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Reviews for Innocent Beginnings

By : inumag
  • From ANON - New Fan on September 08, 2004
    Poor Rin, I hope that she can get out of this rut she put herself into. I hope that she does not lose Kahaku friendship during
    her teen midlife crisis. Update really soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on September 08, 2004
    I think that Sess enjoyed more than he wants to admit. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on September 08, 2004
    Dear lord! I cannot stand this story with Sesshoumaru beating up on Rin and her not fighting back. Not really anyway. It is so stupid. Makes me so frustrated. And to know she gets with him in the end? Sickening with the way he's treating her. What a load of bull, "I just really care for you." Rin should never forgive him. She should make him suffer. Goodbye Sessy. Forever.

    That's my two cents of the story. lol. It is very well written and I love reading it but it makes me so mad. I can barely read it anymore.
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  • From ANON - theMaven on September 08, 2004
    *shudders* Can we say dysfunction? Now, I like Rin and Sess together as much as the next person (okay, perhaps MORE thae nee next person, heehee), but I swear to God these two people you've created should stay far, far, FAR away from each other. SERIOUSLY. Their relationship is not only co-dependent, but it's disintegrated into abuse, as well. I'd hate to imagine what their lives would be like if Ichi and Reika DID let Sess keep closer watch over her. He's fine when HE'S in control of everything, but when somebody starts to think for themselves . . . He needs some SERIOUS counseling, not to mention anger management.

    But, of course, you realize since you were able to evoke such a strong emotional repsonse from me, the fic is a screaming success. You've successfully driven them apart, in my opinion, but at this point, I'm not so sure I WANT to see them get together . . . But, then again, I wasn't satisfied with the ending of "Ever After," either. Sometimes, getting the prince in the end isn't worth all the crap you have to put up with in the meantime, especially after all the things he said and did to her. This prince didn't apologize nearly enough, and with Sesshomaru's attitude, I have a feeling your fic might end the same way . . . But it's still very well written and quite entertaining, and isn't that what fanfics are for?

    theMaven ^__^
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 08, 2004
    THIS STORY IS JUST SO GOOD.....How my boy Sesshomaru was acting like a saint to her aunt and uncle...........i was laughing to hard.....and him spanking her, I wonder how long he wanted to do that...these updates are wonderful......I was so understatnding Rin's point of view......I was getting nervoust yot you wouldn't update again ....I'm so glad you did.......PLEASE UPDATE SOON.....I NEED THIS STORY.....
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  • From ANON - youkai mistress on September 02, 2004
    Why don't you update already!!!! Your killing me over here!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
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  • From ANON - Bibop on August 29, 2004
    why dont your update more often? please this story is so amazing that you have to keep updating more often! please!

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  • From ANON - Amai_Sakume on August 25, 2004
    at first i was mad.( when i couldnt find ur story anywhere. ff.net). but since you knew it was going to happen i guess... well i chilled out. thank god! ( lol ) u had thiory ory here... :) oh, and please update! lol
    one of ur fans
    Amai_Sakume
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  • From ANON - Novasenshi on August 25, 2004
    thank you soooooo much for giving me the links. I would have died if I couldnt' read the next chapter.... and then you go and make a WONDERFUL cliffhanger. aaaaaahhh! Well, I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

    thanks again
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 25, 2004
    Awesome chapter. I feel so bad for Rin, she was so happy to see his car and know he was there. But as you said with happiness there is pain. I hope she gets her revenge on that chick. Keep up the awesome work and update soon.

    P.S.

    Are you not posting at fan fiction any more????
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  • From ANON - hiro on August 24, 2004
    I really like this story, I just hope ur going somewhere with all this drama. I know rin is the nararatorIm gIm guessing this is part of her childhood and now she is a grown woman... I hope. Im a really big fan of Sess/Rin pairing (seriously i dont like other pairings for the complicated lord but this is confusing) but right now kohaku is sounding pretty interesting to me (wow thats disturbing). I just wanna know is she ever gonna choose or can she have the cake and eat it too, or has she already chosen and i dont know... Im confused. Other than that I say ur a great author to have me twisted in knots trying to figure this out even two hours after Ive read the chapter. Anyway pls update soon and any thing that might be of help or if i need to read a chapter again id be really helpful.
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  • From ANON - MC on August 23, 2004
    So short. Sniff sniff. Poor Rin. That was a good chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - New Fan on August 23, 2004
    I will love you for life if you have two chapters next time or really soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ThatsMsDiva2U on August 23, 2004
    What was Sesshomaru thinking bringing Kagura around when he hadn't even mentioned her around Rin? I hope Sesshomaru will get a taste of his own medicine by seeing Rin and Kohaku engaging in intimate settings, such as kissing, holding hands, etc.
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on August 23, 2004
    why???????!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???????

    I like it *thumbs up*. You can certainly write one hell of a tale!
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