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Reviews for When He Was Mine

By : inumag
  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 3.

    Ok. So I didn't go to bed..I read another chapter.

    I said to myself. "Self this is the last chapter then you must go to bed."

    But then I replyed to myself. "But self this is so interesting..I want to know what happens."

    Then my first self replyed back to my second self. "Listen self, You need sleep, If you don't get sleep you get really weird, and you start writing reviews that don't make sence."

    So my second self retorted to my first self. "But I don't care, a review is a review as long as it's not a flame, and I'm not going to flame this story cause I really like it."

    So getting annoyed with my second self my first self yelled at my second self. "IF YOU DON'T GET SOME SLEEP YOU MIGHT START TO NOT UNDERSTAND THE STORY CAUSE THE SLEEPYNESS WILL EFFECT YOUR READING!"

    That got my second self thinking. "Okay, you'er right. I do want to make sure I read this story correctly and understand it so, I will go to bed."

    S con conclusion...All of me loves your story..but were going to bed.

    ~Ny~
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 10, 2004
    Chapter 2.

    Very nice. I like how Kag reacted to Inu and dancing with him. The conversation between the 2 was great. Very well writen. I am so tempted to read the next chapter right now but I know the more I read it the more I wont be able to stop and go to bed tonight. What to do ...What to do.....


    ~Ny~
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  • From ANON - inugirl on June 10, 2004
    Hey great story, please update asap. I hope that you fix your comp fast. Please, really wanna know what happenes next!! I hope to hear from you when you update. Try to update soon. I LOVE this story. I envy your ability to write. Well update soon!
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  • From NyliramLlessur on June 09, 2004
    Ok. So I'm a little late in starting this story... But I finally got to start reading some storys on my 'To read' list in my 'FanFic' folder on aol. So far with only reading one chapter I can say that I like your writing style. You put alot into it.

    I also want to tell you that I really do suck at writing reviews so alot of the till yll you will see is stupid babbling.

    Altho I am very far behind the rest an I should try and read this alght ght away...I made that mistake when I tryed to catch up with another story. This one I am going to try and take my time. A few chapters each day. Not the hole story from 10pm till 9am the next morning like i did with the last one...lol

    Also I don't know what sites you have this fic on and If you would rather I review on this site or another. Some people havere sre storys on multipul sites and some sites don't get as many reviews as other..so if there is a site that you would rather I review on PLEASE let me know.

    Altho I will be reading it on AFF cause of the rateing because I am a perv.

    NyliramLlessur@yahoo.com

    Well thats all for now...lol I promise my other reviews wont be this long and boaring...they'll be short and boaring.

    ~Ny~


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  • From ANON - Missa on June 09, 2004
    Chapter 22 I think that Kikyou needs to die in a firey car wreak...yeah! Kill the bitch!!
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  • From ANON - Missa on June 07, 2004
    OMG Maggz! This was so fucking awesome! I loved it! I can't wait for more to be finished...
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  • From ANON - shaina on June 07, 2004
    shit! poor kagome. I hope she explains the situation to inuyasha so that he isn't mad at her.
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  • From ANON - shaina on June 07, 2004
    shit! poor kagome. I hope she explains theuatiuation to inuyasha so that he isn't mad at her.
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  • From ANON - subaru on June 06, 2004
    That was really cool just keeps getting better. I hope you do more Kikyo bashings. Cant wait for next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - subaru on June 06, 2004
    That was really cool just keeps getting better. I hope you do more Kikyo bashings. Cant wait for next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - subaru on June 06, 2004
    That was really cool just keeps getting better. I hope you do more Kikyo bashings. Cant wait for next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - yasha21 on June 05, 2004
    yay for updates. hopefully you might update once more before i go on vacation. if not i shall have something to look foward to.
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  • From ANON - chibi_neko on June 03, 2004
    I love this story please onegai update...!! please don't let inuyasha and kagome break up ..! he's so nice and she's so sweet
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  • From ANON - angelstars on June 03, 2004
    O...M...G...Inuyasha getting jealous like that?! holy crap, it was so...so...sexy damn it all i can't believe you just stopped it there!!!?! and Naraku was tne pne playing them both me thinks! Kags better do some explaining!! Wonder, will this be the last time we see Naraku?? I can't wait for the climax (pun intended!)

    Inuyasha + pissed + jealous = SEXY INU!

    Looking forward to the latest chapter and sorry to hear about your PC problems.. lets hope your baby gets better soon! ^.^


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  • From ANON - Queen on June 03, 2004
    Sorry for what happened to your comp, hope its fixed soon. Anyways I loved it! All of it! Update as soon as you can. Please.
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