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Reviews for When He Was Mine

By : inumag
  • From ANON - LadyDogDemon on July 02, 2004
    i love it you rock you could make a lot of money if you charged people to read it i wold pay $50.00 for this in a book.
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  • From ANON - RavenShadow on July 01, 2004
    Ok, first off I have to tell you this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I know I haven't reviewed before, and believe me its not because of lack of intrest. I look forward to each and every update since the first chapter. It has been my own laziness and lack of time. I try to read as much fanfic as i can but sometimes that causes me to let some things fall to the way side. But i really love this story, it is captivating and well written. Sometimes you read fics that where the intimate moments between char, are poorly done. I have never been unsatified by anything you have written so far. I wait in anticipation for the next chapter. This is truely a great story, by a truely talented writer. Thank you for allowing us fans the pleasure of your vision.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on July 01, 2004
    I've been enjoying your writing for so many chapters now, I thought that I'd take a stab at reviewing while AFF.net is letting me.
    I can sense some unhappiness coming up -as much as I really, really want everything to work out between Inu and Kag (I always root for that couple in all stories) - I think the way you have Kagome's wistful narration in past tense is the clue.

    And now I'm getting anxious about just how things do end...I mean they both love each other so much -Kag has had to overcome a great internal struggle to admit her feelings for Inu. As rocky and as sex driven as the relationship is between the two of them, the genuine need and love for one another comes across. The only way I can see things ending that will not leave us hating Inu for breaking Kag's heart is if some external forces separates them....illness or accident.

    I've already shed a few tears while reading through your chapters (testament to your believable writing and likable characters) and am guessing that I'll be shedding more with the remaining ones.

    I anxiously await your updates with my kleenex....
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  • From ANON - smittin kittin on July 01, 2004
    Wow Magz, another amazing chap! I think this chap really displaytherther aspects of their relationship. I felt it was rather poinant when Inu said he liked to play w/Kag. I hadn't considered that he wouldn't get the chance to do that often. You've done an excellant job of showing Inu vulnerability. Now here is my big fear! Kag has given in to her love for him completly! She's admitted it to him! She's secure in it! The shoe is t tot to drop isn't it? I'm almost afraid to read the next chap. This story is written in the past tense & as I've said before I get the impression from the way she tells it that something tragic happened. Not just because it's told in the past tense , but the tone of the story from the very begnning has been underlined w/saddness. Regardless I'm in this thing till the end! Once again great work! Anxious Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin
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  • From ANON - shaina on July 01, 2004
    very good lemon, I loved it. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Queen on June 30, 2004
    Just keep getting better and better. Is Inyasha going to ask Kagome to marry him? Well please update soon.
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  • From ANON - mofaf on June 30, 2004
    sounds like Inu and Kagome are having a wonderful time visiting the beach....wonder how Kikyo will act when she finds out......
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  • From ANON - Melissa on June 27, 2004
    This story is amazing. Pleeeeeeez post again soon. I have to know what happens. The little beach cottage is a fairytale, great idea. That was soooooooo romantic!
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  • From ANON - Missa on June 27, 2004
    Chapter 41&42
    I love it Maggz! Great chapters.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on June 26, 2004
    This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Your writing style is exqusite and you keep your audience hanging on with every word. You should be writing novels. < 3
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on June 26, 2004
    great job on this chapter didnt see that coming but hmm i wonder what kagome's present was.....

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  • From ANON - Queen on June 26, 2004
    Hi me again. Wanted to know if you were going to do a part two?
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  • From ANON - Queen on June 26, 2004
    Hi me again. Wanted to know if you were going to do a part two?
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  • From ANON - Inulover on June 25, 2004
    I think this is a really good fic and keep it up.. and you better not kil Inu Yasha or Kagome that jsut mean.. I don't know why but I get the feeling that is where this fic is going .. you can't tho that jsut mean
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  • From ANON - venatus_fraus on June 25, 2004
    Fuck! I'm so nervous!!! What's going to go wrong? Will they be together? The title of this has always made me really anxious, since the story is from Kagome's pov...........Kyaaaa!

    *deep breath* It's only a story, it's only a story, it's only a story, it's only a story..................
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