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By : Kyattochan
  • From ANON - snowfall on May 06, 2004
    Thank you. Don't stop. I don't need to tell you again what a great writer you are. So just keep on writing.
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  • From ANON - laura on May 06, 2004
    i love love love this story! the depth in which the characters have been developed is spectacular, also you've laid the world in which they reside out with great care and detail that allows for a almost film like quaility. the fact that everyone isn't after Kagome to posess the shikon no tama is a refreshing first. each character was given plausable personal conflicts and their own bit of sexual kink, all in all, i am in awe of your writing. please continue this story.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on May 03, 2004
    ::stares at screen::
    GOD DAMNIT!! you did it again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    argh.......i'm scowling ferociously at you! see??? ::scowl:: Ho tha that for scary??? yeah, eat those muffins!
    right
    so- great chapter. only problem is that the group got taken care of so quickly. beyond that, it was great. adn i HATE that bat grandfather. he's such an ass! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Xenia on May 03, 2004
    *sings the "best story EVAH" song* "Your story... is the best story evvvvvvvvvvvvah!"

    Sorry, I just spent hours sitting here reading this because I just couldn't stop once I started. You're an AMAZING writer with a gift for intrigue and action and romance and sex and humour and... all kinds of good stuff like that. Crapsticks, this story has an elentlent plot, excellent dialoguxcelxcellent smut - it's got EVERYTHING. Why are you not world famous and making millions by now?! When you make your first million... can I have some? *smiles*

    I'm not just kissing your butt, either. This is seriously AMAZING.
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  • From ANON - Soranji on May 02, 2004
    I love this story
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  • From ladykagome0818 on May 02, 2004
    Yay, 2 more chapters! I was so excited when I saw you had updated! I reallye the this story, you have a very creative imagination! Again, thank you for the shout out in the chapter before last! I understand why you had to take it down, it's okay! At least I got to see it!

    Again, I feel as if I am repeating myself here, but please please post another chapter soon! :-D Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Veil of Illusions on May 02, 2004
    Great chapters! I liked the reference to Xanth, those are great books. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Hanyou Slave on May 01, 2004
    Hits and Reviews are the warms fuzzy rewards of authors.Your story deserves more than it is getting. You need to change your summary. It doesn't do justice to your story. Try this "Naraku holds Sess & Inu prisoner for 50 years to breed. Mikos Kag & Rin rescue. Battles and Lemons ensue. M/F; San/Mir-Inu/Kag-Sess/Rin ." I guarantee you will get better results.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 30, 2004
    I love this story. I even like to re-read it. However, I am always getting kicked off because of too many connections. Would you mind if I printed it? Thanks for updating. Can't wait til the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ~A~ on April 30, 2004
    Um, maybe my computer i screwy, but there is no Chapter 25, just the author's note. I think something may be wrong =P
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  • From ANON - Lady Kagome on April 30, 2004
    Aww, ts! s! I was having such a crappy morning, and then I saw you posted and just had to come look, and you gave me a shout out! Much thanks to you! But as much as I like that... wheres the story!? hehe. Oh, and about the scrolling thing, it has absolutely nothing to do with how you post it, it's AFF gone wonky. Sometimes the sites settings will change and screw with story settings. Nothing to worry about! :)

    I hope to see an update for one of my favorite stories soon... ::hint hint!:: :) Thanks again for making my morning that much brighter!
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  • From ANON - emily on April 29, 2004
    i love this fanfic!!! i read a lot of them and this one is the only one worth reviewing in a long time...and you update!!!! i love you!!! but...and i dont want to bother you...now i dont what format you write it in or what but you used to write it and it fit on my screen...but the last 2 chapters have been larger than the screen so you have to scroll right to left to read every line...i dont know if you could even fix that but it would be cool...thanks! if you dont i guess it doesnt really matter...i wouldnt stop reading it or anything! its so good
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  • From ANON - drake220 on April 29, 2004
    hey. souta carries a laptop in his coat? like michael from witch hunter robin? that boy has got the freakin coolest computer on the face of the earth. nothing beats it. the chapter was cute. the blowjob thing was funny. sago's dad is plain freaky. i don;t know what train he jumped off but dear god....talking about her sex life....god, my parents do that and its not funny. she has my extreme sympathies
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  • From ANON - Veil of Illusions on April 28, 2004
    Hey! I love your story. I will rarely if ever start a story with more than 6 chapters posted but even though yours had 23 when I started I wanted to check it out. After I read the first chapter I just had to read all o. G. Great writing. I hope you update soon!

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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 28, 2004
    Totally awesome. Wish you could post faster, but alas, I know you can't spend all day writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love Souta's character. I just can't believe how you mix humor, sex, and seriousness. Keep up the good work!
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