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By : theMaven

From ANON - ApriL on July 03, 2004
yay, you updated =] really good chaps.
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From ANON - Shey on July 02, 2004
I love this story soo much, and i am glad there will be a sequel. OMG (i never EVER use this) but for now it is the appropriate time, because i like this story sooo much'm d'm ditelitely glad that i found this.

p.s you have not disappointed me ^_^
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From ANON - Mischief on July 02, 2004
Loved this latest chapter!! All of your stories are so well written! Please keep going. Can't wait for the other half of cha chapter!
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From ANON - New Fan on July 02, 2004
I guess my email did not show up. Here it is so that you can respond to my comment without using space in your story.
jhurdleann@msn.com. Thanks

New Fan
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From ANON - New Fan on July 02, 2004
I really enjoyed this story. So sad it is coming to the end. With Lord of the Norominoming to visit Sess they should
have alot in common mating with a human. I hope that you have another story beside the sequel in the mix. I wonder
with your degree in short stories, I wonder if you can make a story out of this idea. Here is a Rin/Sess story with a twist.
I read some stories in which Sess father betrays Sess's mother with Inuyasha's mother. What if Sess does the same thing
to his mate but the other women turns out to be Rin. Here is the twist, Rin is mad tod to one of the villagers after she if
forced to leave Sesshoumaru because he has mated to a demoness (so she can carry on the demon bloodline). Sess finds
Rin in a few personal situations with her husband only wishing it was himself. Lots of angst/romance/betrayal.
Just an idea or something similar to it. Please tell me if it is something to consider or past on to another author. Well,
I am very much looking forward to read the next chapter as well as other stories in the works. Thanks

New Fan

Jess ^_^
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From ANON - friendlyreader on July 02, 2004
damn that was BEAUTIFUL!
the way you explain everything is informative and beneficial. It wasnt just meaningless sex, it was soul searching, soul bonding and with the pros of of making babies/pups with love. Great explaination of the 3 reasons of the mating mark, that made a lot of sense. Also, when he started to call her a bitch I was shocked. Yea, I knew that was the female dog's name, but when you went into detail about the true meaning and the high status implications of that word, well lets just say, I want to be a bitch!
The thing I enjoyed the most was him crawling to her, begging her. I'm a firm believe that to achieve anything of power, salvation, wisdom and what have you, you must be humbled. I think that's probably why Sess' father was so powerful because he knew humility and excepted its knowledge giving power.
Great stuff, really. I am sad to see the story end, but I do believe that it was an exceptionally wonderful and well-written tale. Pat yourself on the back and keep up the great writing! I look forward to the next chapter and sequal.
P.S. - "The Mating Game" is also an extremely cute 1950s movie with Debbie Reynolds and Tony Randal. Yea, I'm a sap, but you can't deny good old movies! *wink*
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From ANON - Youko Starr on July 02, 2004
That was wonderful, now I'm too excited for the last chapter, but Im so terribly saddened its going to be ending.

And you portray Sess so well....*fan girl sigh* If only he were real.

About there being no futons. I agree. THe four poster bed and the silk sheets by the fire place... beautiful and it helped set the scene, and I feel you can toss minor historical details if necessary to further develop your story and give it the feeling -you- the author want, especially since you are the one writing the story, and we are the ones who are grateful to you for creating this for us.

As soon as I get the money for the paper, I'm going to print this entire thing out and get a biiiiig hole puncher. I'd like to read this off comp too :o
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From ANON - SP777 on July 02, 2004
Chapter 31...wow. O_o

I don't know why the song by KC & the Sunshine, 'That's the Way I Like It' popped up in my head...but it's appropriate.
By the way, I like how thorough you are with your story.

I like stories with details, to me, it gives them more depth.

By the way, do you think Sesshoumaru will TRY to be understanding of where Inuyasha is coming from when it comes to human females...and see eye-to-eye with him or try to at some point.
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From ANON - Jess on June 30, 2004
i dunnoe how to say this.. so ill say it rite out.. ur one HELL of a writer! hehe i never had my heart ahe that much in the first chap. and im actually done with "in a different light" but.. im starting "bitter blood" now so :p ty so vm for all the efforts becuz it really is paying off adultff is the only place i read disclaimers now becuz of the writers :) and i am hopeing for more writers like urself or jeffs who is also a great writer gl with the rest of ur future stories :D
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From ANON - ladyamy on June 20, 2004
What! Next chappie is the last? Ur soooo cruel. Anywho enjoyed reading ur fanfic so far probably won't be disappointed with the last chappie make it a good one this one goes int fav fav reading fanfic file hope to read more of ur new stuff soon.
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From ANON - friendlyreader on June 18, 2004
damn
........................................*tries to find the words*...............................................
damn
.......................................*completely impressed by the written glory and passion, but cant find the words*.............
damn
.......................................*has never read anything so sensual, well written, so so...still cant find the words*...........
damn

yep, this chapter, this story, this everything = damn, one of THE best stories I have ever read.

