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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2005
    Hey Woman, where's my fix for this week!!! Just kidding, I know you are probably out of town or busy.
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  • From ANON - 1 on July 12, 2005
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  • From ANON - Skanky-Hime on July 11, 2005
    holy crap, more please! wow...the way you do a sex scene...the way you do all scenes...jeez. You're great, really, one of the best fanfic writers ive read so far. Please write more. I have to know about the after-math.
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  • From ANON - DarMystic on July 08, 2005
    It was very very good....well im sure it was good up until the last part lol. Damn...I wanna touch his markings! All of them! Lol. *smacks herself out of it.* Ahem...Good story yeah...*thumbs up.* keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Bianca on July 07, 2005
    OH MY GOD THIS STORY IS SO FUCKING COOL!! I usually don't like the Sess/Kag pairing but this story got to me. Wow keep going with this because you stopped at the good part.^_^ I mean it sucks that Inuyasha died though. I wish he didn't. And the other thing that sucks is that the well was sealed too. I hope in this story that Kagome meets Shippou. I really do. Because I love the little crdder^_^. Well update SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on July 07, 2005
    I absolutely loved this last chapter. You know I love the game. Sess lost it. It's going to take a lot of his blood to fix her this time I'll bet. What I want to know is if he went all the way. I mean, it appears so but doesn't expressly say it. I wonder if Kag's got more than she bargained for. Anywho, awesome chapter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - NewKitty on July 07, 2005
    *waiting on edge of seat*
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  • From Henrietta on July 07, 2005
    I'm speechless! I'm really having a difficult time putting my reaction to this chapter into words. That was such a powerful scene. Both their reactions to the encounter were intense. And to think Sess had the nerve to feel guilty about it Afterwards - heh. I liked how he trembled in the end there--both similar and vastly different from his previous actions. I love how you used the 'challenge, retreat, chase...', it rings true. And that Sara McLachlan song quote--how fitting was that?
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 07, 2005
    Wow, Sesshy went pretty far in that, didn't he. Great chapter though, don't mess with demons is the lesson for today.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2005
    This freakin' rocks.
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  • From ANON - RainStorm on July 07, 2005
    Wow, that was the quickest first time sex I've ever read. I take it you're captivating your audiance, and it worked on me. Was it rape, did he severely hurt her? Please don't take long to update, because I want to know what's going on. Keep up the good work. PEACE!!!
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  • From ANON - RainStorm on July 03, 2005
    I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! It's very well written and I love the plot. Please allow Sessh and Kagome to go and find Shippo and Kouga. Don't forget Kouga. I like the way you allow both characters to stay true to themselves. It has to be so difficult for Sessh to live in today's world, when the world contrast his true self, the beast within. Kagome isn't having a nicer time with her heart in the past , so both are living a lie. What's the answer to their problem. Obviously it's within each other. Please keep you're creative hat on, because my hat is off to you so far. Keep up the good work. PEACE!!!
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  • From ANON - Shard on July 01, 2005
    I'm loving the chance to read this story again. It's one of my favorites but I had forgotten the title, thaks for reposting it. I have been wondering if you thought of continuing where this one leaves off, if so that would be so cool. Once again a pleasure to read this one again and hope to read more from you in the future.
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  • From Henrietta on June 30, 2005
    This chapter was, was...incredible! It began with a few innocent and fun situations--Kagome talking to friends with a little motherly interference, awkward phone conversations, Kag enjoying the drive to the beach. But then you heated things up a bit with Sess's practice and Kagome's reaction. The scene of advancing and retreating in the water really made sense somehow--your perception of how Sess's instincts might drive his actions is perceptive. I also like how you make Sess so blunt--he would not have the typical human reservations about discussing relationships, intentions, and even sex, would he? The blood tasting scene after was nothing if not completely HOT! You left us with quite a cliffhanger. I can only hope you update soon *pluuuease*.
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  • From Henrietta on June 30, 2005
    You are too sweet--two chapters. And this first (11) as brooding and tense, but in a very good way. The sexual tension was terrific. Their mixture of dialogue and thoughts seemed to flow more smoothly than ever. Off to read ch. 12.
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