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Reviews for Red Strings of Fate

By : northstar
  • From ANON - DPM on April 03, 2005
    What a deeply embroiled plot you have weaved. You have got to finish this story! Keeping Sess in total character but allowing the readers to view his thoughts and self-reflection has endeared him further in my mind. Thank goodness that you've also had the foresight not to make Rin a wuzz. Sess needs someone to be impetuous as he is reserved, giving as he is stoic, loving as he is afraid to express that simple emotion. Great transition and the chapters are fluid as you move from one scene to another.
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  • From ANON - darklady on September 12, 2004
    i love your story update!
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  • From ANON - Innocent_Angel on August 28, 2004
    love it please continur oh and e mail me asap i have some Q's
    Ja
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  • From ANON - Lee on August 24, 2004
    Wow, that was engrossing. I read all 15 posts in one sitting unable to tear myself away. Very good. Great job.
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  • From Ymanetta on May 26, 2004
    Update Update Update soon please
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  • From ANON - Maggz on May 19, 2004
    *Sobs uncontrollably* Poor, poor, poor Rin! Naughty author!! All I can say is that this bloody well better bring Sess and Rin together because if not I'm setting my Muse on your Muse. *growling in backund*und* Not yet luv your time will come *says placatingly* lol! OK so maybe not but still... To have been Sess when thoroughly dismembering Targen...now that was a truly pricelss piece of genius if I've ever read it, you know I can't say I've read a fic where Tensaiga was put to that sort of use. It's refreshing to have some fresh meat *coughs* in there. ;P Anywho, can't wait until the next chappie mate!!
    Blah, blah...
    Maggz XD
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  • From badkittie on April 29, 2004
    The direction you are going in is well mapped out. I would love to see what happens when the hunt for the traitor's ensues! Not to mention what happens when Rin has to heal and how will she change.

    Sess' cousin has a fiance? Will he be in the story? And he's an inu youkai! Hisai is and excellent focal point for certain aspect of the plot development and the twists. She brings the "threads" together if you will. Keep up the excellent work. I am looking forward to more of this story.
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  • From ANON - stella on April 26, 2004
    i actually love the angst in this story. it adds dramatic flare. can't wait until the next chapter. i'm defiantly a fan of the story. keep up the good job.
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  • From migele on April 26, 2004
    that with the virgin was even written.

    all right you managed to get me confused., maybe you should explain a bit better who sesshou's cousin really is.
    I realised that she ain't normal when she looked into the future while she was playing with the strings.
    but I doubt that everone got the significance of the moment.

    by the way... why the hell do most of the authors think that Rin is the best chara for getting raped?

    migi-chan
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  • From ANON - animelo on April 25, 2004
    Great story. Can't wait until your next update!
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  • From ANON - destiny on April 25, 2004
    another chapter well done dude! Great job. Update soon. =)
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  • From ANON - Manda on April 25, 2004
    I'm really liking this story. It is angsty (sorry about spelling!), but I think that just developes the characters and the emotions more. Only a really good writer and write such stories or fanfics. ^_^ Thanks for explaining that lemon in the hot springs. (I read it, and I was like, what the heck? Then she got raped and she was a virgin and I was even more confused!) So, that was like a mini fic within a fic, so to speak? Cool stuff. Great story. Update soon. (Please?)
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  • From theMaven on April 25, 2004
    You can't have a GOOD Rin and Sess pairing without a little bit of angst. And, despite Rin's condi, th, things seem to be working out for the best. I commend you for writing in first person. It can be a slippery slope, but your quality hasn't gone down an inch. I'm anxious for the full-fledged happy ending that I believe is coming ^__^

    So, show this to your muse, and tell her to get cranking ^__-
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  • From ANON - destiny on April 24, 2004
    HAHAHAHHA that's funny! i enjoy the torture that Sesshoumaru did to that fucking bastard! That dumbass deserves it! Keep up your great job. Please email me when you update. Peach out!
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  • From ANON - kittie le sabre on April 24, 2004
    This dark twist in the story was so well written that although I liked the lemon (it was searing) if you had not written it, it would have been cool. I was so glad that Sesshoumaru put the business on that scum bab-but poor Rin! That beautiful, sweet girl! She did not deserve this but the world is a cruel place and that kind of thing does happen to people in reality. Please, keep writing. I hope she comes throuhg this horror stronger, and not broken.
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