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Reviews for When He Was Mine

By : inumag
  • From fire4ashz on July 24, 2008
    you know i've never thought i could like dirty talk...but there is something so sexy about the way you write it that omg! it so fucking hott!!! it goes so well especially with all that angry sex!!! oh and by the way screw the wankers that don't like lemons!!!! bc this is aff!! adult! fanfics got a problem maybe your in the wrong place ne? lol love the fic and the lemons !!!! weee!!i could so make lemonade right now!
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  • From fire4ashz on July 24, 2008
    wow talk about dirty talk!! lol i really never got that 0.0 lol neways loved the lemons!!!
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  • From fire4ashz on July 24, 2008
    breathtaking!
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  • From fire4ashz on July 24, 2008
    i've just read the first ch and its fantastic!!!
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  • From ANON - iggy on November 05, 2006
    I want to say that I read your story while you were first posting, and every once in a while when I feel like it, I read it again, and this time there were so many thought that i had about it. I kept thinking about how sometimes Inuyasha seemed like an ass, he just lost control so much and it seemed like he had no control over his emotions and I didn't like him much for that fact. However as I read more and read the story again, I realized that he was just scared, because he cried, over Kagome, and over losing her- he didn't seem scared to show that. It made me realize that your portrayl of Inuyasha was amazing, because he could show what he felt, and was an intense person.

    I just wanted to tell you that, I thought that it was something that I needed to say.

    I am glad you wrote this.
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 10, 2006
    *sigh*
    I used to read this story when it was originally on FanFiction, I read it from beggining to end, I always hoped you'd write a sequal, But it seems you haven't.
    :(
    I really hope you do, It was a great ending, And I don't know what you could write if you did do a sequal...I guess it's just wishful thinking because it was so good.
    Well anyway, I'll read your other stories.
    :)
    Kat.
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  • From ANON - Ryuchi on June 19, 2006
    This story is awsom and you seem like a asome person and that story was... Just... GREAT!! I'm speachless...
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  • From ANON - Sakura on February 07, 2006
    Man i already read this story, but i loved it so much i had to read it again, like an old book ya know. I"m really hopin for a sequal though, haha im kinda embarressed cause i already asked you this on FF.net, tells you how much i love this fic. How detailed it is about everything, their thoughts and actions, you really got a talent for writing. :)
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  • From ANON - ~ME on January 29, 2006
    I was just re-reading this story--again!! -- this is one of my all time favorites!-- and just had to let you know that you are the absolute MASTER of all lemons!! I just can't get over how wonderful you are--just the feelings, descriptions--everything--makes an incredibly great read ^_~ I was hoping you'd, maybe, write another 'strickly Inu/Kag' fic again? I'm an Inu/Kag 'only and forever' kinda gal--just a sappy romantic, I guess :) and there seem to be so few well-written Inu/Kag fics out there lately. Anyway--felt I needed to drop you another line on how fantastic I think you're writing skills are, and to just say 'thanks'.
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  • From ANON - amber on January 17, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY this is such a good story but check ur spelling more ok?
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  • From ANON - GaurdianTennyo on November 27, 2005
    Your fanfic was totally awesome!
    I hope you right more like these!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaiganeru on November 11, 2005
    I really want to read and enjoy this story.. but I'm finding the typos and the repeated words very distracting. Things like ththeythey instead of they for example. Would you please take the story and edit it up a bit, clean up the typos and errors and repost it? It would probably get a great deal more attention if you did. Otherwise, I found the premise very interesting and really wanted to continue reading it.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - snowyangel4685 on October 13, 2005
    Maggz...InuYasha has CHEST HAIR? Sorry...this just sorta disturbs me...lol. Anyway, love the story so far! Can't wait for the lemon....^^
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 22, 2005
    I read this over two days. I must say you brought me to tears more
    than once. It's been a very few rare times, that I've encountered an
    'InuYasha' that was this heartfelt and beautiful. It was like i felt every
    bit of his pain, anger and regret. My heart broke into a million pieces
    when he cried during the sex on their last night. I cried with him...it
    hurt just that much.

    I practically dispised Kagome. I hated the way she constantly broke
    his heart with her indecision and doubts - especially when it came to
    his love for her. I found her to be weak & a waste of his time. Mind you,
    this is no reflection on your writing. If anything, it proves that you're
    brilliant because I adore Kagome most of the time & i can only see
    her with InuYasha in fics. So to make me hate her like this...well done.

    Are you british? I'm gathering that from the way you write. Anyway...
    well done. I enjoyed this fic even though it was angsty and thank you for
    finally making my love happy in the end. Kami knows he deserved it.
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  • From 4inukag4 on September 17, 2005
    You had me worried there for a bit and it did seem like all InuYasha wanted Kagome for was the sex. But I think you handled the situation well, I only wish my marriage had gone so well as my husband was very controlling and frequently violent. I stuck it out for seven long months until he put me in the hospital and now am going through a very shitty divorce, He says he still loves me but I refuse to be his punching bag or his sex toy. I like how Kagome's dad stuck up for her when her shitty mom and Kikyo were being so cruel. You really hit home in a lot of places with this one girl and some parts even made me bawl like a baby. I love the ID bracelet thing and had the feeling that neither one of them would ever take theirs off. But that's enough of my ranting. I loved the story and look very forward to seeing more of your fine work. Thank you for a very entertaining, albeit three cold showers long, six hours.

    Love Your work.
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