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Reviews for Enemy of My Enemy

By : Loki
  • From ANON - baka yarou on February 20, 2003
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    Well, to be honest, I was going to ask some similar questions myself. Mainly because it was a bit hard to tell where you were going with this story, I guess--it really didn't feel like PWP, which says something about how well you wrote it ^_^;;; I suppose I was really waiting to see what happened next before commenting. I will a wit with your anon. reviewer to a point...it was a bit strange how Kagome managed to figure out who was playing with her, given her situation. Hell, it might as well have been Naraku...

    And actually, I was really interested in what Naraku's role in all this was. I was half-expecting for Sess to find tha that Naraku had deceived him (or Kagome!) somehow...it's the sort of plot the bastard would think of. After all, they are in the middle of his lair...would have added a nice, dark twist on the story. But alas, I suppose we will never know. I respect your decision to stop writing a fic that isn't fun anymore, but it sure is a shame.

    Also, I don't want to hide behind the anonymous curtain, but you leave me no choice--I can't find an email contact for you. Normally, I review lemon content via email--it's much more respectful of everybody's privacy. Sorry about that! But if you'd like to find me, I'm one of your "baka" fanfic net reviewers too...and I still support your writing 100% ^_~

    -baka yarou
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  • From ANON - Hikari no Hime on February 20, 2003
    well guess what, i'm just loving the fic so don't worry and keep writing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meow on February 19, 2003
    I'm SO sorry! I REALLY REALLY LOVE your story. Please don't stop writing b/c of someone who upset you. I understand if you need a break from it for awhile, but please don't stop. Keep writing to show them they can't stop you and maybe once they read the whole thing they'll get the point. I read that part where the reviewer said 'he was raping her'. That really pissed me off. It's obviously very clear that Kagome is enjoying it, so its not rape. I have had that experience as well as you and you're right, it isn't beautiful OR sexy. Obviously this person has never had this experience and will never understand it. I mean its one thing to think how horrible it would be to have that happen to you, and actually have it happen are two completely different things. You can't even describe it really, and the emotional aftermath is wdevadevastating. I'rry rry again that this person upset you, but I sincerely wish/hope that you finish this story.
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  • From ANON - Kai on February 19, 2003
    Keep this chapter, please!! I really like Sesshoumaru's way of thinking and changing throughout the chapter. Sure it was long, but that's what made it great!! Feel free to update soon!! (Hint hint...lol)
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  • From ANON - Meow on February 18, 2003
    I enjoy this story. I've been reading it @ FFnet but I check up on it here sometimes along with others. I can't wait for you to update. I hope its really soon. I just adore Sess/Kag parings, and I'm just dying to know what Naraku is REALLY up to. I liked how Sesshoumaru realizes he loves her now. That's great! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - spirit on February 18, 2003
    WOW!! That was steamy! When's the next chapter? I can't wait to read on!
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  • From ANON - Aerith on February 18, 2003
    -wails-You can't scrap it! You got me hooked, lined, and sinkered to this story. I find it far more interesting than I have any other Sess/Kag story I have read so far. Please, please with sugar and cream do continue this story further.
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  • From ANON - Miara on February 17, 2003
    Not too long at all. It's a nice change from the "they stripped, he penetrated, they came" nature of so many fanfics out e. Ae. And very well written to boot. Eagerly awaiting the next installment ...
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on February 17, 2003
    This was definately worth the wait. I loved the suspence,the overall mood, the sex ;)
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  • From ANON - spirit on February 17, 2003
    Please hurry and update!...lol. I've been waiting and waiting to read what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2003
    aha ok cliffhanger, want more must read more please update soon. lol this a great story keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - AZ on February 09, 2003
    write more!! Please don't stop now!!! I really love the idea and i just completely looooooove the way you write stories!!! You MUST not stop writing!!
    Ummm... don't really know what else to say- i love the violence/ agression! Yeah that's nice and original +plus+ it's sounds like Sesshomaru!!
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  • From ANON - ayanna24 on February 06, 2003
    Man!! That is a great story I also read your stories on FFN anywho Please keep writing...
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  • From ANON - Isa on February 05, 2003
    You've _got_ to be kidding me ;_; You didn't just end right there.. *whimper* I wanna read more...
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  • From ANON - shadow on February 05, 2003
    This is a great story. Post more soon. Please!!!!!!!!!
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