Your Amazing ---> hot damn!
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From ANON - crystal aka crys on June 17, 2004
BEAUTIFUL, BEATIFUL, BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U R A GREAT WRITER =)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From Lease242 on June 16, 2004
That was soooooo good. Well, worth the wait. (Can't believe I needed a tissue) Keeps getting better and better. This may be the only story of this length, that each and every chapter is a delight to read. I don't want it to end but I can't wao reo read your next masterpiece.
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From ANON - Shaid on June 16, 2004
FINALLY!!!! woohoo!!!! That was a tasteful and passionate and wonderful scene. :-D Now I just have to calm myself down while I wait the day and a half untill I get to see my fiance again... It's been over six months since the last time I got to see him.

Anyway, as I'm sure I've written several times, the story is great. And I like that approach to Master Li's teachings, the idea that their love is natural and therefore right even though he's not human. When one is in love, one tries to be the best possible person for the one they love and so love brings one closer to enlightenment. Love, even when tinged with lust, is a positive emotion. Or at least I see it that way.

I'm also very glad that you decided to go against the whole reincarnation thing with Rin and Sessh, although it seems to be popular with some people. Not that I don't find the idea facinating, but I want Rin to be Rin, not her 5th reincarnation that sessh just happened to find and asked to abandon her life as she knew it before. I'm ok with the Inuyasha/Kagome thing because he makes it quite clear he's aware she's NOT Kikyou. Were Rin to have agreed to the first type of bond he would have been... it would have been unfair, to say the least. Reincarnations are NOT the same as the person they were in their past life, they are the next step in the cosmic evolution of a soul.

::blinks:: this is why I don't revie 2 a 2 am when I'm wired. I lecture. sorry.

Anyway... the mark she gave him... :-D Why did you pick a rose? Not that I'm complaining! It's cool. Hell, I've got a rose tattoo myself, still somewhat sore actually, fiance hasn't seen it yet. ;-D Anyway, for some reason it somehow doesn't seem to fit quite right with Sesshomaru... and yet it does. Can you give me some insight as to why you picked a rose?

The story is great and I can't wait to read the last chapter. Congrats on such supurb work.
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From ANON - Shaid on June 16, 2004
FINALLY!!!! woohoo!!!! That was a tasteful and passionate and wonderful scene. :-D Now I just have to calm myself down while I wait the day and a half untill I get to see my fiance again... It's been over six months since the last time I got to see him.

Anyway, as I'm sure I've written several times, the story is great. And I like that approach to Master Li's teachings, the idea that their love is natural and therefore right even though he's not human. When one is in love, one tries to be the best possible person for the one they love and so love brings one closer to enlightenment. Love, even when tinged with lust, is a positive emotion. Or at least I see it that way.

I'm also very glad that you decided to go against the whole reincarnation thing with Rin and Sessh, although it seems to be popular with some people. Not that I don't find the idea facinating, but I want Rin to be Rin, not her 5th reincarnation that sessh just happened to find and asked to abandon her life as she knew it before. I'm ok with the Inuyasha/Kagome thing because he makes it quite clear he's aware she's NOT Kikyou. Were Rin to have agreed to the first type of bond he would have been... it would have been unfair, to say the least. Reincarnations are NOT the same as the person they were in their past life, they are the next step in the cosmic evolution of a soul.

::blinks:: this is why I don't review at 2 am when I'm wired. I lecture. sorry.

Anyway... the mark she gave him... :-D Why did you pick a rose? Not that I'm complaining! It's cool. Hell, I've got a rose tattoo myself, still somewhat sore actually, fiance hasn't seen it yet. ;-D Anyway, for some reason it somehow doesn't seem to fit quite right with Sesshomaru... and yet it does. Can you give me some insight as to why you picked a rose?

The story is great and I can't wait to read the last chapter. Congrats on such supurb work.
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