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Reviews for Innocent Beginnings

By : inumag
  • From ANON - videl loves goKU on May 16, 2004
    OMG OMG, so cute....so cute...and they kissed...(a little one but that's not the point)! Your such an amazing writer please keep this story up...its just wonderful!!! Thank you for writing it...can't wait for more!

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - videl loves goKU on May 04, 2004
    AHHHHHHH! This is so GREAT! SO CUTE! Great Job! I love how you explained their relationship in the first chapter and now you are going to through and telling us how they came to love each other....oooo I can't wait till you write more...I am so eager to find out, how deep their relationship gets, and how sess starts to handle it....ooooooooo I can't wait....GREAT JOB! LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE...PRETTY PLEASE!

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on May 04, 2004
    review for chap one.... I like Maggz girl very nice... I can't wait to move on.... although I may take awhile to catch up on all of it... just wanted you to know .... I am here and loved chap one.... woohoo....

    Huggles
    Mules
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  • From ANON - Videl loves goKU on May 02, 2004
    I have no words...absolutely no words...obessed maybe...lovin it definately...going to go nutz cause this is like one of my favorite stories - ABSOLUTELY! Damn, your such an amazing write and I adore you and your story!! HEHEHE I can't wait till you get the chance to update again...I just love it, adore it, can't live without it..okay I think Im obessed with your story. Hehe j/k....Good luck and thank you so much for writing a rin/sess story!

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - Kaye on May 01, 2004
    He's being so nice to her, he's intrigued with her. I really like this story, it's interesting. Love it! Truly do.
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  • From ANON - me on May 01, 2004
    i love it
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  • From ANON - Mischief on April 27, 2004
    I think this bea beautiful story. I like Sess's OOCness. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - videl love goKU on April 27, 2004
    Absolutely adorable...I love it...have i said that already? I don't know if I did or not...oh well ans...s...GREAT GREAT, grrr I need to lay off the caffine...um I like the fact that we will go through the process of Rin and Sess "falling in love"...it gives the story depth and makes it interesting....can't wait for more...but I have a question...will you go into the future at anytime or after you finish retelling...just wondering...its all good when you write so no worries...ok well I NEED to go to bed....GREAT JOB...love it...absolutely love it...can't wait for more...update when you can please. Thank you for writing an Rin and Sess fic too.

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From Lease242 on April 27, 2004
    I am speechless............................utterly amazing write!!!!!! You have got me hooked, line annkernker. I pray you update fast.
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  • From ANON - Tasuki\'s Flame on April 26, 2004
    Wow I really like this fic. I hope you update soon. Good job keep it up ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kaye on April 26, 2004
    Ok... I don't know about other people but I really like this Sessy. It's nice to see him open. I mean I love the stotic, cold, evil Sessy but really, he's sweCanCan't wait for the next chapter, love it!
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  • From ANON - faychan on April 26, 2004
    Hey Maggz!!! It's your girl Feh-yasha here (one of your many chat room hentai girls!). Anyway great fic you have going here. I loved the OCCness of it, very different than the rest of the Rin/Sess fics floating round here. As for the age thing, cause I'm sure you'll get some flames on that *baka people*, its a good age difference, 12 years isn't so bad. Hell my stepmom is 28 and my dad is 44! Now thats an age difference ^__~ I loved the opening scene, really grabs your attention. Can't wait to read more! Talk to you in the chat...*hugs*

    faychan (AKA feh-yasha)
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  • From ANON - Ryoan on April 26, 2004
    Hey *sticking my tongue out to ANY one that complainis abOOC-OOC-ness* Great story. I don't care OOC-ness or whatever. You wrote it EXCEPTIONALLY WELL *another raspberry to them* Chapter 1 was great!! The other ones were good too, but #1 really stood out. Sess has the hard outside and I believe there's more to him than just being cruel, I think he has a very deep caring inside that he just protect from the world....except Rin. Keep writing like you do. That's what these fanfiction places are for, to write and share our own fantasies of the characters we love!
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  • From ANON - alien_ryoko on April 24, 2004
    YAY CHAPPIE #2!! i luv this chappie; though i really wanted t' read wat will happen r ser sess finally gave into his fellings, i was a lil curious 'bout want happened b4 hand. thanx 4 the update!!! keep 'em comein'.
    -cha-chan *^___~=v
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 23, 2004
    Gotta say I'm liking it, but I have a few questions. Answering them in the story might help it make more sence. Why is Sessh famous? Why was he at the hospital that day?

    There are a few other questions, but those are the 2 most important ones and the story will make much more sence once you answe them.

    Otherwise, I loved it! Interesting take on Sessh and very interesting take on Rin. Please write more!
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