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Reviews for In a Different Light

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Phoenix on August 06, 2004
    Your writing is fantastic. Are you a professional novelist with a crush on InuYasha? Because if you are, I would not be surprised in the least. I want to tell you that I appreciate all of the research that obviously went into this story. I felt like I learned a lot while I read it. I especially enjoyed the Taoist references, I'd never heard of that before and it's enjoyable. Also, I liked the author notes, you were always very considerate, even anticipating some touchy overzealous Christians in the last chapter. I thank you for those courtesies as well, you are amazing and I respect this piece of work highly. It updated regualarly enough for me, and the chapters were formidable in length. The way to italized words to stress your point really hit me. It was powerful writing.
    Now, as a piece of InuYasha fanfiction it was even better. The characters were so real, almoske tke this is exactly what Takahashi-san has in mind for the futures of the characters. I loved this story, (not to mention See/Rin fics are my favourite).
    I'm just singing your praises up and down the street here. I know a good review should also point out things that you could do to make things better, but I can't think of anything. The descriptions were long, but only those who can't truely appreciate this piece would be annoyed by that. Your descriptions went beyond what things looked like, you brought in the characters' reactions to things, their emotional attatchments, brought up moments from the past to remind the reader WHY those things are so significant. You've taken these 26 letters of the alphabet and worked magic with them. I can hardly wait for the sequel.

    In short: Good Job.
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  • From ANON - avery18 on August 06, 2004
    I see one problem with your story... YOU'RE TOO DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!! hehe Well, I was the girl who e-mailed you once AFF went down begging to read more of your story. I wanted to wait until AFF came back up to comment, and by that time you had finished the story. You are an excellent writer, and I hope that one day you will be able to make a living off of your work. I remained impressed throughout the whole story with the detail you went into as well as the accuracy you maintained. Additionally, most fan fics have the tendency to faulter as the end approaches, which is completely untrue for your story. The ending was satifying and quiet frankly excellent. I loved how well deped ped your characters were as well. I would like to encourage you however possible to try to seriously consider selling some of your works. The length is appropate for a novel, and your writing highly qualifies. I will be reading more of your stories here in the very, very close future, and I am highly anticipating the sequel to this story. Good luck in the future, and thank you for writing such an excellent story.
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  • From ANON - Shey on August 04, 2004
    I abosolutely loved this story!!! There is soo much info on the Hindus, I learned a few things
    from this story. Please start your next story!!!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on August 04, 2004
    Great story and a great ending. I just confused with the Title "A House Divided"??!! I hope that
    Sess and Rin won't go through what the Northern Lord and Lady is going through (family fued). You email me
    and you ask if I want to be inform before hand on updates. I would like it if you would inform me on
    updates. Here is my email adress: jhurdleann@msn.com. Update on your new story soon.
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  • From ANON - Glass Thorn on August 04, 2004
    i have been following your story for so long..i'm sad to have it over but i'm very excited about the sequil. i love the way you decribed the yoga training that rin did and the way you brought so many different things into your story to make it interesting. i can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on August 04, 2004
    I am throughly amazed with this last chapter and story. The amount of knowledge in this chapter was absolutely amazing. As a Catholic christian, I completely agree with you on the crisades; a big part of the early corruption in the Church. For a minute there, I felt bad for being Catholic, but then had to remind myself that those people were evil, land and power hungry people, who were christians by name only and who shamed the true believers of the faith.

    I loved when Rin surpassed Sumida and got called a "god" instead of "master". How fun is that?! There was soooooo much growing, learning, self-discovery, and love in Rin's character during this whole story. It was beautiful to read.

    The story behind Sesshomaru's parents and grandparents was fabulous; it made perfect sense, was consistant, intelligent, and ran ever so smoothly. I enjoyed that deeply.

    The best part might have been the restoration of Sess' arm. Both, together, were now COMPLETELY complete. *sigh* The hug he gave herlly lly touched my heart. Good job. Also, thin pin pups, that's beautiful.

    I am excited for your new story! Keep up the great work as always and enjoy life. You created one hell of a story. Bravo, Miss TheMaven!!!

    With love,
    friendlyreader
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  • From ANON - Mischief on August 04, 2004
    Absolutely beautiful!! I can't wait for 'A House Divided'. I soooo love your writting!!
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  • From ANON - A Flower-sama on August 04, 2004
    Oh no, did they delete your account on ff.net?! The bastards! You have my favorite story! I hope it isn't a major let down... Keep on updating! I'm sure all your fans will still read! How couln't they, you've got the best Sess/Rin fic, no joke!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on August 04, 2004
    THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!.....I just loved it ...Sesshomaru got his arm back, Rin has some kick butt powers, and pregnant. Man, I can't wait until the sequel........PLEASE MAKE IT SOON....I JUST LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH...........
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  • From ANON - Shey on July 21, 2004
    Hurry!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story^^!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kaieaithne on July 15, 2004
    GENIUS! YOU are a GENIUS! I love, LOVE, this fic. Talk about goooooooood. I can't find the words to describe your story. Keep it up...please.
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  • From ANON - Chaos_harbinger on July 06, 2004
    oh yeah i forgot how i signed it last time Chaos_harbinger is libbs just for ur info

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  • From ANON - Shey on July 04, 2004
    Can't wait until ur next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2004
    rwwerwer
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  • From ANON - sess\'sbewitchingbabe on July 04, 2004
    hey!
    You know you're wrong! You're not a good writer............
    you're a GODDESS OF FICTION!
    continue to write more fics. after this one, ESPECAILLY ones with SESS AND RIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Update soon,PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!
    -Sess'sBewitchingBabe
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