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Reviews for Bitter Blood

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2005
    You Know Jaqua has a point, how come Sesshy didn't use his powerful sense of knowing when she's fertile? He just want to be the DOG that he is. A serious BAKA!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 17, 2005
    Well now, Lady Rin's getting some backbone! Good! Love to know where she and Sesshy's relationship might be heading? Guess I'll have to wait for the next update. This chapter sort of calmed me down a bit. Wonderful Job Maven!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 17, 2005
    Oh, Suki, Suki Now! You Go Rin. I was wondering when those papers would be put into action. But I hope my girl don't get too power struck. As for lord Sesshy, well....let's just say he is still a bit much for me. You know I must say I am a bit pissed off wiht Kagome for not informing Rin of her condition. Men are idiots when it comes to women welfare. Kagome is a modern day woman and know very well Rin's body is hers, she should have told Rin of her condition. Even though Sesshy claims he was concerned with her health, his way was too much. I had a gut turning night of sleep from the last chapter, that's how this story stirred my emotions. Good Show Maven! Keep me Boiling! Love It!
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  • From ANON - Leiliiani on January 17, 2005
    Awwwwww! Daichi reminds me of my goddaughter... well... hehe.. with the exception of the clawns and fangs, of course. :) And Rin is just.... creepy :) This is such a good story.. well, heck, I like ALL your stories, if memory serves :) Please update again soon. :)
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  • From ANON - IzumiCagalli on January 17, 2005
    Things have gotten really good. I like this side you are showing of Rin. I like how you have portraited her strength but also a side that I never thought Rin of having which is a cruel side. You are doing a great job and your writing just gets better and better. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - me on January 17, 2005
    update soon
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  • From ANON - me on January 16, 2005
    poor rin, sesshomaru is being a jackass
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  • From ANON - Jaqua on January 16, 2005
    WOW, im usually not a fan of dark stories or what have you, but im reallllllllyy liking this one!

    but i have a question,
    How come he can't do "the naughty" with her?
    i mean she's not fertile all the time, and being a demon, he should be able to tell when she is and when she isn't fertile, so that way she wouldn't get pregnant...

    -but if thats not how your story's gunna go, then hey, im all for it! its your story, and everything you write always kicks ass!

    so keep up the good work!!

    -but go easy on rin

    ok, ok im going!!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 16, 2005
    Oh Shit! (excuse my foul thought) Damn! It just doesn't stop with this man! Rin is good, cause damn if it were me....Shit! (excuse me again) How the hell is going to work? I guess I have to wait and find out next time! Good writing honey, my emotions are boiling! Peace!
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  • From FieldsofHeather on January 16, 2005
    *picks jaw up off the floor*

    Oh my.... please update soon. I'm really likeing this story.
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  • From ANON - anima on January 16, 2005
    poor rin and stupid sesshoumaru grrr. please update
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  • From ANON - blossom on January 16, 2005
    all i have to say is please update
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on January 16, 2005
    Ohhhh poor Rin!
    Sesshomaru's starting to sound like BakaYasha - saying and doing all the wrong things for the wrong reasons!
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  • From ANON - Bgatorgirl86 on January 15, 2005
    Even though I'm reading this story for the second time, I still get that heart-wrenching feeling. I love this story! Please update soon!
    ~Bgatorgirl86
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 14, 2005
    Maven, honey, I must say, I've read "The Girl", you got my emotions there, but this one! I've read all 14 chapters, and honey, in chapter 10, my stomach turned, nerve rattled, steam rising, I almost missed my stop on the train going to work my nerves were so frazzled. I wanted to kill Sesshy, but I'll wait for the next chapter. I loved your work in "The Girl" and I'm loving this story. You're Great! Peace Out!
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