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Reviews for Overcoming Adversity

By : choukitsune

From ANON - BooBooKitty27892 on May 25, 2004
Hi, I really like this fic a lot. I was just wondering since you seem to know a lot about Japanese language, Do R's in Japanese sound like L's in english. In Spirited Away the older maid who takes care of the girl in the beginning, they caer er 'Lynn' but it is spelled Rin like the Inu-Yasha Rin. I was wondering if you knew. My boyfriend is telling me I am stupid and that isn't how R's sound in Japanese. I was just making sure if this is correct or not. Thnx.
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From ANON - Kurama Nishi on May 24, 2004
Yo! ^ ^ i�ve read all of your chapters so far, and i think the sorry is coming along quite nicely! I'm an author as well, and i know how it is when you get a bad review. It can kind of put you down; especially when they do it in a mean way. But for me, it was another nice review to make me feel better! So keep at it, you got a really good story and i want to read what happens next!

~ Nishi Kurama (aka Kiyasha)

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From ANON - staind on May 24, 2004
Well I just read your note and I must say that I'm a tad shocked. I mean, I never really read the reviews unless it's a long story so I haven't been keeping up with yours. (Been keeping tabs on yours since first chapter.) I had to review and give you my support. I love your story and Ieveneven put it on my recommended reading list. I really wish you would continue and not leave us (me) hangin'. So I would ignoignore all teopleople that don't like it, cuz well, they don't know what they're talkin' about. Please continue writing! And by the way, make it snappy! ~Loryn
Oh by the way, your site is pretty snazzy. Keep up the good work, and I hope for you to finish this story and work on the other ideas that you've posted on your site! ;) Chao!
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From ANON - Fireminx on May 24, 2004
Wow...people are that picky? Maybe I am just easy to please, but I never really cared which way people spelled the sword's name. As long as I can distinguish between Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's, what's the big deal?
And I totally know what you mean when people make a review that says they hope X doesn't happen when you were planning on including X. I had a review that really didn't want me to include Kikyou even th I h I felt she was a crutial cctercter in Inuyasha's past. So I said screw it. I put her in anyway. The first fan to please is myself. So I say ignore the second guessers. Your story is awesome. Do what you want to do, write what you want to write.
And if someone complains...well there is that nice review removal button available, hehehe.
Ganbatte! (>^-^
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From ANON - CrashsAngel on May 24, 2004
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I just read the whole 10 chapters yesterday and didn't have time to review last night. I love this story. It's well written and I haven't noticed too many mistakes. And if I did notice any, I can't remember them, so they must be all that bad. And the plot is definately a good one.
And as for the person that guessed where you were going with the fic and then practically begged you to, to, I say screw them. It's your fic. So what if they don't like it. They don't like it, they can stop reading. I've lost count of how many people have literally begged me to not make Condom City a Sess/Kag fic. Guess what. That's what it was planned as from the very beginning. You aren't going to be able to make every single reader happy, so just make yourself happy, or else you won't enjoy writing anymore, and it will ruin something fun if you try to make other people happy while sacrificing your own happiness. Sometimes you just need to forget the rest of the world exists, and do what you want to do. I'm not saying go out and steal or cheat to get what you want and say 'screw the consiquences.' I'm saying, you need to do what makes you happy, and I hope stealing and cheating won't make you happy. Just do what you want to do with this fic, and if you lose some readers, big whoop. It'll probably make the story even better, and attract even more readers than what you lose.
Oka, that's enough of life philospy from me.
Later - CrashsAngel
P.S. I have some fics on affn posted under this name, so check them out if you want. Ja
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From ANON - shaid on May 24, 2004
hey! It seems to be going well! I hope you can update again soon! I've really enjoyed the story so far. Please continue!
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From ANON - EditorDee on May 24, 2004
YOU GO GIRL!!!! Don't listen to them! And frankly, forget them, I like how the story is going. I think that you should write it how you deem fit. I think that it is a marvelous blend of AU and the actual anime. So don't let the naysayers get you down. And frankly, I must say, good for you for putting them in their places with the tessaiga/tetsuaiga....crap i can't spell, you know what I mean. Cartoon Network knows shit for japanese, as is evidenced by the butchering of: hin,hin, Inu Yasha, YuYuHakush and many others, because they are silly and can't translate right.

