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By : Sessysama
  • From ANON - stella on April 19, 2004
    another great chapter as usual. i do like seeing sesshy's parental skills and the way he handles his daughter is amazing. please update soon, can't wait for more. your doing a great job.
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on April 12, 2004
    Well, I don't know if this is too obvious, but I'd have to say it is because he would end up being the Lord of the Western Lands even though she is older. Her shoulder is pretty much weighed down with chips right now: Hanyond and as we just read, "weird" for a hanyou) and a girl. And before the child was even born she already had something taken from her to be given to him--even though it was with the best of intentions. I loved Inuyasha's, "It’s not my fault the kid attacks after every little thing!" comment. Hmmm...pot calling the kettle black much? As always, I enjoyed your latest chapter.
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  • From ANON - SessRin2003 on April 12, 2004
    this is a beatiful story, I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on April 12, 2004
    looks good, sounds good, flows together nicely - yep, its a wonderful sequal!!!! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Sci-Jess on April 12, 2004
    I think that Sess words about his daughter will come to haunt him. I referring to the quote he stated about his
    daughter (her pride which she inherit from him will be her downfall). I think those words will come back
    to haunt and hurt SesshoumaIts Its a good think that Inuyasha will be there for his children as well as
    Sess being there for Inuyasha's pups. I think if something bad happens to Saraku, I think that Sess can make
    up for it by being there for Inuyasha's daughter. Smartest thing that Sess did by calling truce. Please update
    soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on April 12, 2004
    Poor Saraku, she is jealous of her new sibiling because she feels that the child will be stronger and have less 'defects' or be more perfect then she
    is. Those things that the villagers said about her and her mother and now the new sibiling just confirm her feelings. How will
    Sess oveme tme that? He never went through what she is going through because he is a full demon. Its bad enough that demons
    said that her blood is dirt and that she is weak because of it, but to have an actual physical effect to confirm what they said
    to her it must be torture for her. Oh please update soon.


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  • From ANON - theMaven on April 12, 2004
    Inu's statement WAS funny. I assume Saraku doesn't like her brother because she thinks HE'S the heir to the Western Lands, now. She probably doesn't like the idea of being replaced. She's been her father's favorite for so long, it's only natural that a little sibling rivalry spring up. And then there's the matter of Seto's appearance versus Saraku's appearance . . . Yeah, I can imagine quite a few brotherly/sisterly conflicts rising up between the two of them.

    As for not getting more reviews on ff.net, have you tried using the new character filter they installed? Now, you can search for a story based on its pairings. Perhaps, if people knew your fic was a Sess/Rin pairing, they'd be more inclined to read and review. I went back and edited all my old fics to include the character filter.
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  • From ANON - stella on April 12, 2004
    i loved the chapter, esp. showing sesshoumaru's growth since the birth of his children. please update soon and ur doing a great job.
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  • From ANON - darkangel1410 on April 12, 2004
    Ok, I haven't been able to review @ ff.net so I had to search 4 ur story here! So count this review among the ff.net reviews. Of course I know why Saraku's mad the kid was a boy, he's gonna inherit her birth right dur. She's obviously a very ambitious child& wants to be lyq her father; not to mention the fact that since 1. she is a hanyou 2. she's a girl hanyou& 3. she's a girl hanyou she feels the need to prove herself. & now she has a new little brother who's gonna get her birthright& is the mirror image of their father...she got a raw deal man, that sux. Scythes r kool but hell I would preferwordword too. N-e-wayz yeah, do I get a surprise, a plushie, somethin'? Or how bout just a new chapter? Update soon! :D. *weee only a month& 2 weeks till my 15th b-day...yeah that was random, don't ask ^_^;*
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  • From ANON - Lady Kagome on April 12, 2004
    Another beautiful chapter from you! I enjoyed reading it, though you left me curious as to why Saraku is so hostile over her brother. The only think I can think is that she is afraid she is going to lose her beloved fathers affections now that he has a son and heir, but, who knows!

    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 12, 2004
    you know... I was just going to jump on and check if any stories had been updated or added and then I saw yours. I liked the first one and now... ::sighs:: you sucked me in. I'm gonna fall asleep in my psych class tomorrow, you know!! But it was kinda worth it.

    Keep writing. I want more! :-)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 07, 2004
    Oh Yeah, I forgot I think Saraku & Makato[?] definitely need to meet, not only do they have the same questions but they can help be each other's support.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 07, 2004
    I don't know about anybody else but it sounds like Sesshoumaru to me. Granted the only difference is he's keeping his anger in check..somewhat, thankfully due to the fact HE has a human for a mate & hanyou daughter.

    Now if Inuyasha can think before he speaks, things can go a little smoother, which brings up this...I think Inuyasha is in character too.

    Also, is it just me or am I seeing a common pattern with Saraku & her yet to-be-born sibling and Sesshoumaru & Inuyasha regarding weapons?

    I just hope Sesshoumaru can talk some sense into her and tell her how FOOLISH pursuing a weapon that is not meant to be yours is...
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  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on April 07, 2004
    THis is a great chapter! I think you did a great job on Sess. I can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter I can't wait to read more!! :)
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  • From ANON - Maiandra on April 06, 2004
    I find myself so thoroughly satisfied after reading every chapter. Meeting Saraku was a great pleasure indeed. Rin witsecosecond child on the way was a nice surprise and even better was the attention paid to and on Sesshomaru. I perhaps like best about him the fact that as a reader, I can feel and almost see his sense of depth and thinking. He's quiet, not much on words, but yet he says so much and each action is a strong statement in itself. I do think he is written very much in character - he has changed and raising a daughter first before a son has a lot to do with that. He's the same Sess we know but there is a underlying sense of pride and sensitivity that is really fresh and I appreciate that :-)
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