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Reviews for In a Different Light

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Sessy-sama on May 05, 2004
    Ever so happily avoiding two papers due, oh, in 9 hours and you pop up and give me a chapter. How nice of you. So, let's see, where shall I begin...The last thing I read: Good Inu, Bad Inu. Good Inu: Calling Sessy Fluffy, much too hilarious. Bad Inu: Saying Rin wasn't doing it right...like she wasn't worried about that already. I am seeing evil bastard headman being ever so violently and painfully dispatched to all of our happiness. Seeing evil part and Rin killing him, but that would not be good for Rin's mental state, since though she isn't too fond of most humans cause they are bastards to her, she isn't one for killing. But at the same time, new sheath, easy access, evil bastard running at her...sword go in. Oh well, this is my twisted mind going and yours, I am sure, will be much better suited. My demented mind loves tourturing the minds of others, makes great conflict in a story. Anyway, I like how detailed you are making the rituals, but I was slightly confused when you mentioned two bonding rituals. I thought it was just the marking and the, for best description, longevity bonding. Has this second bond been mentioned or must we wait to find out? Rather curious about the 'errand' Jaken was sent on. Nothing more to say on it though, just curious. Let's see, anything else...oh yes, Sessy and the boys. That was great and well done, I mean, the women were teasing but Sessy surely was curious about the strength of his bloodline after being mixed with humans. Inu was of course an example, but the children are definatly better ones since they are still growing and maturing. Sigh, i need to get back to my papers now though. Keep writing, maybe put up a new chapter now, get me out of working again....sigh, not gonna happen.
    Ja
    Sessy-sama
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on May 03, 2004
    i like it very much
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  • From on May 02, 2004
    i like it very much. you are very talented
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  • From ANON - Sessy-sama on April 30, 2004
    As usual, well written and strong. Rin's outburst of uncertainty really pulls the reader for a loop since she doesn't show such ferocity to rejecting the courtship until then. Though the way you did it was very logical, seemings she unconsciously tells the version of the dream that would show Sesshoumaru and herself the doubt she felt but was too intimidated and too excited to speak about. I very much like the way you portrayed Sesshoumaru concerning that. Many would make is ever so mushy...Sesshoumaru is not mushy. His admission that he loves Rin was the best because of course once he says it, that is it, it is done and known and permanent. Very well, patiently waiting for the next chapter.
    Sessy-sama
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  • From ANON - stella on April 30, 2004
    whoo, it got a tad steamy, but i also loved the interaction w/rin and sesshomaru dealing w/her insecurites, great chapter and can't wait for me
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  • From ANON - Mischief on April 30, 2004
    Excellent! I love this story sooo much. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 30, 2004
    This story was good, and now it's even better...I love their courtship...I was getting mad with Rin a little bit, thinking that she wasn't worthy of Sessy love. But, the way you had Sesshoumaru explain he feeling to her ...was perfect....Now, I know you would tell...but, I have been thinking of our old friend the village headman( I can't think of his name now.) will he be making the appearance again to ruin Sess and Rin love affair or what???......I love them and I want them to be happy, but I got a feeling that you are planning something for them...I know Sesshoumaru can handle anything ...but their lives seem just a little to perfect right now..UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 30, 2004
    ::sighs:: wow... fun fun fun. While reading this, I kept thinking of something my creative writing professor said after reading my unfinished fan fic. "Everyone loves alien sex." Now, I'm not sure if he was unaware that Sessh was a demon and not an alien, but I belieive he may have meant that sexual situations with non human partners are something that facinates us all.

    That said, MORE!!!!! we want more, maven. PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on April 30, 2004
    Wow. Im speachless. Yeah im gonna leave it at that (giggles).Update again soon plz ^.~ I dont know how long I can wait for the next chapter!
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  • From migele on April 30, 2004
    there are storys one can't get eough of.

    this ist one for sure!
    good thinking with the hymen. I'm using that way to in some stories.

    migi-chan
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on April 30, 2004
    All I can say...WOW. LOVED IT!
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  • From ANON - Jaxomruth on April 30, 2004
    I really love your stories. You write some the very best Rin/Sess stories I have read. They deal with the real lemslems such a match would create, both on a social level and an emotional one. To often writers gloss over the problems and confusion that such a romance would create. These problems must be dealt with not shoved the in back corner. I realize that a great deal of the character detail must come from your own mind since the manga and anime gives us so little insight on Rin and Sess. Yet despite this you have manage to matain as true to the original character as possible. Your lemon scenes are tasteful done and blend with stories unlike so many writers wust ust fill their stories with sex rather substance. Good job and I can't wait to read the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Night Child on April 28, 2004
    Hehehe! I find this -hilarious-! Don't ask, because I truly do not know why I do! I REALLY encourage you to keep writing this fic! It is SO great~
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  • From ANON - Tori on April 28, 2004
    This was nice. I don't usually like Sess/Rin fics because it's hard to write a love scene without Sess being totally OOC, but your doing a wonderful job and I can't wait to see an update!
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  • From ANON - Crystal on April 27, 2004
    Great! I luv everything about it. You seem to take your time with the writtin instead of rushing through and i luv that too!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep goin=)
    E.B.S. yea notice those three words sounded kinda fishy
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