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By : Sessysama
  • From amberlinat on May 11, 2004
    my only complaint, wished chap was longer and even more interaction between the girls. mildly upset it's about to turn dark, but well, I guess you must, I'm sure your writing will be good and that is all that matters. Did I tell you already that I love your concept?
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  • From ANON - Lord Essex on May 11, 2004
    I'm intrigued to see this story go darker. Your first installment began incredibly dark and lessened as it neared its end. In this story you have kept it fairly light with even the more intense scenes (like the broken leg or Muchi encounters) staying away from the levels reached during Rin's torture, rape and deaths. So now that we are all settled into a warm happy place you are going rip that all away from us and make the characters suffer once more? Brilliant! Not that I like to see the characters suffer, I just know your writing and I trust your angst-infused story telling skills to really kick things up a few notches when it was already going really well.
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on May 11, 2004
    I know, I know...I skipped last chapter's review. I actually just read it tonight along with six because I've been so busy. I thought what you did with Yoshimi was very interesting, and I am curious to see where her character goes from here. I also liked what you did with Makato though I am still curious about her. I assume her passive behavior was nature versus nurture to a degree, but were there any factors or events that drove her further into that role?

    Oh, and the more I read this story the more I am reminded of a book I have read that you might want to check out. The first is "Ender's World" by Orson Scott Card, and there are other books set in the same reality if you like that one. It is science fiction, and the primary characters are gifted children in an extreme setting--very psychological.

    I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 10, 2004
    What do you mean girlfriend that this fic will start to get dark???!! @_@ I hope that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha will not have
    a set back and be enemies again or something will happen to the Inuyasha's or Sess's family? Could a repeat to what has happen to Rin happen
    to someone else in the Inu-family. What is it with Sess reacting to Saraku explaination of her cousin timidness and how she
    is scared of the headman's son? I hope that you will write a chapter based on Makoto's visit to her uncle. Let Sess experience what
    Inuyasha experience with two weeks with Saraku. I enjoyed Saraku, shst ast a spitefire as well as Sesshoumaru's daughter.
    Well, I enjoyed the story very much and I hope that you do well on finals and update soon.
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  • From ANON - tonia on May 10, 2004
    cool chapter!! please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - mal on May 10, 2004
    ....and you were going to skip all this good stuff in this chapter? Im glad you wrote it!! Keep going and update very very very soon, ok. Ill be waiting and looking for your fic!!!
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  • From ANON - Mischief on May 10, 2004
    Yep, really liked this chapter. Keep 'em coming!
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  • From migele on May 10, 2004
    you are evil.
    I already know that!
    don't go to hard on makoto!

    migi
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  • From ANON - GenesisEve on May 06, 2004
    It's been months since i've even looked at another story to read. And all the ones i thought i would see are replaced with all these new writers, and at least 400 new fanfics just for this anime it seems T_T Guess i have been busy huh? Well, to say the least, a lot of the new stuff i see, if far to mixed up with modern, "american" adventures. Which i would think most people wouldn't want when looking at anything anime. Especially with such things as a Mall in the middle of the country *coughs* Get past that part, and you have to find someone with good writing skills, who can follow characters properly and keep them true to how they were first created by their owners, and yet adapt them to your own story.

    That's why i'm happy i found this little story. Nothing to extreme on either side, whether it's pain, sorrow, sexual encounters, which some are just utterly that, and not to much, fairy tale happiness. It's realistic, it's good, well thought out and nicely written. You know how to spell, use grammar, which in fact a lot of people don't do. And even if you have an editor, or a beta reader, that still alone is an accomplishment. Although i doubt i've ever be a normal review, or reader even of your story,muchmuch as i'd like to be, i think you have a good story here. I very rarely find a Sesshoumaru, Rin pairing that is reasonable and made believeable. Others over do it, and yet, you put in the fact that it can be seen as weird as she is introduced in the anime and manga as a child. You don't hide the fact that it could be seen as weird, and in fact you let your characters agree on that fact.

    In all, i like it, i could read this one from end to beginning easily, howevere toe to lack of free time i have, i doubt i'll be able to. althought that would be a nice one to have now wouldn't? But nevertheless, i have my writing, and some utterly major and ever so annoying corrections to make. In all, do not write a story you really like, when your in a hurry, without even spell checking it, let alone reading through it before posting it. Or you wind up with a full on trilogy that is a good story, has potential, but is in a utter mess as mine. And to think i'm trying to work on my original work at the same time while handling other matters. *rolles eyes* I love your story though, it sit seems other do. you have quite a nice hit count for as many chapters you have. And hopefully i'll be able to finish reading it someday.

    GenesisEve

    a.k.a

    Lasher
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  • From ANON - theMaven on May 06, 2004
    You just gotta love Saraku; she's a take charge kind of gal :D And InuYasha's a trip and a half, hoping Sess and Saraku will do his dirty work, hehe. But what else can he do?

    I'm glad to see we haven't forgotten about the folks at home, too. Sess and Rin have such a different dynamic than Inu and Kag. And how appropriate that Sess has taken in ANOTHER human girl. It's good Saraku will have a playmate. She could only benefit from some more interaction with her peers--human, demon, and hanyou.

    Top-notch storytelling--theMaven :)
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  • From ANON - Sci-Jess on May 05, 2004
    Now that Saraku has meet her relatives and completely made Inuyasha blood pressure go sky high, when will Inuyasha's
    child going to meet Uncle Sess? I think that Sess will take a liking to Makoto because she wieminemind him of his Rin as well
    as Sess has a nack for helping young girls who are being threaten. What direction do you want your story to go. I know that
    you want to go ahead a few years. I just want to know where you want to lead this story? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on May 05, 2004
    This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I am a writer and pretty damn good if I say so myself, and I say your story is good, please continue and I will make sure to read and review. No one reviews on this site like they should
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  • From ANON - Deep Sery¥¨ y on May 05, 2004
    LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT, she will get to play with her cousins!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful, so glad I found this story
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on May 05, 2004
    Love it, see all the interaction with the KIDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOve IR
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  • From amberlinat on May 05, 2004
    I liked, and I think you did, he has a heart awakened by her, he just tries VERY hard to hide it, I must go read this other story also.
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