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Reviews for Things Never Meant to Be

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Mythical Child on May 20, 2004
    This will be my first ever review on AFF.

    Gosh, I'm so gushed with emotions for this fic.

    I love the way it started and ended. Had a lot to do with emotions, and that's what makes it all the more perfect.

    I can't tell you how much more I like Sess. He's so... perfect.

    I have to confess that I was carried with emotions when he kicked her out and she had to go through such troubles. I felt sad with her. Heart pinching. But I always knew he watched after her.

    Sess has his ways with things.

    Loved how you tied everything together. Genius work.

    This story is so romantic!

    I love it!
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  • From inuyashagemini on April 16, 2004
    that was very good and i like it a lot. i wounder did she get the baby she wanted.
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  • From ANON - Jace on April 15, 2004
    Awwww... such a cute and wonderful ending. Thankyou Sooo much for sharing this with us, it was well done and lov lovely.
    I look forward to reading more of wor works.

    -(Jacie)-
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  • From ANON - Setryochi on April 15, 2004
    @_@ so good. so good. So good! SO GOOD!!!! XD I loved it. One of THE best Rin/Sesshoumaru stories on the net! Wow.

    I mean WOW.

    Their love-making scene was good, and realistic. *hugs u tightly* THANK YOU! You are the only author I've found that writes a realisitc lemon scene for a virgin! *squeals*

    Keep up the great work! I hope to read more from you!

    Set-chan
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  • From ANON - SillyGiChan on April 14, 2004
    I really, really liked this. It was very well written and you played the story just right so that the final chapter was a reward well earned. I'm not saying the other chapter sucked, by any means, they were wonderful, they built up to the end quite nicely, dragging me along with the flow of words. If this story was a car and I was being towed behind it, I would have run to catch up, even if I'd been unconcious. Bravo, I should like to read some more of your works. =3
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  • From ANON - winofroever on April 14, 2004
    keke, i had my doubts at first.. since i'm not a big rin/sess supporter ^^;;; but this story was definitly interesting! hmm sort of makes me think of that pairing a little differently
    great job with this fic! i hope to read more of your stories
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 14, 2004
    ::sighs:: OK, words are not cmoing and I'm seriously getting teary eyed here. ::sighs snifsniffs:: Maybe it's just because my BF and I were talking more aobut getting married next fall. Or maybe it has something to do with us talking about wanting babies and all that wonderfully mundane domestic stuff.

    But the ending was perfect and really affected me.

    ::hugs and sighs:: It was great. Thank you.
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  • From Strawberries on April 13, 2004
    Thanks so much for the last two chaps. They were most enjoyed. The love scene was perfect for this story. I was like staring at the screen hooked on every word. simply sweet and tastefully done. I am looking forward to the sequel.


    Ras~~~
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on April 13, 2004
    Nice ending.

    Shadiyaray
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  • From ANON - A.J. on April 13, 2004
    Thanks again for updating so soon. The last two chapters were wonderfully done! I will definitely look to mediaminer and fanfiction.net to read your other works. In the mean time I'll anxiously await the sequel to this fanfic.
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  • From ANON - SoumaoumarusMistress on April 13, 2004
    OMG you are soooooooo evil!!!! How could you leave such a cliffy?!?!?!?!!?!?!?! This story is awesome i love it, you have me totally hooked!!!!!! I can't wait until you post more!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more and update ASAP!!!!!
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  • From ANON - me on April 13, 2004
    hurry add more oh by the way demons dont marry they mate
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  • From Strawberries on April 13, 2004
    Just read the first chapter and I loved it. I love how you keep Sesshoumaru in character. So perfect. And Rin is so sweet. She has still retained that childlike innocence about her even though she is older. Nice beginning, now, I will continue on.


    Scarecrow
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  • From ANON - stella on April 13, 2004
    awwwwwwww, the suspense is killing me. i want more. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - A.J. on April 13, 2004
    Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating so soon! I just loved the new chapters and you transitioned Rin from child to adult. (Also on a more personal note I wanted to say thanks for thanking me in your A/N. I totally made my week!!) I'll be keeping my eye out on new chapters and please let me and your other fans know if you post stories on other websites. Keep up the great work!
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