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Reviews for Innocent Beginnings

By : inumag
  • From ANON - me on July 22, 2004
    i cant wait to see how sesshomaru will react
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  • From ANON - Tanoliko on July 22, 2004
    This story is wonderiful. The detail in it is amazing. I love how you started out with the future and sorta jumped back. I love Kohaku, how oyu put him in. I also love the character you've given Sesshomaru. The first person view usually annoys me, but for this story it's perfect. You convey the feelings in the story so well. And I love how it keeps going up and down. The plot is strong and enticing. I liked how this story is purely sex, sex, and sex. I ove how rin's quirky little attitude has won her, her life. Although the only thing I wonder about is what occupation does sesshomaru have? Is it an actor? I think so. I think that you make it seem not so important. You have great skills at making the story close knit, not leaving holes. I love the christmas scene. It's so sweet. Keep up the wonderiful writing.
    ~Tanoliko
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  • From ANON - gbby on July 22, 2004
    waaa, how could u leave off at that???!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 21, 2004
    ooooohhhh!!!! i don't know whose ass is more cooked, kohaku's or rins!!! perhaps you could explain the relationship they have a little more clearly though. are they casual friends with benefits or what? i'm not tooar. ar. neithers sessy-sama adn i guess thats the point!!! you must update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - ThatsMsDiva2U on July 20, 2004
    Whoa, you go Rin! I'm happy she's finally going to try and get over Sesshomaru. Even though I doubt it'll last very long.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 20, 2004
    ::winces:: poor rin.....man, the beginningof rin's bad stage is coming. i really like kohaku's character here. if nothing happens with him (and i know there isnt),c an you do a split off fic with him? i just really like him. can you clarify if he likes rin as in like like? thnkas adn keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - bibop on July 20, 2004
    great chapter.......more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    please update as soon as possible!
    i love the way you are writing!

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  • From Lease242 on July 20, 2004
    If you don't make your living writing professionally, you may want to consider a career change. Only onmon mon and I get lost in this story every chapter. Wow. Can I adopt you?
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 19, 2004
    You go ahead Rin. Go and find yourself. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Vyle on July 19, 2004
    Hey, Maggz! ;) I really luv the type of tories U make for Inuyasha. I especially loved WHWM. I was kinda hopin' (b-cuz I'm such a Inuyasha Hara addict) if U could make a one-shot follow-up for that story. I'm sad the story over but I just wanna know what happens to them a bit. I would be really happy if U could consider this whenever ya got the chance.

    But besides that....this story ROCKS and so do U!! Peace and rock on til' the break of dawn, sista! :)

    -Vyle G. (dedicated M-fan)
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  • From ANON - Vyle on July 19, 2004
    Hey, Maggz! ;) I really luv the type of tories U make for Inuyasha. I especially loved WHWM. I was kinda hopin' (b-cuz I'm such a Inuyasha Hara addict) if U could make a one-shot follow-up for that story. I'm sad the story over but I just wanna know what happens to them a bit. I would be really happy if U could consider this whenever ya got the chance.

    But besides that....this story ROCKS and so do U!! Peace and rock on til' the break of dawn, sista! :)

    -Vyle G. (dedicated M-fan)
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  • From ANON - me on July 17, 2004
    this is great keep it up
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  • From ANON - Pinkstockings on July 17, 2004
    Chapter one
    Beautiful, just beautiful.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 16, 2004
    Sess has competition. Just what the relationship needs. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 15, 2004
    well well! kohaku the sex god! amen! hehe. great descriptions and the camraderie between the two is great. sess is totally going to freak out when he hears how hot tutor boy is. because we all know what 'tutoring session' REALLY means! haha! i hope he catches the two of them flirting! oooh, he'd blow a fuse! great chapter! rin deservesa ife outside of sess!
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