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Reviews for Innocent Beginnings

By : inumag
  • From ANON - snowfall on June 05, 2004
    I just finished reading your first chapter. I am amazed that someone can do first person so well. Excellent! I've never been interested in reading a Rin/Sess story, don't know how you drew me in, but you did. I am enjoying this.
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on May 27, 2004
    Very good story. I'm enjoying all the OOC stuff. Its nice to think of Sesshomaru as just a regular person. You can still see a bit of his charactor though, and thats very cool too. Hope you update soon :)
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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 26, 2004
    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Manda on May 26, 2004
    *sniffs* Oh my gosh, this made me want to cry, it was so sweet and tender! I love how Sess is acting toward Rin, being caring, comforting, etc One thing though, how doe he see her now? We know Rin loves him (I love him!) Does he see her as a really close girl friend, or a sort of daughter relationship (maybe at first, though, but now?) I ask because if I were in Rin's place, I'd be convinced that he was in love with me as well (or near to it). But then, I've never been really good at pig upg up signs like that from guys. I love this story!! Please update soon!!! I love your long chapter (though they always keep me hungry for more!)
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  • From ANON - Videl loves goKU on May 26, 2004
    I am so excited that you updated...yay! Love this story soooooo much...this chapter was adorable...very cute...want more soon please...this is one of the best fics ive read...in my faves this story is just as good as animechick's rin/sess stories...GREAT JOB!!!! Please update ASAP!!!

    Your Rin/Sess Fan! ^___^
    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - someone from \"Take me Home\" on May 24, 2004
    uh... hi! i was just wondering are you going to continue to write " Take Me Home "? itz like my favorite story by you... so yea... this story is good too though! but i just hoped you'd write more for Take Me Home...

    -a fan
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  • From ANON - gv on May 23, 2004
    i love this story.. i love all sess and rin stories but so far i love this one. please update soon
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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 22, 2004
    I love the chapter. When will Rin and Sess 'relationship' started to go sour. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Irivel on May 22, 2004
    Wo
    Th
    This fanfic is fantastic.
    And they are so cute together!!
    please keep writing
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  • From ANON - me on May 21, 2004
    wow this is realy great even if sessy is realy ooc after you finish with the past go backto the present and workon what happens after the 1st chapter 'cause by starting w the lemon you murdered all of the anticipation (even though i know you probaly started it as a one shot) and you might be able to fix that by focusing on thier relationship just dont give up on the story its great
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  • From ANON - Manda on May 21, 2004
    ohmygosh this story is so sweet! I can't wait to read more! Where did he take her!!!!!!!!!?????????
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  • From ANON - Videl loves goKU on May 21, 2004
    Wow, so cute....damn it run out of words to praise this story...LOVE IT, AMAZING. GREAT, ADORABLE (have i used that one before?), AWESOME, WONDERFUL, PERION!ION! Pleeeeeease write more, i need more....i adore how we are finding out how they fell in love...please write a new chapter soon.

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - koneko-neko on May 18, 2004
    i think i already wrote tjis in an earlier review for "When He Was Mine" but i'll say it again to make sure you know i'm tell you the truth, I LOVE YOU! YOU ARE COMPLETELY PERFECT AND THIS IS ONE OF YOUR BEST STORIES EVER!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mitsue on May 16, 2004
    Lovely chapter, so sweet! Your fic is just perfect, you're an amazing writer. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on May 16, 2004
    I love this updates...how they soon the events that led up to them being more intimate, it's great ....MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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