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Reviews for Movie House Hanyou

By : Numisma
  • From on July 23, 2004
    Another excellent chapter. I'm still debating if this fic is the #1 or #2 fic on the internet right now. "Falling For The Babysitter" (on mm.org) is my other contender. Nothing about this fic is bad (except for the long wait for Kagome to not be jailbait). The detail is superb. The grammar is excellent. The tid-bits of lime/romance keep up the action. The questions of what Naraku is doing add suspense. And Naraku's actions make you tell yourself "This is some fucked-up shit going on here." It's nice to see that you had Kag and Inu finally have their little talk and that InuYasha told her about Kikyou. Is Kikyou going to be making an appearance in this fic? I don't really care to see her *cough*becauseshe'sabitch*cough*, but if it adds to the story, and doesn't extend it, then throw it in there for us to enjoy. She better not get Inu in trouble though.
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  • From ANON - lilladyINUfan on July 22, 2004
    ---gets on her knees and begs---
    PLZ UPDATE I BEG OF U
    I LOOOOOVE THIS STORY
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  • From ANON - lilladyINUfan on July 22, 2004
    Are u ever gonna update or wat?!?!?!
    This is taking forever!!!
    Ack! plz hurry
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  • From ANON - MidnightKitsune on July 21, 2004
    WAAAAAAAAAah!!! I love this ficcie but i wish youd update it!
    *gets all teary eyed*
    because this is the most origional fic i have read so far and you are an absolute genius for creating it!
    so pretty pretty pretty please update for me??!!!!!!

    Lovee your very faithful reader,
    kitsune
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  • From ANON - lilladyINUfan on July 20, 2004
    WHEN IN HELL R U GONNA UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!
    im eager to read this story
    I WANT LEMONS
    its still getting closer to kagomes b-day
    is she gonna find out his secret
    plz update soon
    i dunno when ill be able to read it tho cuz im not even on my comp. right now
    my comp. is fucked up
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  • From ANON - YoukaiFate on July 16, 2004
    Another good chapter! I absolutely love the little details, like Naraku smudging the quarter. I believe keeping up with them divides an author/story from good to great. Deep bow! And I liked how InuYasha did a bit of the fang-growl at Jak...still have the shivers over Jak topping Inu, but at least Inu put the little fe-male in his place. Lol! And Naraku with his bat...man needs a Prozac. Or maybe a good scene with Jak...devil's grin.

    I'm beginning to feel Inu's need for Kagome. I hope she can boost his ego up. The guy needs her.
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  • From ANON - Mija on July 14, 2004
    omg Naraku is nuts, he needs his ass whooped..I mean they dont allow bosses to physically hurt someone do they?? damn hes an ass...lol another wonderfull chap Num, loved it and cant wait for the next one, till then much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Ninoshka on July 13, 2004
    great story. Update soon as possible okay
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  • From nena on July 13, 2004
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ISN'T ANYONE GOINT TO CALL THE COPS. Maybe is because I'm from NY, but if that were to happen here, he would be in jail for aggrivated assult, and both allen and jr would have legal cases against the company, plus they could sue for racism. Kagome could also file a harrassment complaint. We don't have curfews over here, but if we did, you know that the movie theater would have been fined. But this is NY and we sue and fine to our heart's content. Plus, I'm surprise her mother didn't go there and rip him a new one.

    Otherwise, this was an edge of your seat chapter, th I' I'm beginning to feel sorry for Inu
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 13, 2004
    hey. what the hell is a prole? also, good chapter. the inu/kag thingi at the end was enjoyable. about your friends artwork, tobe perfectly honest, it looks like he's sticking a tongue depressor (those thingfs the doctors use to take your throat culture) into her ear. a tongue should be more flexible looking, more curved and her head should be tilted a bit. update asap!
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  • From ANON - Mija on July 11, 2004
    ooh and on a side note I laughed my freakin ASS off when he thought it was Kikyo at the door...I spit out my soda it was too funny...........just had to add that....and btw I just left a review but didnt see it and wondered what happens to the reviews you get and theres no more room on the first page thingy?? cause it looks like you ran outta room and cant get no more reviews..hell I never saw that happen before but thats what it looks like to me...you go girl...
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  • From ANON - Mija on July 11, 2004
    ooh wow Num I loved the new chapter, I tried to lea rea review here when I read the last one but I guess it got cut off or something..lol...loving the whole Inu being stoned off his ever loving mind..lmaoo soo funny seeing the girls as marienettes lol...and what Sango and Chels did was too funny, again loved the last two chaps they were wonderfull and I cant wait for more, I worrworried it would be longer before you updated but I am very very happy to know you did and read it...poor Kags soo wrong for minorities to call other minorities hatefull words, its totally silly and dumb really, and I can say that cause I am a minority, hehe Im hispanic, latin, mexican what ever one wishes to call me, hehe and I find it really sad when one minority calls another a racist name, just makes them racist and if you think you cant be a racist cause your black or mexican or what ever then your wrong I know alot of them, soo sad really...sigh anyhow great work and cant wait for another chapter..till then you be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mija..:-)
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  • From on July 10, 2004
    So, if this story is based upon your employment for a year, does that mean that you also had an affair with your boss? Don't have to answer since it's a personal question. Just thought I'd ask. Those police officers can be real bitches when it comes to enforcing curfew. I haven't been caught here in Clarksville, Tennessee, but my brother and his friends have fromfrom the cops a few times because they were violating curfew ^_^! Will Inu come to Kagome's rescue? Or will she be left at the cop's mercy? Next time on Movie House Hanyou!? Cross training does help on getting higher promotions. I'm just starting my new position as a stockroom supervisor after being a sales associate for 9 months. The store manager is giving me hints that this position will help me to eventually become a store manager or even a district manager. Love the chapters. Keep 'em coming please. I'm hoping to have my first story pushed out by next week.
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  • From ANON - NyliramLlessur on July 04, 2004
    Another wonderous chapter.

    And gosh dang it you are getting to be like me with the cliffys.

    Hehehe I love to write them hate to read them.

    Can't wait for next chapter.


    ~Ny~
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 03, 2004
    great chapter with a cliffy! yay! but i have to agree, kag is a minor, she does need to grow a backbone. she should have been more firm with that umar guy. it was so obvious he was way out of his bounds asking her to stay so late. serves her right for getting picked up by the cops, she should have been more responsible to herself.
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