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By : flowers
  • From ANON - RED HAT on June 13, 2004
    Thank You for not ending it here!!!!! However, I can't figure out why so many good authors take a stto tto the point of where you just want to know about how they learn to co-exist with each other. Because face it, Sess in this story appears like he would be a VERY jealous mate. You know this would be interesting especially since it's set in modern time. The author of "Dreams" gave her story an everyday look in their lives in that time period! Why can't an author do that with a story set in modern times???? Ok well enough of that... I really loved your story and Thank You fiviniving your readers the pleasure of reading your wonderful story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Leesa on June 12, 2004
    please please please please please continue this....dont leave me hanging now! i am so curious as to what will happen. the story is great and cant wait to find out waht will happen. please update soon. i wait ever so impatiently!
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  • From ANON - Blackkiteekat on June 12, 2004
    My name ought to be listed somewhere, so I'll skip the introductions and get straight to the point... WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST OF IT?! Please oh please oh please post some more soon! I went through hell to get my P.O.S. computer to work and the last chapter turns out to be the worst cliffhanger of all! It's wonderful to read such a well-written story! Your plot twists are excellent (even though they're sadistic, unfair, and generally very evil), your characterization is very complex and well thought-out, and (this usually doesn't matter, it's just a bonus for me) your grammer is nearly flawless! Oh, happy day... (Err... seeing as it's after 11 p.m. right now, happy night would probably be more appropriate) And, before I forget, I must add that I find it very easy to get involved in the story. I hate to admit it, but I had to break out a brand-new box of tissues toward the end of chapter 25. Not too many people can make me do that. =) You are most definitely an excellent author!

    Blackkiteekat

    P.S. I know reviews really help to motivate me, so I'm praying that this one will motivate you to post the next chapter(s) soon!
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  • From ANON - Tamamiko on June 10, 2004
    Your story is outstanding! There aren't enough praises to sing for it... I love how vivid in detail it is. It actually brought me to tears in some parts. I just hope you continue with your fantastic storyline to its end.

    Much praises,
    Tamamiko
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  • From ANON - Lady Tennyou on June 10, 2004
    YAY IT'S GETTING HAPPY AGAIN! in 25.. i like.. bawled.. i was soo angry with u! lol but now.. i feel a lil better! yay!
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  • From ANON - pianita on June 10, 2004
    This last chapter is really beautiful!! I am amazed at how Sesshoumaru and Kagome relationship has deepened and evolved.

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  • From ANON - Feminafures on June 09, 2004
    SO damn good...though Sess is frustrating me a bit. Kag needs to straighten him out and convince him that they belong together. I must say the sadness of this chapter was overwhelming and I was close to crying.

    Ja ne,
    Gia
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  • From ANON - Chiruken on June 09, 2004
    I find myself almost wishing Sesshoumaru gets what he deserves...a swift kick in the nether regions. For a several hundred year old youkai of abaveraverage intelligence...he can sure be a brainless twit. lol He needs a taste of his own medicine and I certainly hope Kagome gives it to him tenfold. Eheheheh **evil laughter**

    I am still captivated by your sto.but.but I think Sesshoumaru is an idiot. lmao Of course...aren't most males in similar situations? Constantly in denial, believing love and tenderness to be signs of weakness. Idiots. ^_~

    Keep up the great work. Hope to see more of this wonderful fic soon.

    ^_^x

    Chiruken
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  • From ANON - gina on June 08, 2004
    BRAVA!!!! really great.. i truely love you story and writing style, but then you knew that aly!!!y!!! i feel like crying. it felt like it was happenio meo me!! really can't wait for more!!!=
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  • From ANON - Chiruken on June 08, 2004
    I just had to pause in my reading to send you a huge thank you for writing this wonderful, wonderful story. I love it!

    The imagery, the tension...the hopes and desires of the characters...all of it has drawn me in and sparked my imagination. I can almost feel myself falling into the story...and falling in love all over again with the characters of Inuyasha.

    I love this new Sesshoumaru...he's still enough of his old self to be convincing, yet tempered by age to be truly likable. And, like any good romance story, he doesn't realize that what he's feeling for Kagome isn't merely instinct...but so much more.

    I look forward to reading more and watching as Sesshoumaru finally realizes that he doesn't see Kagome as another Rin...as the daughter he lost so long before...that, in fact, what he feels for her is true and deep and all consuming. ^_~

    So, yes...thank you so much for writing such a fantabulous fic that has kept me thoroughly entertained and looking forward to each and every chapter with relish. It makes me yearn to write again...

    ^_^x

    Chiruken

    PS It was extremely difficult to pull myself from the story to write a review. **grins** I wanted to continue reading, but felt compelled to and and let you know just how much I am enjoying your fic.
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  • From ANON - Lady Tennyou on June 08, 2004
    i read all 25 chaps. in one morning.. o.0 im sad.. and i swear i almost cried lol i am the Panty Bitch! *threatens you by throwing dirty panties in your face* make me happy damn it!! lol.. Sesshy crying.. wow.. *dies* *returns* please update soon!! i cant.. stand leaving the story with that last chapter lol.. it's killing me!!
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  • From migele on June 08, 2004
    Oh hell
    you are working them far to much!

    migi
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  • From ANON - Belle on June 07, 2004
    This is a fantastic story, you must update soon, because it's tearing my heart to pieces thinking that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are going to suffer because of Sesshoumaru's damn pride.
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  • From ANON - JTB on June 06, 2004
    This has to be one of my most favorite stories. The plot and the characters are very good. I can hardly wait until you update again. Excellent work.
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on June 05, 2004
    So angsty...I love it though. Writer;s block is always tough to break through, but you did just fine on this chapter.

    Ja ne,
    Gia
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