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By : Whitewolfayame
  • From ANON - kit-chan on July 24, 2004
    T-T *crying into her hands*

    ohhh I hope kouga hurries it up and reassures ayame that he loves her!!!
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  • From ANON - InuYashas_Slut_Sango on July 23, 2004
    O.O

    OMK (Oh my Kam Mor Mortal Kombat if I'm in a silly mood)!.... *Sniffles* Poor Ayame!.... *cries* Damn that Naraku! That's....that's so sad.... *whimpers and then bawls*

    Chibodee: It's just a fic Bonnie, calm down....

    NUUU!!! That was sad! Good, but sad! I'm almost freakin' crying here! And you said it "could've been better"! Please, quit underestimating your writing abilities! This is great! Well not great that Ayame lost her pups, but you know what I mean. ^.^;;

    Can't wait to read chappie 12 when you have it finished! ^.^ Ja ne!

    P.S. Thanks for the review again!
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  • From ANON - kit-chan on July 23, 2004
    *TEARFUL* NARAKU YOU EVIL BASTARD! KILLLL KILL KILL!
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  • From on July 22, 2004
    Awww...so sad.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 22, 2004
    well, i guess now we know why your penname is sorrowfulayame. that frickin' bastard!! i really really hope that he gets castrated sloooowwwlllllyyyy for this. poor poor ayame. i mean, now their whole relationship is built on lies, nothing that happened was really of their own violition. and now miscarriage? ::winces:: that really is terrible. angst coming out the watoozy....
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  • From ANON - Nanoda on July 22, 2004
    This is a really good story. Ayame, Hakkaku and Ginta are some good characters, and so few people use them. I'm only up to chapter 6 right now, but the only thing I dislike at all is... the smirking! I know Kouga's a cocky bastard and all, but he's doing it 18 times in chapter 6! Now, I'm no expert on female psycology, but it seems to me that even if Kouga is sexier than a cross between Mel Gibson and Sean Connery, he'd better show a bit more humility before he gets a knee in the groin. o_O
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on July 21, 2004
    lol...love the little part at the end of this chapter.

    "Kouga, you can't expect to just sweat talk me everytime we get into a fight. That won't work on me." She said firmly as he smirked devilously and whispered in her pointed ear. Moments later she blushed furiously and swatted his arm.

    "NO! won won't work either!" Ayame cried as Inuyasha's ears twitched.

    Overall great chapter, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on July 20, 2004
    Chapters 9 and 10 abs absolutely adorable and very funny!! Poor Kouga, he takes so much abuse, even if he does deserve it at times!
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  • From ANON - kit-chan on July 20, 2004
    XD ahhh i love kouga/ayame! this chapter was fun! more please1
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  • From ANON - Kit-chan on July 18, 2004
    I LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOO MUUUUCH!!!!

    I'm a huuuge kouga/ayame fan and this fic is sooo well written! Finally kouga sees ayame is WAYY better than kagome! Kagome really is no fun in my opinion =_= dun like her at all!

    I hope you update sooooon *nudge nudge nudge*

    Kouga is being sucha posessive asshole though =_= oh well i'll just chalk that up to hormones and his lack of control during mg seg season ^^;;;
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 15, 2004
    ::SIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH:: kouga.......oh, good lord, why do you say these things?!?! she should go all hormonal on him!! ooh, beware the PMS bitch- he SO deserves it. especially if she's pregnant! Have her morning sickness all over him. jerk. she was just trying to stop him from fighting.if he's so nervous about pups, what the hell was he doing starting an arguemnet?!?! how is ayame suppose to properly take care of the pups if he gets himself killed, hmm?? no, he didn't think of that. asswipe. AND TO TOP IT ALL OFF- he sends his underlings to go apoligize??? oooh, your fine ass is toast, my good wolf-boy! man, i hope he doesn't get laid for a good long time for this stunt. (can you tell i don't like insensitie males right now? yeah, i think you got that.)
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  • From ANON - InuYashas_Slut_Sango on June 09, 2004
    Yay! I finally get to review this! ^_^

    Yeah, this is a very good start, building up the suspense and getting in a bit of humor in it too. Kudos to you!! ^_^ Really, I'm going to have to make my friends review this. Shishi and Shini probably will, since this IS the fic that got my hooked on those two!

    I'm currently trying to write a Kouga/Ayame one, but I don't think it's that good...oh well. I'll just try harder then! ^_^ I would've picked a Ayame pen name, but my friend Darkstorm Shinobi, who provides the inspiration for half the fics and introduced me to Ayame, really, really, REALLY suggested on this name, and I figured if it'd make him shut up, then what the hell. But, I ramble.

    Very, very good. I really don't think there's no other way to describe it than it's the best Kouga/Ayame fic here! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on April 10, 2004
    VERY GOOD! I like Kouga's gruff and rough attitude, it makes him so sexy! Update soon!
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