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Reviews for Movie House Hanyou

By : Numisma

From ANON - Tammy on July 03, 2004
Finally!! Something good happens!!! MHH is updated....for a while there, I thought nothing in life was going to improve I w I would just end up throwing myself from the top of the Foshay Tower. But like a good friend, you have saved my life. Let it never be said that fanfiction has no place in the world.

Inuyasha....it really is a shame that he is fictional. Could you imagine the retardedly fabulous sexual goodness of having a boyfriend who changed from hanyou to human one night a month? The weird little games you could play? It would be like shagging a different person. >_< *boggles the, er....mind?* Yeah, well.....

(What's this with you accusing me of giving the other kids bad ideas.....I'm injured! You should be more careful with my feelings; you know what a delicate, sensitive person I am.)

I can't help it....I am just itchng with questions! I don't want to be rude and email them tu. u. (I know you're not going to tell me!) I don't want to spoil the story for myself either. It's just so FUCKING HARD to wait for it. BTW, I keep re-reading FFF; the end of it just breaks my heart....but I gotta tell ya, from a avid reader/writer's standpoint, it really impresses me when people build so much contrast into a character's emotional life. He is angry, and moody, slick and seductive, rebelious yet uptight...but he is so Human! Humanity is hard to convey. I had an Engish teaher in college who used to tell us that when you could convey humanity you were ready to publish. So, I love Inu. Inu is complex, but not overly so, and the situation is too,...so the fact that he is such a study of contrasts and that he is such a high energy character makes it totally addictive to read. And THEN you throw in the fact that you just don't see something this original in IY fanfic everyday and there you go....see why it's my favorite story!!! BUT you can also SO tell that Inu is your favorite baby. He is like !whoa! so much more developed than your other characters in this story. He does more, says more, gives more insight and is far more compelling than anyone else in MHH. Okay, I should shut up since I am no Hemingway, and probaly boring your pants off. I just get on these kicks where I feel like I never saythinthing useful, so then I try and it iceskates into massive overkill. (Blah, blah, Tammy rattles on forever and the audience nods off....)

*grins* And you can tell Del-Kaiden that I am totally jealous of her. It sounds like she has a mad-ass scoop!! What's in chapter 21? Ahhhhhh! Sometimes I wish I could be cryogenically frozen until you were finished with this story, so that I could read it all at once. If you look up the term instant gratification, my picture is next to it and I am wearing a tee-shirt that says 'fan-club president.' Hand to mouth, Hand to mouth.

I love your writing & I love this story. *end of review*

Until we meet again!!! ~ Tam
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From ANON - Juls on July 03, 2004
Hey, I've been following your story since chapter 12 came out, and I have to say, it's one of the better storiesm i've read. I just have one question, Do you live in Minnesota? Because I do, and it would be great to meet a fellow Inu fan who actually lives in the same state as me. If you do, (live in mn that is) email me. Diamondgirl1989@msn.com. Also, will you respond to this on your next chapter? thanx.

much huggles,
Juls
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From ANON - Isis on July 03, 2004
I'll get you the picture as soon as she gets herself a new harddrive.. believe me, it's driving me insane cause she doesn't have one yet.

Her DV account name is mayokekumiko, but I really have no clue what she has up there.

Is Kagome any closer to turning 18 yet!!! You're killing me here!!!!

And JEBUS! Cop... total motherfuck...

*grins* we had a fetish ball at the club tonight, it made me think of you!

*squish*
Isis
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From ANON - DelKaidin on July 03, 2004
Hey,

