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Reviews for Demon Huntress aka Virgin Virtue

By : Rayearthann
  • From migele on November 23, 2004
    nice going.
    but
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    to short!

    and when is the action going to go on?
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  • From ANON - leishkychan on May 26, 2004
    The story is going great keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!
    and of course UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MintlovesSR on April 26, 2004
    cha5

    Aiya, I need a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG chapter next!!! Because I wanna see MORE Sess/Rin!!!XD
    Anyway, this cha is very well done!!!! What's the secret on Shikonotama, I'm curious!:)
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  • From ANON - utsukuhsii on April 25, 2004
    So far I am enjoying your story, even though I've only read the first chapter. The plot is one of the most original that I have read in quite a while. I do have a few suggestions though. The main one is to get someone to beta read for you to assist with grammar. You have a lot of tense agreement problems, sentence fragments and punctuation errors. If these things are fixed then you would have a truly great story. One pointer I have is to look at the way that published authors write as a model to improve your writing.

    If you would like to talk more about your writing please feel free to e-mail me.

    utsukushii

    P.S. I've only read the first chapter, so if you've changed this stuff disregard the writing pointers.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2004
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  • From ANON - New Fan on April 24, 2004
    Great chapter. I hope that you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - theMaven on April 24, 2004
    I still find your fic original and interesting. You do have a problem with yverbverb tenses, though, which makes reading your story a little difficult. I've still got the basic gist of the story, though. What will you put the crew through next?
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 24, 2004
    I;m still loving it!!!!!! more chapters soon please...
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  • From ANON - MintlovesSR on April 19, 2004
    As you hope, I like the chapter TOO much!!!:)
    More!!! Sess/Rin= the BEST!!!
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  • From ANON - rin-chan on April 16, 2004
    o.o!!! oohh this is the best chapy so far !! i want to read more *begs* PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeee keep posting i cant wait to read the next chapy!!!!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 16, 2004
    This is really good.....the action Rin is hardcore..I can see her kicking some ass...I really like the sci-fic idea it different...I hope more chapters are coming up soon....
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  • From ANON - New Fan on April 16, 2004
    I saw the capture coming, but I did not expect Sess surrending to the guard? Is he
    falling for Rin and does not realize it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - marnika on April 03, 2004
    that was a gooist.ist. Grovel like Jaken when you have long periods of not updating.(no simply sorry will do )
    S/R on land and I/M lost in space??? Perhaps.
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  • From ANON - anhimals on April 02, 2004
    nice twist to the story! i like it! update soon! =]
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on April 02, 2004
    nice. what a story, really, its so different and interesting. u stepped out of a box and made a great story. not many ppl write good romance/space stories, so feel proud. its really good so keep up the great work! i await for the next chapter!!
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