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Reviews for Motherhood: A Spring fertility festival spin-off

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Naheta on April 02, 2004
    this turned out really well jeff you did a good job with the birthing part lol and you didnt seem like some dumb guy(lol from me thats a comlpment lol )

    as for kagome and shippo altough i for one would love to see you work in to a more historical mother / child reationship between the two, i really dont think that most readers are ready for that though i may be wrong (yes yes i will say it "i am not always right, although i am a woman. " lol )

    later

    Naheta
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  • From ANON - GreaterBeast_Xellas on April 01, 2004
    I have no problem in kagome using the village way with shippo. I mean if she has to learn about the village why not try it out. I hope that you do put that part in there it would be intersting.
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  • From ANON - Persephone of Abydos on April 01, 2004
    I am a huge fan of all of your fanfics, and I really like this one especially. As for your question at the end of chapter 2, I'm very interested in seeing what would happen if Kagome let Shippou suckle her breasts. But, since Shippou is a demon, I think the phallic region would be more...territorially viewed, and as wou would not be something Shippou's mother would've done. That's jmy omy opinion, though. But I'd really be interested in seeing how you portray the suckling relationship. ^-^
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  • From ANON - KhellendrostheDragon on April 01, 2004
    Hi Jeff! Loved the first chap! I really feel for Kagome...I can imagine how awkward she feels with everything being so different than the present,I'd probably feel the same way.
    I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the rest of the story.

    See you later,
    Khell
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on March 31, 2004
    Great story. Keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - LadyRainStarDragon on March 31, 2004
    Wow, thanks for the reminder on what it was like.
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 31, 2004
    omg Jeffs as always your stories leave me amazed, they are so well written and very imformative, things I never knew I now have an idea about...thanks a bunch I loved this and hope to read another chap soon..great work as usual keep it up..your awsome at this..huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mi:-) :-)
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  • From ANON - angelkitty77 on March 31, 2004
    i have to that this an intresting look at things back then butkeep up it sounds intresting
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  • From unokitsune on March 30, 2004
    ewww, theythey actually do that. I can think of only one world for that, and i hope i'm not wrong, but is this a form of incest. ewwwwwwwww, jeff, i liked your other fic.
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