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By : choukitsune
  • From ANON - gfp on July 21, 2004

    the story's really cute but does sesshomaru have to be so stuck up?
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 21, 2004
    Now was Sess really was going to dig in the rubble for Tessiagia (missplled) . His he that deparate to get the sword? While you
    write in the episode in which Inuyasha found the ultimate power of the sword? That was the expose in which Rin first appeared
    and was permanently at Sess's side.May with this one it will be a twist to hit, because it very obvious that Rin want him, maybe
    a near death experience will make him realize it as well. Update really soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - szmadad on July 20, 2004
    Your update is SO welcome! I'd been craving more of OA...and while I'm sad to hear it's winding down, I'm wondering just how things will go. Right now, it seems like there are so many ends to tie up!

    Kagome a lesbian?!? Hehe Naraku's certainly got some macho pride to think that just cuz she wasn't interested in him that she might not be interested in men...after all, Hojo doesn't *really* count, does he? (I'm so mean).

    And I'm glad you explained that the coach HAD been possessed! I mean, how else could he let his 2 best players go otherwise?

    Now you have mevousvous about my poor Inu!! That jerk Sesshy! You'd think his feelings for Rin might've softened his heart towards his own brother -half breed or not! Sessh is rd crd character to redeem in my opinionich ich is why Sessh-Kag stories make me cross eyed and sick.

    :)

    I say Kagome has a vision or dream and goes looking for her injured boyfriend.

    Yeah for Inu-Kag!
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  • From ANON - DRAKE220 on July 20, 2004
    update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!! and such a great update!!! i loved it! sess was portrayed perfectly, so mysterious, so vague in his intentions. loved it! but how dumb is rin?!?! HELLO????? the guy bought you a car!! A CAR! or, and heres a shocker, ASK HIM WHY! ::gasp:: oh my god, ask?!?!? revolutionary concept!
    loved this chapter.
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  • From SilverFox on July 18, 2004
    O.o! I LOVED IT! WOOOO-HOOOOO! Yeah! Sesshoumaru and rin sittin' in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g! ^_^ Heh heh...sorry...couldn't resist! But like I said! Great chapter! Sesshoumaru is opening up a bit more to Rin...^_^ I can't wait to find out what happens next between them! As for Sango...I forsee more heartbreak if she continues down this path...Poor thing I stfeelfeel very sorry for her! What she is going through is terrible, but at least she is now training in the art of demon slaying. * sighs * Well I hope you can update soon! Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - shaina on July 13, 2004
    I reallly love your story. It's very exciting, but i love the romantic relationships more. It's so sweet that shess bought rin a car. I loved how inu and kagome are getting more intimate. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - MC on July 11, 2004
    I absolutely love SessXRin pairing. This was a sweet chapter between the two! I'm looking forward for more between the two! Until then, keep up with the great work. :D
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 11, 2004
    this was SUCH a sweet lovely chapter! sess's internal confusion as to how exactly to go about courting rin was hysterical! you could sense sess's dry and logical mind turning the problem over in his mind, examining it from every angle. 'Hmm...no dead cows at her doorway," HAHAHHAHAHAHAA!!!! loved that line, i was laughing out loud, it was so damn funny.sess and rin's relationship is adorable adn i love that hawk demoness. she's a riot. oh, adn sango's semi-obsessive need to kill demons is being portrayed wonderfully.you can st sst sense her mental fragility. keep up the fabulous work!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 10, 2004
    I enjoyed Rin and Sess. Sess needs to be force to confess his feelings to Rin. Maybe he need some encouragement.
    Maybe a old boyfriend or a former close male friend of Rin. When will Sango get her big boomarang? Update soon.
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  • From SilverFox on June 30, 2004
    ^_^ I finally got to catch up! Being away from a computer for a week is hard! Anyhoo, great chapters! I can't believe all that has happened so far. Kagome and Inuyasha, Sango and Miroku, the death of Sango's family! It was a lot to take in, but I find it strange that Inuyasha and Miroku got benched like that! Something fishy is going on I tell ya! ^_~ And it smells of Naraku! Bah! The lousy lout! I can't wait for the next chapter! Its going to ROCK! Until next time!
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  • From ANON - szmadad on June 26, 2004
    Thank you for the clarification!

    I kinda thought that when you mentioned Onigumo, you were referring to Naraku but couldn't remember if I had read it in your story earlier or not :)

    Still, for one guy to suddenly compensate for 2 top players...and for the coach to go kinda postal on the said players...I still think that some dark magic or mind control is at play....hehe...the coach is actually one of Naraku's detachments, isn't he? How funny would that be...I mean, we all know that high school coaches can be monsters - or mabye possessed (of course I'm going off of memories of my field hockey coaches....very scary...very, very scary) !

    Looking forward for the week to pass so I can read what's happening in Sessh's head.

    :)

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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 25, 2004
    Aaaah to bad that Kouten was not an old flame. That would put Sesshoumaru in even a more fowl mood. Thank you for making
    this chapter more on Rin and Sesshoumaru. As you can tell I absolutely love those two characters. I think they should be more
    Rin and Sess fics or at least have more story lines. Please more of them if you can and update soon.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on June 25, 2004
    Again, you rock. I like your character development chapters so much...and can forgive you for not writing solely about Kag-Inu. I mean, in my *ideal* world, everything would revolve around those two...but that's my little OCD brain :)

    There are too many things for me to comment on ...so I'll just say the inane usual comment - your story is so entertaining, I mean it's one of the few that I avidly track on AFF.net

    Please don't be disheartened by nitpicky reviews...tho I can see why one would be. I've come to appreciate how difficult it is to be put together a story that is plot driven, entertaining, as well as constantly evolving. And to do it alloneone's *spare time*...I mean, it's not like you're doing this for pay...but more out of your personal interest.

    I as a fan of fanfiction am happy that you continue to provide me with entertainment ...and eagerly away the next update!

    PS so one guy -Onigumo - has replaced 2 boys? or is the coach under some spell? there's no justice there. hmmm maybe the boys will get on Oni's case to figure out his secret?!
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  • From ANON - szmadad on June 25, 2004
    Another entertaining chapter; your modernization of the story is really clever -case in point, Sango's family killed in a car accident rather than a massacre...and I wonder just how Kohaku helped cause the accident. Poor Sango! It's funny, Naraku only has 1 shard, right? Yet he can still manage to cause so much havoc.

    Does Sessh have any thoughts on his lilttle brother dating a human miko? I'm sure he must've smelled Inu all over kagome when he kept her from bowling Rin over...

    And wow...Toga was Inu's dad? That IS different. I'm just dying to see how this all plays out the then Inu isn't a reincarnation of Toga..he's just a close descendant..whereas Kagome is a reincarnation of his dad's former love? That's kinda an odd tangle, no?

    Looking for the next update :)
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  • From ANON - Tom on June 24, 2004
    Hello again. First off the nation is Nippon not Japan. Call said nation Japan will piss people off.
    Semper Fidelis

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