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Reviews for When He Was Mine

By : inumag
  • From ANON - ThatsMsDiva2U on June 10, 2004
    I did read this chapter on MediaMinor.org, but some of it got cut off. I can't believe InuYasha actually called Kagome a slut! I'm starting to hate him.
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  • From ANON - Queen on June 10, 2004
    Oh my god oh my god! That was the best! Why the in the world did he stop? Please Please update soon. This is getting to good.
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  • From ANON - Femuresures on June 10, 2004
    Damn..is it hot in here? I just reviewed your previous chapter not too long ago and boom..the next chapter was there. And I'm sweating and panting like crazy from reading it, Inu is one hot, sexy boy when he's mad.

    Please, please update soon!
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 11.

    Another yummy lemon. Maggz you do love to indulge your readers in citrus don't you.
    YaY!


    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 11.

    Another yummy lemon. Maggz you do love to indulge your readers in citrus don't you.
    YaY!


    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 10.

    Ny: Oh my virgin eyes!

    *Covers eyes*

    ::Mr. Disclaimer (Ny's muse) comes over and bops Ny upside the head::

    Mr. Disclaimer: You 'ant no virgin!

    Ny: Oh yeah! Well, it's just that, the lemon in this story was like... WOW. And I was like... OH! And ... and it just made me feel like a virgin again.....

    Mr. Disclaimer: You need help.

    Ny: Yeah, I know.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Loved the lemon.

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 9.


    *Waves hand in front of face like a fan*

    Is it hot in here or is it just me?

    *Goes and gets a cold drink.*

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapt.
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    "You bet your fine ass I'm coming with you!", I said firmly and unhooked my seatbelt.

    LOL! I loved that line. Very funny. Good chapter as always.


    ~Ny~


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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 7.

    Man, I wanted to step through my 'puter and smack Kikyo up side the head. And that is how you know it really is a good story, when you get so into it that you want to beat the bloody hell out of the characters. Well, I need to calm down before I read the next chapter.

    *Ciggerett brake*

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 6.

    Another wonderful chapter. I like how this is going.

    The band thing has been done before..yes..BUT anytime I have read them it was some silly teeny bopper thing that I just couldn't stomach. This is mature and seems much more true to how things go in the real world.

    OK, so I'm not good at giving compliments...but rest assure that was supposed to be a compliment..hope you took it that way.

    ^_^

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 5.


    God. That chapter had so many levels of emotion in it. Very nice. And I enjoy your take on the Inuyasha characters. If they were all born in Kag's time/era I can see them being this way. It is loverly!

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Ok.
    1 sorry for the triple post. AFF.net was mean.
    2 I slept g..so..so now i'm back to read and review.


    Chapter 4.

    Well,...OMG! That chapter was smashing! LOL! Loved it.

    Inu and Kag sitting in a tree...

    K. I. S. S. I. N. G..

    Wooo!


    ~Ny~
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on June 10, 2004
    Ohhh...Inu is really pissed, I can't wait to see what he does to KAgome when they get home...
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 3.

    Ok. So I didn't go to bed..I read another ter.ter.

    I said to myself. "Self this is the last chapter then you must go to bed."

    But then I replyed to myself. "But self this is so interesting..I want to know what happens."

    Then my first self replyed back to my second self. "Listen selou nou need sleep, If you don't get sleep you get really weird, and you start writing reviews that don't make sence."

    So my second self retorted to my first self. "But I don't care, a review is a review as long as it's not a flame, and I'm not going to flame this story cause I really like it."

    So getting annoyed with my second self my first self yelled at my second self. "IF YOU DON'T GET SOME SLEEP YOU MIGHT START TO NOT UNDERSTAND THE STORY CAUSE THE SLEEPYNESS WILL EFFECT YOUR READING!"

    That got my second self thinking. "Okay, you'er right. I do want to make sure I read this story correctly and understand it so, I will go to bed."

    So in conclusion...All of me loves your story..but were going to bed.

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 3.

    Ok. So I didn't go to bed..I read another chapter.

    I said to myself. "Self this is the last chapter then you must go to bed."
    t tht then I replyed to myself. "But self this is so interesting..I want to know what happens."

    Then my first self replyed back to my second self. "Listen self, You need sleep, If you don't get sleep you get really weird, and you start writing reviews that don't make sence."

    So my second self retorted to my first self. "But I don't care, a review is a review as long as it's not a flame, and I'm not going to flame this story cause I really like it."

    So getting annoyed with my second self my first self yelled at my second self. "IF YOU DON'T GET SOME SLEEP YOU MIGHT START TO NOT UNDERSTAND THE STORY CAUSE THE SLEEPYNESS WILL EFFECT YOUR READING!"

    That got my second self thinking. "Okay, you'er right. I do want to make sure I read this story correctly and understand it so, I will go to bed."

    So in conclusion...All of me loves your story..but were going to bed.

    ~Ny~
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