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Reviews for Innocent Beginnings

By : inumag
  • From Starryice on July 05, 2019

    Absolutely WONDERFUL; I am soooo glad I found & read it!!


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  • From YoukaiMistress on August 21, 2008
    I read this story years ago when you first published it and I just found it again. I'm not sure if I reviewed then, but I am now...

    It's simply wonderful!! The tension between those two was so thick you could cut it with a knife...great!

    Thank you for writing it and sharing it with all of us.

    ~Utterly Absurd
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on January 18, 2006
    Happy One Year Anniversary!!!! Innocent Beginnings is one of my all time favorites! Thanks for this beautiful romance.
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  • From Mmoirai on June 27, 2005
    Well, Wow...I'm just...WoW! I stayed up all night reading this! My neck is killing me, but it was worth it! I love your story! You have an amazing talent for drawing your readers into the world you've created! Excellent!
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  • From ANON - mikai on May 30, 2005
    that was the BEST story ever!! i did check out that link(to mediaminer) for that story that was for *some* reason *similiar* to yours(so much). i really enjoyed reading that and am really gonna give you your props! that was hot, no grammer errors, nothing misspelled, and so on! great job! you've really made me the happiest gurl in the world!(lol)

    great job!
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  • From aoi37 on May 14, 2005
    AAAAHHHH, I finally finished this story. It took me two weeks to finish this and now I am finally done!! You've got some errors in this, but other than that I loved it!! I was so pissed at Sess and then I wanted Rin to get it together, but it all worked out. I also loved the first person point of view, that usually gets boring for me after a couple of chapters but you pulled it off well. Anyway loved it:)
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  • From ANON - theMaven on January 21, 2005
    Awwww . . . cute ^ ^
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  • From ANON - Cassie on January 20, 2005
    Please, Please, Please, Please, you have to write a sequel to this story. You have to start a sequel with these two. All the trouble they went through. We the fans need a sequel to know how they are now through thru their marriage and to find out if they are to have any children and their future together. So, please write a sequel. You would make your fans faces look like this ^ ___________ ^
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  • From ANON - gv on January 20, 2005
    finally!!!!! i ;love this story from begining to end and i stook with it for as long as humanyly possible and im sorry i didnt review as much as i should have but i couldnt find it after awhile but yay...i loved it...so nice...much appluase

    most of love for a wonderfully writen story
    GV
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  • From ANON - DJ on January 20, 2005
    Excellent! Bravo! I was very impressed with this story as well as your other ones such as 'When he was mine.' Not many authors can handle Sess and Rin stories so well and you did exceptionally good with the age differences. I was a little thrown off at first because he was so out of character but in later chapters when Kohaku came I could tell Sess so wanted her and I kept wondering what was going to happen. I did not even feel like it was that long. I hope you write another one about the struggles they faced on their road to married bliss. That would be interesting. I tip my hat to one of my favoriet Adult Fan Fiction Authors (anime chick of 'Suddenly Daddy' is another frequent favorite) *_*
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  • From ANON - DJ on January 20, 2005
    Excellent! Bravo! I was very impressed with this story as well as your other ones such as 'When he was mine.' Not many authors can handle Sess and Rin stories so well and you did exceptionally good with the age differences. I was a little thrown off at first because he was so out of character but in later chapters when Kohaku came I could tell Sess so wanted her and I kept wondering what was going to happen. I did not even feel like it was that long. I hope you write another one about the struggles they faced on their road to married bliss. That would be interesting. I tip my hat to one of my favoriet Adult Fan Fiction Authors (anime chick of 'Suddenly Daddy' is another frequent favorite) *_*
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  • From ANON - Moon Dog on January 15, 2005
    Awwww....SEQUEL!
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  • From ANON - mahogany on December 29, 2004
    GREAT story!! i love Rin and Sesshomaru stories! please keep writing! Usually im not a big fan of alternate universes, but there are a few that i like and this was definately one of em!! just wanted to say again, great story!
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  • From ANON - N.S. on December 14, 2004
    I love this story!!!! Of course, I'm sad that it ended, but I still love it.
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  • From ANON - phoenix on November 29, 2004
    a damn GREAT story u have here, even though fer many spelling errors here have here and there and i was tryin to make out what are ya tryin to interpret aniwae i enjoyed greatly throughout the whole story especialli since i'm a sess/rin fan.
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