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Reviews for Elsewhere

By : flowers
  • From ANON - Julie on February 20, 2005
    What happened to all your chapters? I saw that you updated, but when I went to read it a whole bunch of chapters are missing! I thought there were 28 chapters but now there are only 12. Are you re-writing the story?
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  • From ANON - justme on February 19, 2005
    I am enjoying the story. Looking forward to see what happens next. Nice way to write Sesshomaru through the years.
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  • From ANON - lost child on February 19, 2005
    Ah! Okay I just started reading ur story, okay? and I was going on to chapter 12 and then I dunno what happened, but now there's only 3 chapters. It was just getting good, what happened? I want to read the rest of the story
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  • From ANON - Emily on July 20, 2004
    So I read the first chapter so far, and it's one of the more well-written stories on this site, honestly! I have lots more to read, and methinks YOU have a lot more to write, no? Good stuff!
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  • From migele on April 30, 2004
    that's fun

    I really hope she doesn't do anything too crazy like climbing into his bed or going for Toukejin...

    that would really be stupid..
    but she is hung up on him anyway (right phrase?)

    migi-chan
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  • From SilverFox on November 06, 2004
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    Words escape me at this moment. I've read from the first chapter all the way to your 28th one. And I'm damn glad I did. It took me all night and to 6 am to get here. I can't believe the...Damn its hard to describe what I am thinking at this precise moment, except to say that I have to place this in the "Best damn story catagory here at Aff.net" if there was such a thing. In my mind this resdides with a few other stories I would praise this highly. I don't give compliments liket this lightly. The range of emotions make mine look like a mockery of writing. One dimentional compared to the mutiple ones found here. I can't wait to see how this is going to end....Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Julie on October 10, 2004
    This is a really great story. I noticed you h't u't updated in a few months. Are you going to continue to update?
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  • From ANON - trace on September 14, 2004
    Well-written, mature and plotted so delicately and erotically that I was surprised and pleased by the intricate layers of your story. I don't know how old you are, bour our writing is exquisite and I must say I am so pleased to read a fiction that is grammatically correct, outlined in a way that seems realistic for the antagonist and protagonist and, well, I could go on. I also liked the well-thought out modern day idea of how acceptance is so difficult and the complete breakdown of Sessh.
    I can't say enough about your fiction and I hope you continue to write. Elsewhere was incredible. It is stories like this one that keeps me looking and I have bookmarked it to read again in the future.
    Good job.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on August 10, 2004
    I find myself at aloss for words strong enough to describe the powerfull effect your writing causes. I am truely in awe and also feel slightly jealous of your writing abilities. The way you are able to put deep, heart felt emotions into words that glide so seemlessly together, leaves me in silent admiration.

    I look forward to reading any other fic's you may have already written, as well as any you will write in the future. If you han upn update email you send out, I would appreciate being added to that list.

    Sincerely,




    Dawn H.

    d

    dmh_sunshine@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2004
    i really like your story. how come you haven't updated in a long time? please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Youkai_Sesshoumaru on June 17, 2004
    Oh my gawd! It took me a day and a half to read thus far st ist ignoring writting my own fic), and all I can say is, your story is wonderful! Absolutly stunning! I loved-Loved-LOVED it. Your writing technique is great, and yor imagination must be vivid beyond belief (Just the way I like 'em.) You really managed to relay the strong emotions very well. And you kept the base of their peronalities sharp to reality, which I alway value in a fic. I usually hate fics where they're set in modern times, but this one just caught my eye, and once I started I just fell in love with the detail. Great job! You shall be the privileged, first story to be in my recomended reading. I do-so hope you keep up the good work!

    By the way, If you're interested, since I think great minds think alike, try reading my fic too. Maybe you will like it!
    Here's the link --> http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=25277
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  • From ANON - Icefelis on June 15, 2004
    "Wow" That's the word that comes to my mind to describe your fanfic. This story is beautifull. I truly am impressed. The caracters are well written and your writting style has a flowing quality to it, one with many details that let us rstarstand and feel everything the caracters feel, their anguish, their sadness, etc... You don't rush things either, making things happen in what I would call a nomal progress...Furthermore, it is not easy to write such a long story and keep it interesting all along, as you did...

    So, this is a very good work and I hope to read more soon, and that you will keep on writting afterwards...
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on June 15, 2004
    Words cannot express how beautiful and tragic this wonderful story is. I loved your new chapters the best and by far they are my favorite. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Kagome's dream is realized. I absolutely love how you kept everyone in acteacter and still managed to write something so good.

    Plus, you kept my attention for 28 chapters, which isiraciracle for my part, because I'm so impatient.


    Ja,
    Gia

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  • From ANON - moonkrazy on June 14, 2004
    GREAT! i hope this story goes on and on! one of the best i have read in a long time! Keep up the uber-great work!!

    ~MKP
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  • From on June 14, 2004
    my goodness your such a talented writer with the way describe the story and protray each character.... it is simply pct! ct! especially sesshomaru... god i love it! i am definately putting this one in my favotites list ^^

    ~ja ne
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