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Reviews for The Transformation

By : Atropa
  • From loretta537 on May 25, 2008
    this was good, but i want to know what happens next? after all they still have to go back home and ddeal with things there. shippo has no clothes, most of rin's were torn, and it would be obvious to the demon papa's noses what their kids have been doing.
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  • From loretta537 on March 17, 2008
    this was great, however i would like to have kagome, inuyasha, sango, and especially sesshoumaru's reactions.
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on October 01, 2005
    cute pairing!! Oh shippou is so cute as a grown youkai (grins) He got Rin, lucky fox!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2005
    very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good
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  • From ANON - SerenityFox on July 27, 2005
    Wow! What a cute Rin/Shippou story! *hugs* It's so adorable!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2005
    very cute. i like it.
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  • From ANON - Goeleven on February 16, 2005
    It was actually pretty good please write a sequal.
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  • From ANON - vampmistress76 on January 24, 2005
    Aww, this was so sweet! And well done. I'm impressed! So far I like all of the fics I've read and would like to make a request if possible? Would you mind writing a Kurama/Keiko fic for me? There are so few of them out there and I love the way you wrote Kurama in 'Boundaries'. Do you think it would be possible to do that? Email me if you don't mind cause I'd love to hear from you. Thanks!

    Rose aka vampmistress76
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  • From ANON - richonyx on October 10, 2004
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I hate Sess/Rin pairings--they seem too incestuous. But Shippou/Rin makes perfect sense, and you were masterful in explaining his "growth spurt" and their mating. It was so kawaii! Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - inuyasha_m8 on September 07, 2004
    please make a sequal or more chapters or something.please.great story.
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  • From ANON - Lady_Inu on August 28, 2004
    Hey this is a really cool story. Actually all of your stories are. I was wondering if maybe you could make a sequel to this. Like a lil story about their life after the mating. You know having to face Inuyasha and Sesshomaru and having kids of their own. It should be real cute to see lil So alo all grown up and trying to be a father. ^^ Anyway good story and keep up the good work yea yeah can you respond if you decide to do anything a it. it. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Zelinko on August 07, 2004
    Very well written and I like Shippou and kitsune in general And this now is one of my favorites!
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  • From ANON - Van-Stolin on June 27, 2004
    I really liked this story, though in your conversations, you could use better puncuation. Inclosing spoken words in quotes would be great.

    Well, I must say that I am a full supporter of the Shippou/Rin pair and I like your description of Shippou in his adult form. Keep of the great work.
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  • From ANON - Ymanetta on June 17, 2004
    I thought that was so cute. I wonder what Inu and Sess have to say about their mating. You know tha should be your second chap.
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  • From ANON - Sammm on April 20, 2004
    OMG! That was so cute. Lol. I loved. People should make more stories about Shippou as an adult. There si so much potential there. Lol. I have no room to talk since I don't write alot but yeah... ::cough-all-you-other-damn-people-out-there-writing-Inuyasha-stories-cough.:: Yeah well...I'm sure someone will write something this cute and awesome. ::glare at computer screen.::
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