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By : Kyattochan
  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2004
    very nice story, the plot is good, use of charactors is excellent and your commitment to completion is impressive. good to know you check your fan mail adn respond as well. ^-^
    mwer
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on August 19, 2004
    This fic is frickin awesome! It took me nearly a week to read all of it though. I only had a couple hours every other day. There's just one thing I don't get. How did Inuyasha and Kagome go from full-youkai transformation where "All hell broke loose" as you said, to staring at a ceiling behind, what I can only assume, was the stone guardian doors? Did you skip a chapter in updating, or just forget that's where you were in the plot? Just curious. So anyway. Update soon 'cause it rocks!
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  • From ANON - Lissa on August 19, 2004
    I really like this story, but I am confused. In the last chapter wasn't Inuyasha Sealed? And now it is like it didn't even happen, and Sesshoumaru had left Kagome and Inuyasha and went ahead and now he is with Them? Like I said just a little confused by this chapter. Overall a great story, though.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on August 19, 2004
    So glad to see an update on a terrific story! Ah, real life gets in the way of good fanfiction, how understandable!

    I'm still a bit confused...is there a missing chapter between "Demon Tamer" and "Stalking the Hunter"? I mean, at the end of "Demon Tamer," Inu grabs his sword and presumably transformsk...k...and the next scene involving Inu in "Stalking the Hunter" is him being all normal with everyone while the girls gape at the illusion of a beautiful ceiling.

    I was hoping that Inu would get a chance to reaffirm his mating mark on Kags...after all, she did try to remove it and their link. And I'm sure Kags is just dying to comment/tell him off about Kikyo. Even if you did redeem Kikyo before she died, Kags has to wonder at the depth of Inu's feelings for his "ex." And would he really attack/rape Kagome in his full youkai state as Sango suggested? I tend to think that he'd definitely recognize her as his mate and wouldn't hurt her. Maybe a l a little rough love but not to the point of acutally causing her pain or making her bleed. After all, Sango may know a lot bout demons in general but Inu does love Kags....doesn't matter if he's human, hanyou, or full demon...don't think his state would change his feelings of love or desire for her.


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  • From ANON - AngelHeart2122 on August 16, 2004
    I loved the chapter but it seems like we are missing something. I know that chapter 32 isn't the one before 35 because if it is then I don't get it. Don't get me wrong I am REALLY happy that you updated finally but I do believe we are missing a chapter or something. Well I am glad that you are able to update again and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Veil of Illusions on August 16, 2004
    I'm glad you're back and posting again. From a fellow horse back rider my deepest sympathies for the jump accident at the show. Just reading it made me cringe. Have fun at your confrence. I loved the chapter. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - sutashii on August 11, 2004
    Ummm I was just wondering why One chapter Kagomes' screaming for help and Inu is pinned to a tree... and two authors notes later... There in a great hall and with Sessh, Miroku,, an, and Sango no less... WHAT HAPPENED!!! *whines* I love this!! I dont want to miss a chapter!!! please fix it Im in suspense!!!
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  • From ANON - jen on August 11, 2004
    Umm...I'm not sure, but I think you're missing a chapter. 33 is titled Demon Tamer, but it's an author note. And 33 and 35 don't fit together, like there's something left out. Good story
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  • From ANON - snowfall on August 11, 2004
    Aaawwww! We didn't see how Inu and Kag saved each other in the garden! Could you add that to the beginning of this last chapter? I hate being a pain in the ass, but I know you would do something really cool with it. I love this last chapter. Rock, paper, scizzors, and panties on the altar. And, Sess's comment that Kohaku wants to die. You are just too awesome. I can't wait for your next post. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Moon Dog on August 10, 2004
    I'm glad to see that your back. I hope your doing okay, you seem to be very accident prone.
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  • From ANON - Xenia on July 31, 2004
    I fell behind in my fanfic readinain.ain... and actually didn't miss too much here! *L* So at the risk of sounding like a total weirdo, I'm kinda happy you didn't update too much while I was gone, or else I would've felt like a huge jerk not reading/reviewing for so long! :) Can't wait for the next chapter... but won't nag you either ('cos I know you're going as fast as you can!) Hope your PC situation works out alright...!
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  • From ANON - aku_neko on July 25, 2004
    dang. I was browsing the Inuyasha fics, when i stumbled acrosst this one. At first i had my doubts about reading it, however after these past two chapters, i'm hooked. The bit about Hojo was great; so true! I'm trying to imagine sweet lil' Rin with sex toys. FUNNY!
    anywhos, this story is really, really interesting. I want to keep on reading.

    uberkudos!!!

    =^o^=
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  • From ANON - DarkImmortal on July 19, 2004
    Wonderful job so far, i can't wait till the Chapters staommiomming again. was "demon tamer" sappsed to end with just the Authors note?
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  • From ANON - emily on July 19, 2004
    what happened?? the story was so amazing and then you just stopped writing...i really hope that you have decided to discontinue the story but if you have can you post a AN??
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  • From ANON - snowfall on June 29, 2004
    Well, I have been so very patient. When do we get to see Inuyasha rescue Kagome? Please update. Okay, I'm on my knees begging. How embarrassing. This is one of my very favorite stories.
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