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By : flowers
  • From Henrietta on June 22, 2005
    Oh, oh, do I really have to stop reading? This was such a great chapter. You really shocked your readers, as well as Kagome, with that little 'eating and drinking' questions. I think I blushed red too! The entire conversation was well-done, including that part and beyond. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru sees Kagome as an equal--it will make for some interesting conversations, and maybe a little more soul searching, between the two of them. Very much looking forward to it. As for your editing, you seem to be doing a fine job. It flows well and did not notice any errors. *sob* may have to read and review the rest later.
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  • From Henrietta on June 22, 2005
    Wow--there are now several new chapters--yeah! Am experiencing time-management issues this week, so won't be able to read them all at one sitting (very sad about this, btw). Another great chapter--I enjoyed the descriptions of Kagome getting all fixed up--Sess is such a stalker! Your description of Sesshoumaru on the couch was terrific, back to his old self, unchanged by time (inner fangirl goes nuts). I liked the pony tail. Was picking out his clothes a challenge? I know I never can think of what he would wear--modern, classic, designer, hip? Yours fit just fine. You seem to give each chapter a stong finish--which is nice. Their dialogue and thoughts at the end shows them warming up, but then Sess just drops the bomb about watching her for years. Kagome's thought that he could make any statment sound nice was funny.
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  • From ANON - weezer chi on June 21, 2005
    AHH! once again, superb!
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  • From SirenicSprite on June 21, 2005
    I can't wait until you finish re-posting this story. The first time it slipped past me, but luckily I found it. So far it is very realistic, which puts it high in my book. Realistic stories seem to be the only kind I can stomach. They are all I read and write. Please re-post quickly!
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  • From ANON - weezer chi on June 20, 2005
    WOW. is all i can say. your grammar and writing style is excellent! you potray everything realistically, and you write very convincingly. this is a wonderful story an di cant wait for the next chapter!

    your new fan, Dani
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 20, 2005
    INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING...I THINK THAT THIS STORY HOLDS GRATE PROMISE OF BECOMEING SOMETHING MORE, AND I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC SOON....I AM ALSO LOOKING FORWORD TO SOME STEAMY LOVE SCENS..[I.E. AS IN LEMONS....HEH, HEH, SORRY DON'T MIND ME, IUST MY DARK HENTAI SIDE COMEING OUT.] ANYHOO TOTALY LOVE YOUR WORK, AND I HOPE THAT YOU KEEP WRITING.
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  • From ANON - catwoman316 on June 20, 2005
    I really enjoyed reading the story, it is interesting to see Sesshomaru so... well, shy...and Kagome's reaction.
    Update soon!!!!
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  • From Henrietta on June 19, 2005
    Thanks for updating. I will enjoy reading this story as you re-post it. Big fun! I thought you did a great job on introducing the 'new, improved' Sesshoumaru to Kagome. It was a nice touch to change the name as well--it would be a bit awkward to live with humans with a name like Perfect Killer or however its translated.
    Looking forward to the meeting and q & a session in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on June 18, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this story, I had always cotemplating about what if's for after the seriess(which I haven't finished just yet) and this happened to be one of them.. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From Henrietta on June 18, 2005
    Oh, read your AN about the chapters from this fic being deleted accidently. I would love to read the entire fic, especially sine you have parts of the sequel up already. Is there anywhere I can read it in its entirity? Do you have it posted elsewhere? Are you planning on posting the chapters on AFF again, one by one.
    Whatever the case, looking very much forward to reading it, and afterwards the sequel.
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  • From Henrietta on June 18, 2005
    Yes, this is a different sort of fic, but quite nice! I am enjoying reading Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's introspection. And, the fan girl thing (for Sess) was very funny.
    I especially enjoyed the interaction between human Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru--its was touching and believable.

    Oh, the cliffie at the end was tough--you must love to torture your readers. But, I enjoyed the last line about finding Sesshoumaru there being worse than finding a robber/rapist--ha ha. Am very much looking forward to seeing their interaction in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - catseye on April 17, 2005
    Damn! Where do I start? First off, when I first started reading, I thought, naaa, but kept going. Then I couldnt stop. You had me from page one. lol, I sit here and I find myself at a loss for words of how the story made me feel. In a word, captivated.It was great. nothing what I expected. I was telling my youngest son ,(26), the jist of your story and now he wants to read it as well. He thought I bought a book, then I told him where I found your story. All I know it kept me glued to my computer. Keep writing, your good at it.
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  • From ANON - REDWOLF on February 21, 2005
    Please don't end the story here....like this!! Tell us how they lived and were they happy and was Sess still a jealous fool?? Come on please tell us just a little more of their adventures!!
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  • From ANON - snowfall on February 20, 2005
    Wow! I loved the 'game', the 'ritual'. It was absolutely wonderful. I feel sorry for them though that the first time had to be so bad. Well, I look forward to the next chappie.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - justme on February 20, 2005
    Excellent Story. My hands are shaking from reading it. It kept on the egde of my seat while reading it. Can't wait to read more.
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