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By : flowers
  • From ANON - Jcirce on April 28, 2004
    I have enjoyed your fanfiction so much! I love it, its creative and it keeps to the true nature of that characters. I was getting really sick of the fast change in Sesshomaru's charcter whenever he falls in love with Kagome. This is a story that keeps the reader reading. Oh andaaanaaank You for not letting Kagome get pregnant, thats overused as a fanfiction love excuse. THank you and please update quickley!
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  • From ANON - Fallen on April 27, 2004
    Wow! You update so quickly and this new chapter is excellent. Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on April 27, 2004
    Loved the last chapter! You really are a good writer. Thank you! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Gina on April 27, 2004
    Yes! ::yells back:: It's not a pregnancy fic! We can all relax!
    I loathe pregnancy fics, unless it's an AU and it actually works with the plot, and doesn't complicate it. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - MysticInca on April 27, 2004
    This is a VERY good fic. I love the idea, the plot and all of the drama and angst.... I'm soooo damn glad someone out there knows how to write Sesshomaru, I'm happy that you have kept him to character and added to him. Don't worry about loosing readers, cause you just gained one here.

    Please continue with this, its very good.

    MysticInca
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  • From ANON - Tomoe on April 27, 2004
    I realy love this story. Your portray Seshoumaru so differently than what I could read in others fics, but so realistically!
    thatthat blend of romance and angst is really setting an eery mood.

    I guess I'm nit-picking there, but I would like to point that heat, the fertile period when the female scent is attractive, is actually before the bleeding. The bleeding is the result of an unsuccessful heat where the body undo it's preparations for pregnancy and start a new cycle. For humans, the bleeding happens about 14 days after ovulation. I'm not sure for us because we've lost the use of our nose, but I do know that for cats, the scent will get increasyngly stronger during the first days, then gradually fade, all in about a week and a half. Some women that learned to be perfectly in tune with their bodies have reported a noticeable increase in libido of two to three days in the middle of their cycle, wich would correspond to their fertile time.
    Plus, the scent during the bleeding is an effective repulsive to males.
    Anyway, wouldn't it be better for your story if there were no blood in the way?

    Well... I don't mean to aggravate yor tor to say you should rewrite that chapter. I just wanted you to know so you can decide how you'll write those heat concept next time. More often than not, people get this wrong and as a scientist, I can't help but explain *sheepishly looking at the mod of fans shouting to mind my own business*
    oh well... Write more! I want to see where this is going!

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  • From ANON - Venus on April 27, 2004
    What can i say?? I really, meaning really like your fic! the ideaveryvery original!! i got a favor to ask u, can u please email me when u update?? thank u!! bulma_secrets@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on April 27, 2004
    dark? *blink blink* this is supposed to be dark? *poke, search* where is the darkness?

    seriously. . .
    this is wonderfully written with a well thought out plot, good romance, realistic handling of characters and situations and a very mature tone. . . but dark. . . makes me wonder how much dark stuff you have experienced. . . this is mature, a very excelent balence between angst and romance, with just a touch of well placed violence to add some spice. . .

    dark is all violence and angst, blood and rape and mental torture, uncaring and stark. . . i have read a few dark fics. . . one called "Master" which can be found on fanfiction.net(author is RyanOokami) stands out as an excelent example. i have a couple dark fics(and lots of dark poetry). . . my darkest fic is "The Knife-Edge" which is almost finished. one i have recently started is "Hantai no Dekigoto" and the first two chapters have quite a bit of darkness(being brutally raped by two of one's best friends definitely counts as dark), though my muses are pushing for a relitively happy ending. . .

    i'm afraid if a truly dark fic is what you where going for. . . well, to be blunt, then you failed. this is wonderfully written though and i wouldn't have it any other way.

    sorry. . . i saw dark and i jumped on this story. i guess i'm a tad dissapointed that it wasn't dark. . . i reiterate though, this is an excelent story! i'll be looking forward to more. . . but now i have to sleep, ja mata!
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  • From migele on April 27, 2004
    well its used in many fics but that is a new point.
    the total contral...
    I read a lot of sess fics but I can't remember any with this point.

    I'll be happy to take links to good fics...


    migi-chan
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on April 27, 2004
    Good chapter, I love the way you portray your characters and their situation just breaks my heart. I can't help feeling sorry for Kagome.

    Keep up the good work!

    Gia
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  • From ANON - Cordelia on April 26, 2004
    Hi,
    I love this story. I finished the 18th chapter today. :)
    I have recommended this story to all my friends at school. :)
    Hope to read more,
    ~Cordelia~
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  • From ANON - Venus on April 25, 2004
    I love your fic so far!! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tara on April 25, 2004
    Hi Flowers,

    I read your comment at the beginning of chapter 18 and I just wanted to let you know that I wasn't the least bit 'put off' by chapter 17. Although I do remember my first thought after reading the author's not at the end went something like, "…and haou eou ever sought professional help for that?" Oops, did I say… errr… I mean ummm type that out loud? Ahhh ummm Just Kidding! Really!

    No Really, I have been following your story since you put the first chapter up and I love it. It's so very different than most, well actually all, of the other Sesshoumaru and Kagome stories I've read. It just seems so much more realistic than most others. It's too bad this story wasn't out in time for 'A Single Sparks' annual fanfiction awards I would have definitely nominated your story for the best portrayal of Sesshoumaru category (and possibly several others) because in my opinion No one has come even close to doing as good a job realistically portraying charcharacter as you have.

    I would also like to compliment you on how quickly and regularly you update your story. As a dedicated fanfiction junky I am deeply grateful to you for the 'fixes' I derive from your story. Yeah… And I was saying what? About someone seeking professional help….? Anyway….. I think I gotta go read something or something like that now. Keep up the Great work and I can't wait to read the rest!

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  • From ANON - ghettoside_gangsta on April 25, 2004
    I think that your story is awsome! Don't change a thing and PLEASE keep those updates coming!
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  • From ANON - angel on April 25, 2004
    i really like your story ...... and belive me when i say i realy dont write reviews all that often , when i read other ppls storys. but your was more expacting : what i mean by that is when i get to my computer i hope to read another chapter of your story to see how far you can go with the your thoughts and your crative side about the story. in my opinon your flight has just begun ^_^
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