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  • From ANON - Fuchsia on November 06, 2005
    Einfach wundervoll, or for the english and american people out there..... really amazing!! I'm impressed...and not able to express it in words.
    As I am german and totally obsessed with english fanfiction especially those about Inuyasha and Hellsing, I came to read quite a lot of
    them but I never happened to read one that left me speechless.... congratulations, your writing skills are awesome!!
    The realtionship you created between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is exactly as I've imagined it when thinking first about the possibility of such a bonding...complicated and yet wholesome...I really love it.
    A relationship always turns out to be quite complicated and vexing, you certainly got that point across in your fic!!
    I hope to hear/read more of you (and please update the rest of "Elsewhere" as soon as possible, even though I have already read it
    a dozen times I can't wait to read it again!!) and take every small amount of free time you can possibly get to add a chapter to "Fumbling towards Ecstasy".
    Yours ever Fuchsia
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  • From ANON - Sesshoumaru on November 03, 2005
    This, Sesshoumaru, orders you to update this immediately.
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  • From ANON - RainStorm on October 31, 2005
    Well, Well, Well!!! I almost had my wish to come true. "So close, yet so far away", I think is the saying I have in mind. I haven't given up though (smile) PEACE!!!
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on October 31, 2005
    *whimpers*..Please update...I can't take it anymore
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 30, 2005
    Wow! I missed a lot. It's nice that you gave Sesshoumaru such instinctual responses. But, damn! I would have probably given him more shit about being dragged off and then let him hear me tell my mom exactly what was going on just to piss him off. Sorry, I'm a bit miffed at Sesshoumaru right now, which means that you did a good job. LOL I'm glad you explained your reasoning behind the 'heat'. I know from growing up with a female german shepherd that this is true. But, with humans, before the blood, the female goes through the real heat as her body prepares for impregnation. That would have been a good one to use against Sesshoumaru while he was trying to stay away from Kagome.

    I really love the way that you are portraying the two of them. Stubborn, but as respectful, and respectable, as possible. You've done a great job keeping their personalities true to cannon while giving growth at the same time. (BTW, I'm still miffed at Sesshoumaru and if I were Kagome's mother, I'd stomp over to his house and give him a piece of my mind. Kidnapping jerk.)

    OMG! The lime was incredibly hot and dangerous. I'm melting. Sex and danger, good combination.

    I don't know if I have ever reviewed, but this has been a very intriguing read. I'm going to have to put you into my favorites so that I don't miss out again.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - RainStorm on October 30, 2005
    Thank You so much for updating!!! I love the direction you are headed in. It is my own personal desire, that Sessh gets Kagome pregnant, and that they have a true and committed relationship. I also hope that you and I are in synch (please * please * please). I have been following your story for quite a while, and it has been worth the wait. Thank you for that (sincerely)! PEACE!!!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on October 30, 2005
    OMG..I stayed up until noon reading these (i found them pretty late at night)...I hope you update really soon...I was so disappointed when I got to the end..I'm on the edge of my seat!
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  • From ANON - A.J. on October 30, 2005
    You updated!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you so much! I love these two new chapters and the fact that Kagome is finally staying at Sesshy's house. Her mother is so gonna freak!! Great job on these chappies and keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Henrietta on October 29, 2005
    An update! Another two wonderfully written chapters just when I needed them - I think I've quite fallen in love with you now. Haha. Not sure what you have planned for those two after days in such close proximatey, but I have my hopeful suspicious. It didn't seem overdone or pat, the way you presented it was fresh. Certainly, there is a reason it has been utilized in fics before.

    I have to say - I LOVED the jealousy. When he interrupted Houjo and Kagome and took his seat -that scene was just.so.good! As a matter of fact, I need to go back after reviewing and read that again. ;)

    The meeting with Mrs. Higarashi had me on the edge of my seat. When he narrowed his eyes at her...oh, so good. Good thing for Kagome's fast thinking (and sudden movements). Later, Kagome was a bit dissapointed at the way she was 'abducted' near the end of Chapter 19, but I thought the no-nonsense and demanding manner that he took her was so very Sesshoumaru (and left me a bit breathless). Looking forward to what comes next...


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  • From ANON - Luna on October 29, 2005
    ooh cant wait to see what happens with kagome and sesshomaru for those next days! i dont think he will be able to stay away from her haha... anyway, great chapter, cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - nihilatrix on October 29, 2005
    I really hope that she manages to arouse his more gentle side, and she gets some that she can enjoy without the pain...Sex is really good for relieving cramps and shortening a period! (I'm speaking from my own experiences of course.) I really hope you update this soon...I want to know what happens next!! By the way, your hillbilly friend isn't entirely wrong..not all dogs bleed noticeably when in heat every time, but many of them, especially the larger breeds do.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on October 29, 2005
    OH MY GOD..I have read alot of sesshy fic...and this....this is amazing..I've only read the first chapter and I'm absolutely speachless....this is the perfect premise...everythign seems so plausable to the origanal story line...I've only read the first chapter and I can all ready tell this is the BEST story I've ever read...

    Wow...I may cry!

    Thank you so much for writing it!
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  • From morgansgirl23 on October 19, 2005
    Hey there, I was just wondering if "Elsewhere" is a completed story? I haven't read "Fumbling Toward Estasy" yet because I wasn't sure if the story was over. Please drop us fans an author's note to let us know where to continue. Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - RainStorm on September 01, 2005
    OMG, Great Job!!! I have no complaints, but I do have some questions. Where is Koga and Shippo? Shouldn't they be around somewhere? I would think she would ask about them. So, I would like to request that you have her try to find them. That's all I have to say. Thank you for doing an outstanding job. This story is one of the GREATS. PEACE!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 01, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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