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Reviews for When He Was Mine

By : inumag
  • From ANON - shaina on June 12, 2004
    That was so wonderful. I loved the lemon. I loved the way kagome and inuyasha speak to eachother lol. I can't wait for them to finally get all of their feelings out in the open so that their are no more secrets with eachother. I'm so happy right now. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - OMG on June 11, 2004
    O_O what happened there
    Inuyasha is a bastard..! OMG and kagome what the hell.!!!!
    update update update
    but I have a question.? when kagome and naraku we're dancing Kagome was also figthing I mean she didn't want to dance with him.?
    did Inuyasha realize that..?
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  • From ANON - maria on June 11, 2004
    I was expecting it to get bad, but damn! He was COMPLETELY out of control. He wouldn't even listen to her side of things. At first I thought he was sweet in the beginning, but now I don't know. Things are definitely not looking good for my favorite couple. I can't wait for the next update!! Please, tell me that the man regains his sanity soon.
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  • From ANON - Numisma on June 10, 2004
    hot, hot, hot! and it's too bad Inu tore those clothes, i bet seeing her wear them made him got nuts.

    now, this is just wishful thinking, but i'd like to see Kags REALLY get back at him for this, somehow. no ideas, but there's gotta be SOME way she can take advantage of him, right?

    kow-tows!
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  • From ANON - Kaye on June 10, 2004
    Hmmm, wonder if this is why you chose the title. So Inu is gonna rape her unless she somehow forgives him... or convinces him not to, but I really doubt that. Really good chapter. Though if he starts beating on her... well we shall just see wthe the all knowing Maggz decides to do. Though if this is a happy ending I don't know how it will end up that way with this occuring.
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 17.

    I'm not even half way to where every one else is and there are already more lemons in this story then any I've read before. Not that that's a bad thing...not at all. I'm just making an observation.


    Woo look at me I'm useing big words!


    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 16

    Oh god. I'm so torn on whether or not to believe him. God....

    I'm so confused.

    ~Ny~


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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 15.
    WooHoo, Talk about 'Tree hugging hippies'. LOL ok that was a bad one.

    ~Ny~


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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 14.

    What is up with AFF? Do they only work on one server? It is pissing me off so much. I have to refresh 50 times just to get to the next chapter and then like 10 times just to review..unrmunrmy reviews show up 2 or 3 times....God aff.net needs to get there act together or I think I might go POSTAL (hehehe love that word) on there @sses.


    Any way.... another hot hot hot chapter.

    ~Ny~


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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 13.

    Very nice shower scene.

    Good lord woman... I need another ciggerett.

    ~Ny~


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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 13.

    Very nice shower scene.

    Good lord woman... I need another ciggerett.

    ~Ny~


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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 12.


    Still loving it. But Aff.net is being mean, and giving me a crap load of ... well of crap trying to load pages.


    But I shall keep reading.

    YOU HERE THAT AFF.NET? YOU SHALL NOT DEFEAT ME!

    ~Ny~

    P.S There is no such thing as to many lemons.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on June 10, 2004
    Your story is like an orchard of lemons -got tons of good stuff along with a supporting plot and developed characters. :)

    Speaking of characters, Inu is a piece of work. I like him in all his "me man, you girl, let's got to my cave and get horizontal" but calling Kagome a slut? Especially when* wa* was the one to buy the outfit, force her to wear it (without panties), and flaunt her around. He's like a little boy who wants to show off a new toy then gets mad at the toy for bringing attention to itself!

    Please redeem him a bit...cuz right now I donlamelame her for being extremely ticked and hurt.

    Hmm...wouldn't it be cool to get Naraku and Kikyo together? hehehe

    Congrats for your nomination to the Inuyasha fanguild awards...
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  • From ANON - Spike of doom on June 10, 2004
    Yay your story is amazing the first ten chapters where well lets say quite suspensefull since hm every author has theyre own way of getting them together but it looked like it was gonna end up a realy dark fic with all the things going in that direction of course it turned around and i think your story is great a real captivating story that i like also i was just wondering why do you give chapters titles... Peace
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  • From ANON - ThatsMsDiva2U on June 10, 2004
    Oh, forgot to tell you that I find your story absolutely brill.
    Th.
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