Once again, write what you want to write. And know this, I'm still reading it. I love your story. And I know that however you decide to finish it is called a writer's creativity. Don't let them tell you how to finish *youtorytory!

That's all! Right. Keep writing, I'm expecting a new chapter soon! ^~

~Editor Dee
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From ANON - drake220 on May 24, 2004
i liked this chapter a lot (especially inu's skating lesson and rin/sess thing) but one question: why did inu need to take off his scarf? i mean, is it like in all those 'maly' movies where the gun toting overly muscled bonehead's cannot possibly go to war with a shirt on? (can you tell i hate those type of movies?) just curious.
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From SilverFox on May 24, 2004
Oh-ho! Its getting better I say! ^_^ I can't WAIT to find out what happens next...I just hope what ever does happen, doesn't result in the Wind Tunnel...That would be a bad thing! Until next time!
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From ANON - Jazmine on May 23, 2004
i like it very much. you are VERY creative. please keep going
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From ANON - New Fan on May 23, 2004
Awesome story so far (I just read your story for the first time fchapchapter 1 to 10). I can not wait what happens next. Update soon.
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From on May 23, 2004
Oooh, ooh, ooh!!! I loved this chapter (10 that is). I wondered how long it would be before Naraku or one of min minions tried to go after Kagome. The guy Naraku met in the parking lot; was that Kohaku or Jaromaru (or however you spell it)? Exactly how fast did Inu run into that wall? I've done that before (a long time ago) and it hurts like hell if you go face first. Then Sesshomaru saved Rin's life. Like we didn't anticipate it? Yeah, I did, but it's still heart warming none-the-less. This is a great story and I hope to see another update soon. If I didn't love it, would I be reading it at 4:00 a.m.?
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From Atropa on May 23, 2004
Ihh, it's only getting better and better... !!
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From ANON - LadyCatBailey on May 22, 2004
LMAO Yasha hit a wall...*snickers insanely* Sorry. Found that amusing. LOL XD

Meanwhile...*turns white, clutches chest, falls over choking* OMG OMG OMG OMG. LOL Okay, had my hysterics. Dear Gods, I hpe Yasha kicks some serious ass. *breaks out IY flags* Yasha Yasha he's our man if he can't do it we're fucking screwed! WHEEEWOOHHH! o.o

Way to much sugar for Kitty

I can't wait to see more...and some more Rin/Sess, too cute! *giggles and cooes at them* Meanwhile...Snogage...oh yeah...Kago got snogged mehehehehe...I wanna get snogged...*pout* LOL

Much Love,
Cat
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From ANON - szmadad on May 22, 2004
Ok, I hope that this time AF will accept my humble review! Grr...ok, even the frustration of having to retype will not take away my happiness at seeing yet another update to your story! :)

First, off a big *thaou* ou* for the Inu-Kag cuteness at the roller rink...some fun and a kiss (ooh, already I'm looking out for the next one...) all before the big fight at the end of the chapter.

Wow, talk about heating the story up - Sessh and Inu both get "outed," Naraku's minion goes after Kagome, the boys make the football team, Inu "outsmarts" Sessh, Kagome's grandfather actually has spiritual powers (or is just borrowing from Miroku's family?), my poor little brain is spinning with excitement about what direction you'll take next.

Ahh...and what will the gang's reaction be to Inu's true form...particularly what does Kagome think about her unofficial boyfriend (yeah, so when are they going to get official?). ;)

I know that most of us who frequent this site are dying for some hentai action between the two, but I have to say that I love how you're taking time to develop their relationship...I mean, they're so new to one another; she's innocent and he's so new to dealing with humans for an extended time period...

As always, can't wait for more! And please don't get disheartened by negative reviews (do you really get them?! why?!?!)....you're doing *great* :)
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