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Reviews for When He Was Mine

By : inumag
  • From ANON - spicypopcorn on April 17, 2004
    wow they makeout waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to much. you seem to concentrate to muck on the sex, and not the story cant you have at least ONE chapter where they dont make out? the fic is hard to follow now you seem to be getting worse instead of better
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  • From ANON - ThatsMsDiva2U on April 17, 2004
    Whoa! Now it seems as though Kagome will become pregnant with InuYasha's child or already is. I think they'd make great family. And I do hope Kagome decides to move in with InuYasha, that would be the best for both of them... at least I think so.
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  • From ANON - Ish on April 17, 2004
    this damn thing wouldn't let me review. Anyway, You really have a nack for writing! This was by far the sweetest chapter, and it's spurned even more hatred in me for Kikyou, thank you very much. I was amazed. Glad you're feeling betteoo. oo. well, keep it HOT!
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  • From ANON - shaina on April 17, 2004
    oh my god that was wonderful. I loved the lemon and how sweet inu is. Incredible lemon seriously. I can't wait to find out what they decide to do and what's gonna happen next. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - HAP on April 17, 2004
    this is by far the one of the best sts is i've ever read, its so intense and so sexy ^.^ i hate kikyou! yayness...or booness, whatever, anyways i hope you update soon, its so damn good *purr* ^-_-^
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  • From ANON - CeltGdds on April 17, 2004
    Awesome lemon scene, but will u ever give KAgome a real backbone, I mean she was so close last chapter she needs to not be a mat for her mom and sis it pains me so that she is...but i am quite addicted to the story and love how ur writing it....PS-Kikyou needs to just die or become severly ugly on the outside as well as in.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on April 17, 2004
    Wow. I really love your fic. CH: 23 has to be mine fav chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on April 17, 2004
    I'm glad she didn't go home like she had planned. She is old enough to do what ever it is that hse wants to. Her parents know that she is 'the smart one' so it should be any problems when it comes to her doing whatever it maybe with her life. If Kikyo wnats to play that game with I'm going to tell on you then Kagome should play it too. She can out smart her sister, beat her at her own game and still keep Inuyasha. At first it was just a little battle here nad there, but now it's all out war. I say that Kagomkes kes her decision as soon as she gets back home. The very first day she decides to move out before Inuyasha has a chance to leave and he makes arrangements for her to get an apartment for the both of them, then her parents could go out and leave her at home by her self thinking that Kikyo is gone some where with a job. Kikyo comes back to the house and has an arguement with Kagomeut Iut Inuyasha and then the fight breaks out. Unknown to both of the girls their father comes back for something forgetten and hears what Kikyo says to Kagome and gets upset until he hears Kagome defending her self and Inuyasha. Of course he hears the fight, but lets them fight and returns to his wife. Upstairs Kagome has f'd Kikyo up enough that she will has to put on a ton of make up to cover everything up. Kagome drops Kikyo in her room and then takes a nice soothing shower, talks to Inuyasha on the phone tells him that she should be moved in to the apartment by the time he gets back, how she beat up Kikyo and whatever else happened during the day. In the morning her mom see what she did to Kikyo and starts to say something to her about it, but her dad for the first time in her life tells his wife to shut up and sit down, then turns and winks at Kagome. He asks her if there is any thing she needs for her new place. Yes in my little world Kagome doesn't know that she is carrying Inuyasha's child, her father finnaly stands up for her and she beats the crap out of Kikyo. Please pay please pay no attention to me I am on a sugar high. I just want from now on that every time Kikyo tries to out do Kagome, Kagome doesn't close in on her self, but she comes out swinging and she hits her target everytime. After 19 yrs of Kikyo always being in the spot light so to speak it's now Kagome's turns and the spot light is being by Inuyasha's side. I kind of want him to ask her to marry him and with her saying yes with out them knowing that Kikyo has heard them. Oh that would just kill her. Then just to put the icing on the cake that Kagome would tell Inuyasha that she was pregnant after he asked her to marry him. That would just not only kill her, but bring her back and kill her again. I hope you are feeling better.
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  • From ANON - Esther on April 16, 2004
    Yah yah !!! Good for Inuyasha. Love is sure stronger then that stupid pot clay dead bitch !!! Go on kill that bitch Kikyou. Skewer her, chop, stomp, quarter her I don't care so long as U get rid of that psycho bitch. Let Inuyasha & Kagome be together forever & Kagome'es mom can rot for all I care if she is another bitch like Kikyou.
    Please continue updating & more more fluff with Inu & kag. LUV YR STORY MAN!!!
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  • From ANON - Soranji on April 16, 2004
    I haven't reviewed in a while. I love this story. Keep em coming . lol
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  • From ANON - Vyle on April 14, 2004
    I luv this story!!! It totally ROCKS! I can't wait until you get to post up another chappie! Keep up the great job--you da gurl! :) PEACE!
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  • From ANON - shaina on April 14, 2004
    oh god, please don't let them break up. I'll cry if they do. Poor inu and kag.
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  • From ANON - ish on April 14, 2004
    KIKYOU HATER, RIGHT HERE! I've read this since you started, and yet didn't say a word. I felt that some authors just don't appreciate their reviews enough, but hey. I love this fic, it's so great. Really. It's so OOC and AU, but it's amazing. And I think these cliffhangers are gonna be the end of me. Or maybe you... lol. Update...now!
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  • From ANON - ... on April 13, 2004
    yay! great chapter! keep up the good work...
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  • From on April 13, 2004
    Ooh, I hate Kikyo so much! What was InuYasha thinking... letting Kikyo wrap her arm around his neck? I bet the only reason he stopped was because he saw Kagome. What a jerk!
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