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Reviews for Forever Mine

By : Sessysama
  • From theMaven on May 31, 2004
    Here's one more to help you on your way to 101. I believe I'm #99, so you better to get to writing, lady ^__^

    Anyway, great characters, great story and when your muse goes MIA, do what I do and start something else. It's fun to work on more than one fic at once, and if you ever encounter a block with one, you can just work on the other. A couple of other things I do are break out my Inu DVDs and reread the manga online. You'd be surprised how much inspiration I get from those two things. And I reread my fic from the beginning and that sometimes spawns new ideas.

    Keep up the excellent work and have a happy vacation--theMaven :)
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on May 31, 2004
    forgot what I wanted to say, since site was acting up last night. Oh, that I am glad you took your time and wrote a quality chap. Dislike when authors rush and end up messing up the whole story, it was wonderful as always, and you are quy moy moving into my #1 ff author of all four sites I am on. Excellent. Just wish had such creative writers on SM page. Have a nice vacation
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  • From ANON - tonia on May 30, 2004
    excellent chapter as always. please keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sci-Jess on May 30, 2004
    This chapter was not bad. I thought it was pretty good my self. I just wished that Saraku find someone who will compatible
    to her because her taste in person will be more difficult than her father. It could been seen in Sesshoumaru who was going
    to be his mate, Saraku is another story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 30, 2004
    This chapter was not bad. Not bad at all. I enjoyed it I just wished that Gizin (I know I spelled his name wrong)was not a jerk. Poor
    Yo, I just hope that what Neji ( spell that name wrong too) is offering is enough. Maybe he will change his mind eiallially he starts
    to enjoy Yo company more and more to the point she will stay with him as long as he live. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shaid on May 30, 2004
    It's great. I'm very impressed by the complexity of the characters and their relationships. So far it is a wonderful story and I really enjoy it. I hope your writer's block dies a quick and painless death and you can get to the next chapter before thursday! :-D Thanks for all you've written so far!
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on May 23, 2004
    So I'm reading along and loving Rin's recap of her tragic past and the emotions she is going through. And I brighten atry mry mention of Tanshin (feel free to do another story following him and Makato--I love them!). Then we get the villiage and I'm really proud of the way Makato handles things with Muchi. And then, BAM, Sakaru goes "hunting" and the story ends with me totally chilled. Although there have been many deaths and killings in this and the previous story. This one feels the most like a murder. (With the exception of the demons killing Rin of course). And the way she is so pleased with herself is unnerving. I look forward to where you are going with her character.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on May 23, 2004
    great writing, great plot, and yes I knew she would kill him, glad!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - stella on May 23, 2004
    that was an awesome chapter. i loved how you had rin confront her demons and share her past the way she did. i can't wait to read more. keep up the good work.
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  • From migele on May 23, 2004
    great
    not to dark but fine...

    I didn't really wonder about Saraku. I expected it.
    after all she soesn't mind killing....

    good going

    migi
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  • From ANON - anhimals on May 22, 2004
    good chapter. i guessed that saraku was going to kill that ass. i am glad he is dead but somehow i feel as if death really isn't the answer to the problem though. i wonder how she will react to rin's tragic story. she will probably go all crazy or something. hope you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sci-Jess on May 22, 2004
    Great chapter. I liked how Makato regain back her life. Its looks like Makato made her choice in mate without knowing it, because of Rin's explaination
    of losing someone you care about when they send you away. I think that was the best punishement for Muchi, but unfortunately Saraku took
    full advantage of Muchi punishement. I hope that it will not come back to haunt her when she gets older.
    I wonder will Saraku be meeting someone special in her life soon. Then she will understand what Makato and
    Tenshin was experiencing when Makato came back home. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 22, 2004
    I am trying to see Sardestdestiny by killing Muchi. Will she be taking the place of Sesshoumaru by which he failed to do that is
    protect not only her immediate family but her extended family as well. Will Saraku be like her father in which kill now and do not
    ask questions latter? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on May 17, 2004
    Beautiful as always.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on May 17, 2004
    great, this is getting so good...though I hope Inuyasha would kill that bad guy but whatever you do I'm sure I will like, keep up the good work or quaility chaps!
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