - WOW! on March 15, 2004
    really good story here hope u will update soon because i can't wait for the next update to come! i hope cagome wont end all dragically because that wud just suck and wats the deal with inu so understanding isnt that a little ooc well update soon k!
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  • From ANON - shaina on March 15, 2004
    oh jesus fucking christ!!!! When the hell is kagome going to talk to inuyasha about her problems? I've been waiting every single chapter for that to happened and it hasn't. Kagome turns to inuyasha for everything it seems, so why not this?

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  • From ANON - shewny on March 14, 2004
    NOW WRITE MORE PLZ!!!
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  • From ANON - JadeDarkFeather on March 11, 2004
    Hey, Nice story and a good plot but might I suggest you find a beta. There were a few mistakes i caught such as Henyou instead of Hanyou. and other little spelling mistakes that made it looked rushed. Slow down use your spell check or have a friend beta for you. But its a good story with a good plot.
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  • From ANON - yeah on March 11, 2004
    well luv the story hope u update soon yup yup yup and now i have set up a petition to kill of kento or at least a petition should be started well UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Also Concern on February 18, 1920
    Um, I have to say it is a very good story line. I thought that when I read it the first time... when it was called 'Father Figure' by the popular author Rosefire. The story line, dialog, characters... they are all the same. The only thing different is this is a paraphrasing of her work, and A POOR imitation at best. I wholeheartedly feel you should be free to write your own variant of the concept, just give a little credit where credit is due. It's only polite. I know if it were MY fic being imitated without my permission (and it IS without permission, I checked) I'd be beyond livid.
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 11, 2004
    ok ok I loved the last chap and dun dun dun the plot thinckens..hehe and the guy in shades?? either Sess or Inu and if your asking for pairings I still want it to be Inu/Kag...pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee??? hehe..anyhow this chap was just as great as the others and soooooo want to kill this Kento guy..grrrrrrrrrrrr..let someone hurt him?? Inu hopefully?? pretty please??? hehe update soon k?? please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - rach on March 10, 2004
    UPDATE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Concerned on March 10, 2004
    This story is very similar to a story posted on mediaminer
    by Rozefire. Right down to the part where the evil stepfather
    feels up Kagome's leg and grandpa disappears. If you got the
    idea for your storyfrom another story, it is common courtesy to
    give credit where it is due. But so far there are too many coincedences

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