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Reviews for Spirit Of The Fox

By : Spiritraven
  • From on December 31, 2004
    wow i like it i think you shuld make a kagome hiei paieing thay are good 4 echerter(sp?)
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  • From ANON - Ralina on October 15, 2004
    I loved your story! I did notice one inconsistency however. The Shikon jewel was whole and inside Kagome once again, but when the others went back to the past, they used shards to travel back and forth. I enjoyed the idea of Yu Yu Hakusho and Inuyasha mixed together. Sango and Hiei, what a pair! lol I'm curious as to who you will choose to be with Inuyasha. I'm looking forward to your sequel! Kagome and Kurama made a cute couple. I absolutely loved your st and and keep up the good work!

    *Ralina*
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  • From ANON - sesshysgril08 on September 11, 2004
    wow this is awsome!!!!!!!!!! PLease write more soon ok because i love all of your pairings. This is awsome. Please write more soon. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh please e-mail me when u updat,i mean you dont have to but if you are willing please do. thankx my e-mail is bloomlover_2010@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - kagome on June 10, 2004
    i love the couple ples update soon
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  • From Ethril112 on May 03, 2004
    hey spirit of the fox!
    i love the story so far buthinthink we would all like to read what happens next. please write more i am dieing to find out what happens
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  • From Ethril112 on April 27, 2004
    I am begging you to write a new chapter... PLEASE i am dying to find out what happens!! but other whys i am like totally in love with your story. good plot. great mix of charecters.is tis the best..
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  • From ANON - nneka on April 26, 2004
    i hope you finish spirit of the fox i just have to find out about heia and songo thanks by
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  • From ANON - Morning Fey on February 19, 0000
    Brilliant! Beautifully written, the characters are all very true to form and the story flows well, it's very easy to read. Love the plot too. I love Snape and Lucius and I hope you continue. Bravo. Shelly
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  • From ANON - iris on April 22, 2004
    Spiritraven,you'r an absolute geniuos. I think that Kurama and Kagome make the best coupSweeSweet and caring fox meets lovely and couragous miko.Absolutely perfect plot and intriguing story line .So please write more chapters.I would really appreciate it. Also try to complete your super awsotorytory. You did a great job Spiritraven!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DragonDame57 on April 12, 2004
    omgsh! i love this ficcie! ^^ gah.. it's great! =] i just luve the kurama/kagome... i love kurama.. ^^

    but about this...

    "This demon was more beautiful then both Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha." -chap 2
    "But Kagome wasn't fooled, she knew Kurama couldveryvery deadly even more so then Sesshoumaru." -some other chap..??

    i resent that! sesshoumaru is waaaay better than kurama! yes, i love that hott kitsune, but ... sesshoumaru is hella better! ^^ he's better looking AND deadly.. teehee!

    oh and pleeeeeze don't make sesshoumaru end up with shizuru! .. i don't mind her, i just.. don't want anyone paired up with him ... [[besides kagome.. i love sess/kag!]] i really really don't want to see him end up with her...

    update soon! ^^ =] =D i luve this ficcie!

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  • From ANON - Hillary on April 12, 2004
    ooo nice
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  • From ANON - Nina on April 11, 2004
    Ied ted the chapter. I hope your hand is better so you can type more chapters. This is a really good story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    I loved this story!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JC on March 28, 2004
    i just read ch1-13
    u did a great job writing it
    and the lemon was better then
    what i can write so don't worry
    ;)
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  • From ANON - Getarian on February 19, 0000
    Loved the family scene and the fact that the Z fighters still popped up and interacted with the Saiyans...err, can't understand why Yamcha doesn't pop by though...LOL! Poor guy, I'm still remembering the "My eyesne :ne :-)

    "“Our sex life is not your concern,” Vegeta said."
    "Which, of course, was the same as jumping up and down and shouting ‘Kami YES I NEED TO GET LAID.’"

    LOL! Poor Vegeta, he's so transparent at times...I just want to give him a huge squeezy hug :-)

    Oh, poor Bulla...shame that she may be infertile. Kind of ironic that the only female Saiyan is the one that can't get pregnant.

    Love the idea that not only does Goku pick up the kids by the tail and give them a kiss, but that Vegeta ruffles their hair in a ritual goodnight. Sweet :-)

    Thoroughly enjoyed the lemon. Poor ol' Vegeta was feeling all loving and tender though and Goku was just feeling hot and botd, ld, loved how Vegeta wasn't allowed to just stare...Goku wanted action. LOL!

    Simply adored the fact that Vegeta brushed his teeth with Bulla so that she won't be alone :-)

    A wonderful ending! A wonderful story...thank-you for sharing this world with us :-)

    Thankfully, I can still see these folks in Frosting Chronicles, so all is not lost :-)


    "...Because most of the time I’m only one chapter ahead in all these stories you’re reading.)"

    This shows your confidence and natural talent as a writer, which unfortunately, I lack in l qua quantities. I'm amazed with your ability to type out four different chapters on a daily basis, when I can go days before I sit down and tap out some more of my stuff.
    I rea a w a writing magazine once...that an author should spend at least one hour a day writing, even if they have to force themselves to do it...I think the article had something to do with writers block or something...can't remember, it was a long time ago and I was waiting to see the doctor, but it sort of made sense to me. Unfortunately, when I attempted to apply this method just recently, and read back what I wrote, the next day, I was bored shitless with what I wrote and had to scrap the whole thing.

    "But, if & when you post the stories, I would very much like to read them."

    Thank-you :-) I would like you to read them as well, although I would be a bit nervous at the same time. :-)
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