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  • From ANON - FayeMegan on June 30, 2005
    wow! This is so intense! I LOVE IT!! It has even brought me to tears a few times! I simply cannot wait for more!!! GREAT JOB!!! awesome!
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  • From ANON - weezer chi - Dani on June 30, 2005
    oooooh awesome. i really liked these two chaps - i wanna know what happens next! ^_^

    just to let you know, i will be gone for the next six weeks miles away from internet and such. at a camp in the mountains.. but i will finish reading this fic when i return.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on June 28, 2005
    Woah! Chapter 1, and you've got the canon for the ending of InuYasha right! However, knowing what I know of R. Takahashi's works, that would be the ending with a 'happily ever after'.

    Nice A/U continuation you have though.
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on June 27, 2005
    *tears* there are more chaps out there * tears, wishin she had caught this flic before you started reposting* Update soon please....thank you
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on June 27, 2005
    very very very very very good,, wonderful writing style entrancing really
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  • From ANON - A.J. on June 27, 2005
    I love this story!! I mean I LOOOVVVEEE this story!! It's original and moderately paced. I can't wait for the next chappie. Great job!!
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  • From Henrietta on June 27, 2005
    I'm so shocked, and mighty pleased! I never would have expected you to have the two of them move so fast after all Sesshoumaru's gentlemanly behavior. And that was one hot almost-love scene. What was particularly great about this chapter was your portrayal of Sess. You weren't afraid to give him a violent and dark side. It was nice as well that you had Kagome be fairly accepting of it, and it was funny how it shocked Sesshoumaru. Thanks for the treat.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on June 27, 2005
    Absolutely spellbinding. Damn, he's violent. I wonder if Kagome could handle a night of passion with him. Geeze! Great chapter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From notezbingweez90 on June 27, 2005
    once again, brilliance. i absolutely love your work!
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  • From Henrietta on June 26, 2005
    Lovely chapter! The conversation, settings, and Kagome's thoughts on Sess's personality were beautifully written. Some of your descriptions really left a strong impression with me. Also, this chapter, though low in action seemed to flow more smoothly than the previous few. I'll be looking forward to more chapter updates.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on June 25, 2005
    Find myself drawn to the new sessy. Speacialy that last part! >.< So so hottness. ^_^ Anyways enough of my rambling, please continue this story, and update soon. Kagome shoulda kissed him while she was drunk and had the chance, I woulda! >.> Prob woulda ended bad.... but still gots to take chances lol. Update soon, and as a last min thought hurry i love this story!
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  • From Henrietta on June 23, 2005
    Wow--that was a powerful ending--got me all charged up. I liked the set up of the entire chapter as well, of course. I liked the line about Sesshoumaru speaking of himself as an 'old evil...'. But, again, was not certain what you meant to have happened between the two of them--did they simply embrace, was it something sexual (since he had to dress her for bed)? Have come to the conclusion that you enjoy teasing us readers, you bad girl you! Great chapter. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From Henrietta on June 23, 2005
    More abrupt questions from Sess (money), but Kagome seemed glad to help. It is interesting to note their different reactions to the most subtle words/action. Noticed he ran back to sneak a peak at Kagome like the stalker he is.

    The drive in the car was fun. My fav line went something like 'watching him switch gears was pornographic'. I got a little confused about Kagome's reaction--was he sensing that she felt attraction. Based on his musings, Sesshoumaru seems to be going through some kind of youkai renaissance! His emotions are awakening (?) and he's becoming interested in connecting with those around him--or Kagome at least! The hand holding was very touching, as well as Kagome's reaction to the prayer beads (and Sess's awkwardness heh heh).


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  • From ANON - weezer chi on June 22, 2005
    holy crap. more awesomness. please continue! PLEASE
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  • From ANON - cinema_strange_inamorata on June 22, 2005
    I loved this story the first time I read it. Wasn't it posted finished somewhere else? Are you the original author?
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