Great chapter... boy my Japanese is increasing by reading this story.... I was actually able to use Chotto baka da na... my pronunciation most likely sucked But they didn't know that... lol. Poor Kagome, in trouble... Ok let's see you said the party was in Chapters 18 & 19 SO that means.. 4 more? then what Chapter 21 for that little gem? Evil Grin!
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From ANON - sublimetrickster on July 03, 2004
Wow, was surprised to see another chapter so soon, but then you did say you shortened Chap 13, no?
Really enjoyed this chapter, things seem to be picking up a bit more now that you've established characters and setting.
I was expecting something to happen on her walk home, but not the police! Crazy, I have nea wea what'll happen next. I don't know much about legal curfews, can Kagome get into trouble for this?
I look forward to seeing what happens next, and, again, I'm happy you like the picture!!!
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From ANON - ladykaa28 on July 02, 2004
This one of my faves. I like still one because you never know what is going to happen. In this last chapter I was hoping that Inuyasha would come along and make sure that she got home alright. I wonder what will happen to her now that Jamal ( I think that was the guy's name) made her stay late and now the police has stopped her.
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From ANON - YoukaiFate on July 02, 2004
Yet another excellent chapter. i almost fell out of my chair laughing with the "Look, Ma! No fangs!" Still got the deep chuckles... :) Poor Kags! What a day! Ugh! I would raise up my hands in defeat and howl to the moon over THAT one. And I thought the way Inu and Kag handled that little rascist *bleep* was excellent. And to top it off, being pulled aside by a cop! Growl! Poor baby, I would be scared as all heck walking around downtown anywhere that late at night, only 17 and by myself! And doesn't she have school in the morning? Granted, it's her last day, but I'd be a walking zombie. Hope Jamar gets a good write up as well, and I hope that cop will take a bit of pity on her, and Drive her , no, not just give her a ticket...oh, and now that your eyes are all boggled over this totally long irrevelant review, I just loved the Japanese add-on of InuYasha's...the words under translation were actually sweet, and I love the fact that the tough nut has a bit of a soft underbelly...lol. Good job and update soon!
YoukaiFate
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From ANON - hiro on July 02, 2004
cool me like but i wanted to see more inu/kag interaction maybe next chap huh? oh well update soon.
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From ANON - PaperCuts on July 02, 2004
I am seriously enjoying you fic right now and when ever i have the time to get on AFF i always look for your work it makes my day ^^
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From ANON - Sutashii on July 02, 2004
Ohhh man I remember the curfew thing too.... *sighs* Though I had my moms car... Ohhh I cant wait to find out what happens next!! your an amazing writer.
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From ANON - fay_yasha on July 02, 2004
Wonderful chapter Num!!! I bow to the mistress of evil cliff hangers. Kagome and Inuyasha can't seem to catch a break. I totally agree with you on the comments that Inuyasha fired back at Wiley. I live in a large metropolitan city and I hear that kind of language all the time. It's offensive and derogatory and NO one should say it. Love Inuyasha's answer to Kagome on if he regreted what they did in the stock room. Interesting combination of scenes. Can't wait for more!

Fay_yasha
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From ANON - kittie le sabre on June 30, 2004
I liked this chapter a lot but it held me in utter suspense. I want to know dnuyanuyasha excercise his Kikyou "demons" or if not, is this what's pushing him to his limits with Kagome? Are his fears of being alone (among other things that were outlined heavily in FFF) the motivating factor behind everything he does concerning her and his relationships? Is the drug use more than just "recreational"? I sense there is more going on here bualmoalmost feel like I missing "it" in some ways. Kagome I feel is almost oblivious to the torment he is in concerning her, and she is NO dummy. And now I'm wondering about Yash's ex that freaked out and dumped him, and what was the deal with he and Zara? And the relationship/friendship with Miroku and why it was a temporary set-up? There is so much going on here and I guess I better keep reading...

Another good chapter from one of my fav stories-

ja ne!
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From ANON - drake220 on June 30, 2004
y'know something? i'm okay with m/m, f/m, f/f scenes but that drugs thing? totally freaked me out. just couldnt get into it. are you gonna be doing more of those scenes? they just make me uncomfortable. now, i'm not flaming you! i'm just expressing an opinion.
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From on June 29, 2004
My god! No interaction between Kagome and InuYasha at all in this chapter?! No sexual tension or desires to be bound and whipped?! But it was informative. KagoKagome trying to get into the box because she would rather work there or is it part of InuYasha's plan? I 't r't remember that being mentioned previously, so I just felt like asking. And boy was Inu f*cked up. I've never been high before (don't do drugs), but I know that at least one of my brothers has. I'll have to ask him how out of it he was. When you said that it was Kikyou at the front door, I had about the same reactions as Inu did. Stupid bitch that she is. Great chapter though, but next spring is so far away. They actually going to be able to last that long? I'm not sure I can.
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From ANON - NyliramLlessur on June 29, 2004
You know I love the story. Still depressed but the jokes in this chapter made me smile.

:o)

~Ny~
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