Click Here!

Reviews for The Centre

By : Kyattochan
  • From ANON - Veil of Illusions on May 10, 2004
    I love the new chapter! I read your author's note a few minutes ago and all the teasers where cruel. Very well written but evil. Please update soon. I'm so pleased to hear the story is past the half way point. Keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady Kagome on May 09, 2004
    I am glad that you enjoyed the link I gave you :) I knew that you would appreciate it!

    Then again, I'm not surprised that I haven't come across more sites promoting your story, it is truly fantastic! And to hear that you have not written before this is astounding. Your story holds things that some of mine could never, and I am a blasted English major!

    I look forward to the next chapter, you have my intrest piqued with the little teasers. Especially the Kikyou one... wow, that could get really interesting!

    Alrighty, got to go, but don't worry, I will be back to read more as always!
    Report Review

  • From on May 09, 2004
    This is a wonderful fanfiction. It's a shock to read that this is your first work, because it's simply amazing. The entire time i was reading this I had a goofy smile on my face. I'm not a particularly large fan of lemons, but I just love this one! I love that you write sex scenes as animalistic; something you'd see on the Discovery channel. Referring to the females as bitches during sex is a nice touch. Keep up the good !

    !

    -Sashi
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Xenia on May 09, 2004
    You're very welcome! :D All of the praise was truly deserved, because your story has given me more enjoyment than any other I've read (and I've read some very good stories! :)). I can't believe this is your first story! Now I'm even more impressed! *L* :)

    And the previews for the next chapter look great! I can't wait to read it :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Fate on May 09, 2004
    Just a glimpse! ARGH! Please hurry, please hurry, please hurry! Exams can be made up, classes can be taken again, but the agonies I suffer waiting for the next chapter may be my undoing! (Just kidding.) Good luck on your exam and I will wait patiently. (Sigh)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kellie on May 09, 2004
    Ohh, that is such a teaser. Now I can't wait for the next chapter. And Poor Kagome. Whats going to Happen between Inuyasha & Kagome?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Fate on May 08, 2004
    I've set my own science project aside to finish ready this awesome fic. Please, please, please, update soon! I love it! And please let the girls get some happy-contented pleasures in there!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady Kagome on May 08, 2004
    Ah hah! Another chapter!

    Would you like to hear something interesting? The other day I came across a live journal community dedicated to promoting fan fiction. When I looked at the first entry someone was promoting a story that sound just like yours, only they had forgotten to put the title. When I clicked on the link, low and behold "The Centre" popped up!

    So, not only do you now have people on AFF supporting you, you have people on livejournal.com supporting you! (By the way, the person promoting your story goes by xenia, on aff.net as well. I believe she has reviewed before!) Here is a link if you would like to go bask in your glory! http://www.livejournal.com/community/inuyasha_fanfic/104905.html

    On to this chapter! I like all the different view points switching around. And throwing Miroku and Sango in with Yura of the Hair was quite interesting! But, poor Sesshoumaru! Though I know you won't kill him off. ;) Right... right!!!!

    I look forward to reading your next chapter, I get so excited when I see that you have updated this story. But, don't let your other work fall behind just to appease us readers. Some of us do have small amounts of patience. We just enjoy the adrenaline rush when we see that you have added on!

    Good job!

    Lady Kagome
    Report Review

  • From ANON - AngelHeart2122 on May 08, 2004
    I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. You are a great writer. I am glad you wrote this chapter instead of doing your work but make sure and get it done now so you can write more soon. Good luck. ^_^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - jazzyca on May 08, 2004
    lol, he ran into a wall. GO SENIOR WEEK! i got 16 days left of school! yay!!! great chapter. sess better not die for good!!!! lol, i can't get over the fact that inu ran into a wall. lol. ok, great chapter. update soon. GO PROCRASTINATION!!!! one time i procrastinated so much i started a report the day after it was due.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Fate on May 08, 2004
    LOL! I've only read up to chapter eight so far, and I'm crying laughing. Great story! I'm eagerly reading the rest!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hanyou Slave on May 08, 2004
    Sess/Rin so heart wrenching. I hope you don't plan to leave us there for long. My poor Sessy. The picture you paint is sooo vivid. Tears :( Please do not make us wait for too long. I don't care if it must be a short chapter. Oh Sessy.............
    Report Review

  • From ANON - snowfall on May 08, 2004
    Thank you. Appreciate your efforts. If I could only get my next chapter finished. Good luck with the exams. And, who says you can't post in Japan?
    Report Review

  • From on May 07, 2004
    I am absolutely captivated by your storyline! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Keep up the excellent writing (I can't wait to see what happens next!)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady Kagome on May 06, 2004
    Oh! Good chapter! I like how you wrote the interaction between the Inuyasha/Kagome scene and the Kouga/Ayame scene! Very good, but, you left us hanging with what is going to happen next! Thanks for not taking overly long to get this chapter out! It was a great read!

    Keep up the awesome work!! :-D
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!