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Reviews for Bitter Blood

By : theMaven
  • From Starryice on July 05, 2019

    This is one of the best Sess/Rin stories I have read; your character & plot development were WONDERFUL!!


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  • From Ashati on January 05, 2008
    that was amazing i absolutely loved it i think i may have not gotten any sleep till i finished both storys u r a wonderful writter i have read most ur storys but this takes thecake keep up
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  • From ANON - min on August 27, 2006
    This was a wonderful sequel. I absolutely loved everything about it.
    I love how you portray Rin. I find that too many times, in fanfiction, Rin is made out to be a possession. Your balance with her is perfect. For example, in the seduction chapter, you have Rin being subservient and throwing herself at Sesshoumaru's feet, but your Rin is *not* weak. She is strong. And she isn't being completely subservient; she is simply a woman who is not ashamed of her desires, and even proclaims that Sesshoumaru's body is hers, and I just found that so excellent. I mean, I love Rin/Sesshoumaru and even though I'm rather feminist, I know how hard it is to pull off Rin/Sesshoumaru's relationship as beyond mere possession, and you just tag it without being overly out of character.
    I don't think you made Rin completely mary-sue either. She did lose herself at some point with the whole Dokumi thing, and she admitted the desire to hurt--she's very human. Anyway. Great, excellent job.
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  • From ANON - Empress on January 20, 2006
    An absolutely beautiful read. I hadn't read any of these kinds of stories before but I LOVE Inuyasha. Such a good story with real characters. Continue to write and grow. I'll be waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 15, 2006
    That has to be the one of the best stories that this website contains. Wonderful Job.
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  • From ANON - Megami-sama on October 28, 2005
    If there is one thing I have to say about your fic, besides the great storyline and plot, is that is completely incorrect. Please don't take this as a flame, it is not meant to be one. But I feel that I have to explain why your fic is horribly wrong. First of all, Rin and Jaken call Sesshoumaru: Sesshoumaru-sama not my lord. Secondly, Sesshoumaru's mother was a dog demon, one of the last. Third, Inutaisho never had mistresses and had only ever loved Izayoi, only bearing a child with Sesshoumaru's mother for heir purposes. Fourth, even he did have mistresses (which he didn't), he would never allow them to bear his child, since Sesshoumaru's a full inu youkai, his mother had to have been an inu youkai as well. Fifth, Rin WOULD have bat an eyelash, in fact she would have cried. She is NOT a Mary-Sue, she is just an innocent child in the anime and manga, and only cares about "Sesshoumaru-sama". Sixth, Sesshoumaru still wouldn't have smiled if Rin was his mate. Sure, he can tell her he loves her, but it wouldn't go beyond that. Seventh, even though Rin is now Sesshoumaru's mate and Lady of the Western Lands, she wouldn't act the way you portraid her. Nor would she go crazy with power like you made her when Dokumi came by after Sesshoumaru told her about the affair. Eighth, I doubt the other Lords would attack Sesshoumaru because he mated with Rin. Inutaisho mated with Izayoi and no one tried to kill him. (His death had nothing to do with other taiyoukai. Besides, he could've taken all of them anyway.) Ninth, Inutaisho is not a Lolicon pedophile. He would've never taken a girl younger than his son as a mistress (if he had any) and he would've never let her conceive let alone use her in those purposes. I hope you read this, you might just skip it, thinking it's a flame. But it isn't. I'm not dissing your work, in fact, I'm extremely happy that someone else thinks that Sesshoumaru and Rin go together. Better than Kagura and him (by the way, it is entirely impossible for him to love her, unless he makes love to the air because she dies and he can't save her) or *shudder* Kagome and him (HELLO! They HATE each other!). I just want you to know, if you plan on writing another Rin/Sess fic, please use them correctly and use correct information (it is Aun, not Ah-Un) so that the readers don't have to dislike your work. But it really turns me off when you write about a child having sex with Inutaisho. That is just sick. So, please keep that away from your work. Other than the nine things I mentioned above, you have wonderful writing skills and flawless grammar. Many fics I have read turn out to have such horrible grammar that I can't understand what they wrote or horrible Japanese ("Ohio" instead of "Ohayou") If you don't know Japanese, don't write it. Your fic made me want to read your others, knowing that they are Sess/Rin fics. I'm sure I will enjoy them more than this fic. Keep up with this wonderful pairing!
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  • From ANON - Raye on August 03, 2005
    Kudos... I love all your story....but my fav has to be this one. I just love Rin even though I think she should left Sesshomaru. This story my fav. out all the Sess/Rin pairing, it has everthing: drama, comedy, adultery,action, and best of all a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Denise on March 24, 2005
    I loved this story. It's my favorite Sess/Rin pairing to date. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Icequeen on February 10, 2005
    ok i just finished reading this. WTF!? how can you let Rin stay with sess after he cheated on her? Let him stew. Rin had no self-respect for herself in this story.
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  • From ANON - Ziggurat-8 on January 26, 2005
    soo beautiful, so erotic, yet soo sad... (i am referring both to the first, and second parts of this series) *glomps the author* publish this please!
    (yes i am a guy, but is this so wrong?)

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  • From Nariko on January 24, 2005
    I just wanted to say bitter blood and the first one were two of the best i have read on this sight. Amazing. You may have put Sesshoumaru out of character but...it was the cutest thing to see the cold lord like that. I'll tell you this much, it brought up tears reading this fic. Thanks for writing it. Truely a work of art.
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 22, 2005
    BRAVO MAVEN! BRAVO! I was not disappointed, very much elated. I loved your story "The Girl" and how you used the POV or each character. As for this story, I loved the way you had my emotins in turmoil! Just Love It! As for this story, I liked the way you changed his character. I guess a demon can be thankful, and not fully knowing how to handle himself when his son said he loved him. That was just beautiful. I am reading " In a Different Light" now and I know I won't be disappointed. Thanks Maven, Thanks. Peace
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on January 22, 2005
    OMG - Inuyasha's kids and Sesshy's are SO cute together... absolute adorable - you should write a follow-up fic, with the two families involved =)
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  • From ANON - IzumiCagalli on January 22, 2005
    That was A beautiful story and I loved the way in how it ended. You have a wonderful talent for writing and I can't wait til your next story! I am a fan and as always great job!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2005
    Aside from using every fanon cliche I can recall--Sesshoumaru's mother was evil, Sesshoumaru's father, despite the fact he was a warlord, was tenderhearted, mating marks, Rin!Sue is now immortal, Sesshoumaru forgetting his human and hanyou hate to gleefully reproduce with Rin!Sue, Kagome delievering babies, *beats head on keyboard* and ect it's not a bad fiction. Certainly better than some of the other crap out there.
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