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By : Sessysama

From ANON - Sci-Jess on May 17, 2004
Wow great chapter. I thought that Sess and Inuyasha would had been at each other throats. It was a great thing that Sess did by healing
Makoto injuries. If he did not Inuyasha would have been out for blood. I like how Rin stood up against Sess on this issue. She is the only
one that understands what Makoto is going through and she wants Makoto to gain back her life and the only way she can if she face what
has happen and learn form someone who understands completely. I hope that Tanshin will be by Makoto always because I believe he will
be the only person she will be close too. How this incident will shape Saraku into a strong demoness only time will tell. Update soon.
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From ANON - New Fan on May 17, 2004
I am sorry I miss the point with Makoto and Muchi. I did not see that Makoto was protecting Tanshin (I think I spell his name wrong) for what Muchin did.
I guess Makoto is like her father in which she will sacifice herself to save the ones she loves. Sess was being overly protective of Rin and for good reason. He
just does not want Rin to revert to her old self when she was scared and frighten of everything. I also believe he so protective because Sess is trying to
protect himself as well becasue Rin did blame him for allowing her to get kidnap and rape. I wonder how Saraku will deal with this news about her mom
when the time comes. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Moon Dog on May 17, 2004
I can't wait until you post again. That was another great chapter. I can't wait to see how Makoto and Inuyasha deal with what Rin has to say. I feel bad for Sesshoumaru though because he doesn't want his mate to have to go thourgh anymore pain than she already has.
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From ANON - anhimals on May 17, 2004
another great chapter from you. i usually don't like oc characters but i guess there is always an exception to every rule u have. u have done such a great job so far. i am a little confuse about how old they are now. can you clear that up for me? i have a feeling that sess won't be letting rin go back to that horrible place by herself. update soon.
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From ANON - melancholy willow on May 17, 2004
Oh. My. God.
This is good. This is damned good. Yeah, got it all now. The hints and clues and all that. Excellent. *frown* sorry, but I'm just too impressed with your work that I cannot really come up with any long and good and, well, 'intelligent' sentences for this review. If I were to see you face to face and talk with you, I would sure be stammering and stuttering out some stupid stuff... But let's not go there... -_-;
When I read the last chapter - I don't know but I was thinking that Makoto/Tanshin situation was somewhat very similar to Rin/Sesshoumaru in "True Companion". I dismissed the thought that this was done deliberately...so, I was quite surprised really when I reour our comment, and the story, of course. So far Saraku doesn't play much after the 'jumping' but you said that this would center around Saraku and Sesshoumaru, right? What about Seto, though (the little pup is sooooo cute!)?
So glad to know that Makoto was not raped by that slime... *grimly* but he 'had been' harassing her, yes? Please, do plan this man's (well, I rather say he's more of a 'thing' than a man, really. But then again, he's one of those horriblopleople we have in our society... *mutter* hate to admit it but maybe he's a weeeee bit better than some of them even... *run out and brush teeth furiously*) death carefully. I would love to see him die in a - ah - creative way. I maybe am a psycho to wish him die in a very horrible way but *shrug* I don't know...I don't care as long as he dies. Kill him. Please.
Hmm...interesting really, about someone (somebody?) luring the 'yasha family out to get to Makoto. Seeing Muchie the though, I don't suppose the guy had much brain in him and *grimace* would the guy willing to go through all those pains just to get his way with her? Perhaps...perhaps, there's something morehat hat made him hate demons so much anyway? He seems to be the only one in this village against Inuyasha and family(ies?).
..... O_o ..... oops. Sorry, I let my tongue - er - fingers run away again. Close and finish now!
As always, you are my most favourite writer! Brilliant work! Really look forward to read next chapter, so please update soon!
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From ANON - HauntedReality on May 14, 2004
Oh, I love the romance, and I love the angst! You write adversity very well. InuYasha is going to be hurt that not only was he away when his daughter was attacked, but she ran to Sesshoumaru. I know they are friends now, but old rivalries die hard. I can't wait to see where you take it next.
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From ANON - pristinediamond on May 14, 2004
I read your other story, and even though I forgot the title :( I was impressed by the way you wrote this fic. There are very few dark fics that I enjoy reading and both of your fics kept me on my feet! I am liking the tha that you seem to mirror Rin's experiences with Akki with Makoto's experiences with Mushi (I think I spelled it right) and I am looking forward to how everyone will deal with this, especially Inuyasha. One question; will Mushi die a short death or a long, painful one? p upp up the good work!
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From ANON - Lady Kagome on May 14, 2004
Wow... such a heart breaking chapter... you seem to be so good at writing these. I have to ask, doesn't it take a lot out of you both pysically and emotionally to write these dark scenes?

Anyway, the writing was good, very captivating, and I look forward to another chapter!
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From ANON - Shaid on May 13, 2004
MORE!!!

Bad at expression tonight. Loved waht you wrote, though. MORE!!!!!
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From amberlinat on May 13, 2004
I love this story, okay was mad that you let him attack her(just becasue I like the story so much) glad he got some of what he deserved. Can't wait until nehap!hap!!!
and your doing a great job, write what you want. Hard to find a story that grips you and takes you up and down.!
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From ANON - Sci-Jess on May 13, 2004
Wow, deep. I can believe you started the story in which the reader get all warm and fuzzy, then all of a sudden,
BAM! All hell broke lose on Makoto. I was so proud of her when she faught back.ust ust was disgusted when Muchi
filled her head with nonsense about the village would hate her and will hunt her down. He madelooklook like it was
her fault. But if the villagers have half a brain they would know that Ma's 's character and realize that she would never
do something that gruesome. I guess the villagers will believe their own instead of a demon. By Makoto going to
Sess and staying with him will this put a strain on Inuyasha and Sess new found relationship? Inuyasha will feel threaten
that Sess is taking care of his daughter instead of him. He might see himself as failure for not protecting his daughter. Will this
also put a strain on Rin and Sess as well? Will the truth of Rin's life before she mated with Sess be relieve to Saraku?? I know
I have alot of questions; I just hope that it will be answered in later chapters. Update soon ^_^.
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From ANON - New Fan on May 13, 2004
Poor Makoto. I was afraid that somthing like that was going to happen. How will Inuyasha and Kagome going to
react to the news. Will Muchi survive the wrath of Inuyasha? How will inc incident effect Rin and Sess. This will bring back
old memory I know they would like to forget. Please update very soon.
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From ANON - Moon Dog on May 13, 2004
I actually enjoyed the love scene, it was about time that some writer did one between Inuyasha's and Miroku's kids. I think that the scene actually strengthens the story, it also helps lead up to when Muchi decides to attack Matako.
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From ANON - anhimals on May 13, 2004
i was just thinking about something when i read your story. its funny how u can write rape scences but u can't right lemons. sorry but that was just a comment. this chapter was a lil dark. i didn't read the part where she got beat up...i couldn't bring myself to read it. but i am glad she didn't get rape right??? cuz thats what sess stated...he couldn'y find any rape scent on her. oh my...now i am all anguish to read the next chapter. update soon. and lets hope that ass can get a beating.
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From ANON - theMaven on May 12, 2004
All right, Saraku! Way to empower your Makoto! It's good that she's leaving IY's family with a favorable impression; I'm sure they'll all need each other later on.
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