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Reviews for Movie House Hanyou

By : Numisma

From ANON - Midoriko-sama on October 30, 2004
Wifey, kudos. I liked how you shifted to focuss off the remance and back to the Naraku business with the dextrety of Himes shifting from to to jazz. Umezu's going to have something on his hands soon, Kagome hopes at least, with a little hint of rentals going into other pockets... and Chris out of the way is likely going to kick Umezu's bollocks to start thinking in that direction. Of course, because I'm one of the privilaged, I can't wait for 23 for MORE reasons than that-- BUT -- my darling angst queen wifey is presently beating around the bush of dangerous legal situations.

This chapter DID give me the feel of a filler chapter-- but it's anything but that. I like how you hide the little all important details in a 'read me between the lines, if you can' sort of way. The cool manner of the tone- the nice an' easy atmosphere every time you speak of it - Nice Naraku tone, i gotta say- makes one gloss over it all nicely and quietly. All the hints got Possible Naraku Demice you gave till now were in this demeanor, and that really is a yardstick of the excellent story-tellership. You keep your present story completely detached from your future plans without letting the hints drop other than intentionally.

I gotta say, though, that I'm still all-a-gitter for 23. Apart from the strange image I have in my head, of Umezu-san referring to his dick as a yard stick of how much he needs to get laid, or desires Kagome at that particular point in time...whichever point that may be.....
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From ANON - nena on October 23, 2004
I'm glad you updated. I've been waiting very patienty (or as patiently as a fan can) for this update.
You left such a good cliffie, that I was dying to know what happened next. I was surprised you didn't have Kagome and her mother talk about her night

Though, I must give you props. That scene in the bedroom with Kagome sitting behind INu Yasha kissing him and having her little confession was heartwarming,
and his 180 into telling her how he feels before turning the situation completely sexual was hot. Update as soon as you can.
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From ANON - Cindy on October 23, 2004
I have been following your story on ff but found that to to be a little slow so when I found your story on this site I switched to here. Sorry to hear that someone is harrazing you but don't lessen to them. Your story is great and I understand the value of receiving reviews. It is annoying at times when people read and don't tell you how you are doing. So I make it a point to leave a review. I'm very honest when I say that your story is great. I usually can't wait until you post again. I love the way this story is progressing and hope that you continue to the end. Keep up the great work and update soon. I look forward to reading your next chapter!

Thanks for the story!

Cindy
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From ANON - ArtemisMoon on October 23, 2004
Er, oops...that last review was from me. I just forgot to put my name in. Talk about scatterbrained! ^^;;
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From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2004
LOL, Tangletown sounds like Lafeyette, Louisiana. Whoever laid out that town must have been drunk, because it makes NO sense at all! I know people who have lived near that town for most of their lives, and they STILL can't navigate it.

And I can't believe that you actually managed to answer something with this chapter that I've been wondering for a while! And it was something totally unrelated to MHH. It wasn't long ago I was talking about movies with someone that we watched as kids, and I remembered one but I couldn't put a name or anything to it. I tried decribing it to them, but they just looked at me like I was nuts.

It was Flight of the Navigator!

^^;;

Anyway, great chapter! I enjoyed it, though it would have been entertaining to see how the rest of Inuyasha's 'visit' with Jakotsu and Bankotsu went. I'm in one of my really, really, REALLY rare 'Yay! Violence!' moods, LOL...

But the ear rubbing and lime was great! *goofy grin*
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From ANON - Fairia13 on October 23, 2004
I was thrilled when you got another chapter up. And, honestly, if people are going to leave snide, rude and hurtful coments, they should at least have the balls to sign their shit. Cowards. Either way, do't let it get to you (unless you know where they live and have a rabid squirrell handy), then....FRY EM'!!!

*ahem* Other then that, excellent job, keep up the good work, I'm glad Kagome and Inuyasha (kinda) got it together.....will there be a IY/K lemon eventually???

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From ANON - YoukaiFate on October 23, 2004
I don't think my review for chapter 20 was actually posted, so I'll review both chapters (20 & 21) now. And it'll be a simple review: Loved it, loved it, loved it. Whew, lady, you have some awesome talent for tender lime scenes. I bawled and cackled and gulped ice water throughout both chapters, and now I'm dying for more. Will April ever come? Sigh. That bit about Sesshoumaru gave me the shivers...hope he did survive. Another thing that makes me shiver is Shuska (sp?) sing-songing all over the place and being so delighted about Kagome working in the box office. Is that sick perv going to make a move? Ugh. *brightening* But then, perhaps, IY will be making some moves too. Delightful thought. Shivering for a whole 'nother reason. n_n

Can't wait for more...

Fate
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From ANON - Jake on October 23, 2004
hey this is great i love this stiry soooooooooooooo ,uch i do wish u could update faster but im glad that u ahev long chapters and they r very detailed and graphic. this is my absolute favoright story in this entire place. please please please update soon
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From redninjawinz on October 23, 2004
Nice chapter. I liked it alot. I think I told you before that the story helps get me through college. Don't let stupid reviewers get you down. If they don't have the balls to post their name then they really aren't worth it. Well update soon, I need something to distract me from midterms and finals.
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From ANON - Annetta on October 23, 2004
I love your story! You have a great talent for writing so please keep updating! *hugs*
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From ShaeyaSedjet on October 23, 2004
WONDERFUL CHAPPIE!!! I have no constructive criticism for you. You are...good...better than good. You rock my socks. And I will personally hunt down the bastard who is harassing you and kill him/her. I will stab said person with the Mighty Spork of Justice! *holds her spork high* I will defend your honor!
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From ANON - Maggz on October 23, 2004
Hey, Num!
Thank you so much for updating! You managed to make it this week so I'll take it as a birthday present *lol You have no idea how much I wanted to read this chapter, I knew there would be some action *hint hint* I even made a bet with my friends about chapter 21... and I won! *does the happy dance* We also made another bet: those two won't wait til Kagome's 18 birthday... O_o I lothisthis chapter (not only for the Inu/Kag interaction); the bass scene was hilarious *lol* Velvet??!! O_o
As for the harasser, just ignore it... Readers in FF.net tend to be more immature *sigh* And if you did well in the IYFG polls, you truly deserve it cuz this story just kick ass! Please continue with the excellent work and just don't let the comments of obviously jelaous idiots get you...
Your loyal fan,
Maggz
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From ANON - Sharibet on October 23, 2004
Wheeeee! Some juicy emotional and relationship stuff in this chapter, with deconstruction of common lemon cliche an an added bonus. I chortled at the whole "youkai mating mark" conversation... Great job, can't wait to rmoremore.
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From ANON - vashta on October 22, 2004
i am so glad they are ok, I hope you really get to her b-day quick, I feel sorry for her. Good chap, what did IY do to Ban and Jak?
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From ANON - snowfall on October 22, 2004
You have absolutely no idea how happy I am that you updated. Your grammar is superb, your writing style easy and enjoyable
to read, and the story itself absolutely wonderful. You don't rush to the lemon, but give us enough to make us happy which is
a feat in and of itself. Even though the story is in a mundane setting, you make it feel as if it is an action fic. I would like your
permission to put this story on my website as soon as it's construction is completed. Take all the time you need to write another
quality chapter. Just know that I am only putting up copleted stories. It will take awhile for the site to be finished, so I am in
no hurry. Wouldn't want the quality of your work to suffer. Plee-mae-mail a response to my request.

Thank you for such a wonderful read.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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