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By : Sessysama
  • From ANON - Haunted Reality on April 06, 2004
    I'm not feeling any big diconnect from Seoumaoumaru's personality. I think the biggest difference is just watching him through new eyes since we had been watching the story unfold from Rin's point of view or his own for the bulk of the story. I think you are doing a really good job handling the newly introduced series characters as well. Everyone feels 'right' to me. Also, I enjoy your created characters. My head is already full of predictions as to where this story is heading. :)
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  • From ANON - GreaterBeast_Xellas on April 06, 2004
    Saraku is so kawaii, I cant wait to see what the new pup will be like and Inuyasha meeting Rin.
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  • From ANON - smukydog on April 06, 2004
    The story is great so far good job^_^ but there's one thing that bothers me, what kinda man leaves his wife alone while she's in labor >=( ?
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  • From ANON - Sci-Jess on April 06, 2004
    Do not change Sess character for nothing girl. I like him just fine. Just the idea of him grabbing Inuyasha by the
    neck for insulting him was proof that you did not change him to much. I like how he was affectionate (as affectionate as
    Sess get) towards his daughter. I always tht het he had that in him and his daughter will bring that out because shoks
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    so much like Rin. I also know that beside her mom she the only one that can read him like a book.
    As for Saraku, she being jealous of her new silbling is natural, but I think that because the sibiling will be male, she thinks that
    her father and daughter realationship will change. She might have to the 'lady' she is meant to be and less of a tom boy. I hope
    that Inuyasha daughter will start to fight back as well. And what is this thing that Sess wants Inuyasha to stay for? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on April 06, 2004
    I think that you presented Sesshoumaru character perfectly. I know that in the series he is protrayed as this heartless demon, but
    I think that everyone underestimate him as well as he never was a predicament that requires him to care for someone.
    As for treating his daughter like a male; I think it has to do with Rin and her ordeal.He wants to make sure that his daughter never go through
    what her mother has went through. He had lost all sense of control which in many ways could have killed him; so he treats her
    like a boy so she will always be able to protect herself. As for Inuyasha's daughter. She need to meet Rin in the
    future so that she can explain to her the consequence of not fighting back, not being prepared and being passive. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - theMaven on April 06, 2004
    I don't have a problem with Sess' personality. I think it suits him to a tee. As for his "boyish" treatment of Saraku, Rin, herself, was a tomboy. If it was good enough for Rin, it's good enough for Rin's daughter. You did a really good job with all the characters, and I especially enjoyed the comedic bits. Totosai was hilarious! Oh well, keep up the good work and update whenever you can--theMaven :)
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  • From ANON - stella on April 06, 2004
    i love the story, esp. sakura. keep up the good work
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  • From ladykagome0818 on April 06, 2004
    Thank you so much for the update! I love how your chapters are so long, they are certainly a pleasure to read. I think you did well in keeping Sessy in his character, allowing for the changes raising a daughter can cause.

    Conratulations on your wonderful work! I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Haunted Reality on March 30, 2004
    Ahh...new adventures with the old Rin and Sesshoumaru I've grown to love and admire from your writing. Naturally, the first chapter is mostly just a recap for those of us who read True Companion, but I think it really adds something to the experience at the same time since there wasn't too much Sess POV in the first one. I can't wait to see where you are going with this one. Good luck with your evil paper!
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  • From ANON - theMaven on March 30, 2004
    So . . . that's why Sess didn't return to Rin.

    It seems like everything's off to a good start. Babies are always fun, and given the nature of your last story, I WAS expecting a girl. Someone else Sess has to look after and protect, now. But can he watch out for her better than he believes he watched out for Rin? Only you know the answer to that . . . hehe ^__^
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on March 29, 2004
    YAY we got the BABY!!!! *dances* im liking this so far, its going to be good. yes, ur right. keeping sesshomaru in character is difficult, but if he grew to love and express love, i would say thats not going out of character but ENHANCING or character development--- you have creative rights u know *wink*. anyways, keep up the great work and good luck with u paper due weds. hehe, we all need luck when writing those things.
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  • From ANON - shaid on March 29, 2004
    The summary's not the best. Not the worst either. At least you can spell. ;-) but waht I really liked what your explaination of sessh's indecision about Rin in the previous story. Sessh is a difficult character to get into. His mind does not work like a human's and you must be able to look at things pretty differently to understand him. I think you did a pretty decent job.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on March 29, 2004
    Great start on this sequel. I thought that a baby girl would be a nice change instead of the obvious. I just
    surprise that Sesshoumaru was wrong on his child sex lol. Feeling has he does about hanyou, will have
    a father and daughter realationship. He can not manhanded a female as he would probably done to his son.
    Will his daughter be the spilt personality of her father? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Maiandra on March 29, 2004
    Yeah, I didn't think you would give them a daughter, but it adds to the story a great deal and anyway, predictable stuff isn't exciting ;)

    Great chapter and I liked the foundation you built with Sess. I liked the little look into his mind and thoughts. Thanks and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - stella on March 29, 2004
    aaaaaawwwwww, a baby girl. i'm so happy for them. this is starting off really good and its also good that you incorporated scenes from your past story. good work.
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