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Reviews for In a Different Light

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - KurayaminoVariant on April 18, 2004
    This is one of the best fics I've read in a good while, especially of the Sess/Rin ones. The way it's never from an external viewpoint but switches between the characters makes it much more real, and certainly establishes more of a link with the charachters. It's importaint to remember that even though the reader is aware of the charachters and their history, they must retain the qualities that they are known for or else the reader will become dissinterested. Many authors forget this, but you haven't and I applaud that. The charachter deveopment is also another major thing you've got going for you, especially because this is a story about them and not about their adventures. I hope you keep that up, and don't rush things to get to the lemon (this is ADULTfanfiction.net after all) or else it will cheapen the story and make the scene less believeable and less enjoyable. If you want to change things up a bit when things get steamy, you might do well to remember that people's sexual tendancies towards dominance/submisiveness are more often than not the inverse of their dominance/submissiveness in everyday relations. I've yet to see a fic that reflects this. Keep up the good work, hope to see more chapters up soon.
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  • From ANON - Toadie on April 15, 2004
    Wow, this stoomplompletely blows me away. It's such a treat to see a mature, well written and thought provoking story instead of a shallow one-shot that's just an excuse to throw two characters together. Chapter 1 and 2 were my favorites, they completely astounded me, with the depth and thought thau hau had clearly put into this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, please continue soon!

    Oh, and if you ever need a beta tester... :)
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 14, 2004
    ok where the hell did you come from and WHY am I only now reading your wonderful work!?! I am incredibly impressed with your story here. The depth and the... It is quite beautiful. Please update ASAP!!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 14, 2004
    As always great....I be waiting for updates..........
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 14, 2004
    This was too nice, I really liked this.

    What I liked is the fact Sesshoumaru & Rin are talking to each other like adults and trying to get...comfortable in this relationship AND I like there's no immediate 'wham-bam-thank you-ma'am'!

    I'm sure that'll come in due time.

    I'm glad you're showing that Sesshoumaru CAN re-evaluate himself and come to terms on some things, but what I liked most is that..if I read into it right...from Sess' POV, he saw Rin, at first, as a bothersome child who was just a curiousity before he devloped an atachment to her over the years.

    Because it seems like everyone is SO quick to have him look upon her as a daughter and personally, I think despite how mature he is...Sesshoumaru is STILL a young demon and I don't think he would look upon a child of any kind as someone he would adopt.

    He probably look upon them as his ward/charge or a younger sibling, but not immediately, as his own pup. Unless, he already had pups on his own or a mate...

    Anyway, I've said enough....will look forward to next chapters.


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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 14, 2004
    This is a cute, and very tounching........I can't wait until you post the updates for it........it is one of the top 10 Sess/Rin stories that I love at this site..... you are a excellent writer....keep up with your writing .......I'll be looking for the updates.......

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  • From ANON - Moon Dog on April 13, 2004
    I've read many Sesshoumaru x Rin fanfictions but this one has been one of my favorites. I love the way you tell the story in both Sesshomaru's and Rin's point of view. It gives a reader to really understand how you see the characters, and what they're thoughts about the other character(s) are. Another thing is that most other fanfictions don't hold my attention span too long, or it is just to OOC, WAFF for my tastes. This story however hit the spot. Not dark, or happy-happy-joy-joy, but an event that could possibly happen in the real series. If it was extend for that many espiodes. Anyway you are an excellwritwriter and I love reading your fanfictions.
    -Moon Dog
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  • From ANON - Shaid on April 13, 2004
    wow, theMaven, this is just about as good as your other story that I'm reading. wow... ::sighs: lik like the thought that Sesshomaru ahs felt he's been searching for soemthing, that he's felt empty since the death of his father... Dunno. It ret really agree with that.

    I love it. Write more soon, please!
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