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Reviews for Motherhood: A Spring fertility festival spin-off

By : jeffshelton
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 03, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - kitsunechan & TheFireCat on July 22, 2006
    All i can say to that last guy is "LOL", shippo isn't perverted... much... if at all. but he is very young i guess.

    thefirecat/my sister:"yeah lol to you 'youneedhelp'. I'd let shippo nurse from me anytime, he a very nice kitsune. but kagome really is wasting her time with inuyasha, maybe she can get some real attention from shippo even if its just in a motherly way."

    and very nice/cute story jeffs
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  • From ANON - youneedhelp on October 31, 2005
    Jeff or what ever, This is about the most dumbass thing I have every heard of!! I don't care where you got your info. Oh and don't worry I won'y read another chapter!! You should not ask people to review! However, I know a bit about history also! Yes women can create breast milk without having to have had a child and many did this back then to help the children who lost their mothers. BUT, you have crossed the line, because letting others do this at Shippo's age is just wrong and it encourages the wrong attitude towards women! Women are NOT objects of affliction. So, Kagome should have been smacked acrossed the head for even suggesting she do something like this. Inuyasha is right! Shippo should be spanked and he should be left with another family because Kagome IS NOT all he has! Im not a violent person! but in this instant Inuyasha had a right to put both in their places, especially that perverted little Shippo! So, if you want to talk about what took place "back Then" know this, women and children were often punished for silly ass things and this was surely considered silly!!
    Man do you have issues and I mean major issues with women!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on July 21, 2005
    I must admit this one weas well done, could you perhaps do a sequil were Songo perhaps plays a part or a stroy line were Kogoma figures out its Songo thats been doing it? I like stroies about families and stuff.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 14, 2005
    you have gotten alot of info on this birthing thing and its really interesting its making me think about how different our lives are now and how much we really do depend on technology and advanced medicines to help us.ja ne till next chapir
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  • From on February 22, 2005
    dude can u lik continu further on an put lik somethng that inuyasha had a last straw porsay an lik gets hella angry or scares everybody in fear becuz alot of bad shit happn to him man do somethng for him lik he throws tetsaiga an gets even with everybody (i lik fear stuff ) you kno kicks there ass or soemthng. and when kagomes sits him alot do somethng lik inuyasha wanting to be sat more so that he could die or hes trying to commit suicide an stuff so yeah. i would be very grateful if u did man.
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  • From ANON - Jazzy on February 20, 2005
    Your story is so cute . will this go on between Kagome and Shippo

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  • From ANON - Zera on February 04, 2005
    this was a great way to end the story although i would rather InuYasha more accepting but then again the way you had him in the story is the way he is mostly to act.... are you adding more to this spin off??
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  • From ANON - ssj2gohan500 on July 31, 2004
    great fic

    you should have kagome masturbate shippo and also have him join in with inu and kagome for a threesome
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  • From ANON - ustukushii on July 01, 2004
    P.S. what Kagome is doing is not truly breast feeding, as no feeding is happening. It would be more accurate to call it comfort suckling or something like that.
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  • From ANON - Biggles on June 16, 2004
    I will admit that I did find parts of the story a bit disturbing to my western sensibilities, but none the less, you did the research and have written a well thought out story. Good job. It was enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - Aryun on June 13, 2004
    In my one history class, my professor gave me a wonderful little set of things to remember while doing research. One of then that makes me notice some of what you've been stating is "The source is right - unless it's wrong. You must have a reason for rejecting one source in favor of another" Simply stated, what you read is correct and true, unless you have a justified and logical reason for dismissing it. Anyway, I have throughly enjoyed your writing!! And I really enjoyed this approach to eastern child rearing... All you see in several thousand Inu-Yasha stories are pretty much western child rearing (by both of them, Ironically) in the Waring States Period... Somehow, I think that would make them an outcast for not doing it the proper way.
    ~ Cat
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2004
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  • From ANON - Mija on May 05, 2004
    omg Jeffs another wonderfull Chapter..soo full of stuff I had no clue about..I really enjoy those things about your stories they are fanfics but much more and you can actually learn something by reading them and still enjoy the story as well..although thinking that Mrs H actually thought about Sota that way was a bit odd, but going with the story line not too odd..great talk between them would love to see Inu's reaction if Kagome began to let Shippo breast feed and wonder if Kags ever did that with Inu and Shippo wanted to join in, would be strange but I think it would be a wonderfull read as most of your stories are..I love em...hope to read an update soon much huggles and smiles a fan and friend Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - KhellendrostheDragon on May 05, 2004
    Wow Jeff, I must say tho thoroughly impressed. I never even considered those concepts occuring within Kagome's family. And the differences between the past and now it is truly mind boggling...makes you wonder what type of society we live in now. Great job! I look forward to reading the next chapter.

    See you next time;
    Khell
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