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By : flowers
  • From migele on May 23, 2004
    great stuff!
    I hope the bite each other again...

    migi
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on May 20, 2004
    Fantastic!
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  • From ANON - LadyRainStarDragon on May 20, 2004
    *smashes into brick wall, checks broom to make sure it's ok*

    I hate it when that happens. I get so into the story, and then I hit the last word.

    *Sniffle*

    Anyway, I'm enjoying your flight by the seat of your pants, I'll be tagging along till the end, but slightly to one side. After all, If you're pants are flying, I'm not sure I want to smell why. For all I know, it could be cafeteria bean burritos.

    Anyway, as some famous actor once said, "I'll be back!"

    *hops back on her magical flying broom-o-doom*
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  • From Lease242 on May 20, 2004
    One word comes to mind..............amazing. Hard to believe this is only your 2nd fic. This is one of the very few stories of this length that has kept me thoroughly engrossed each and every chapter. Your lemon was albeit short but well worth the wait. In other words it was perfect.
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on May 19, 2004
    Yeah you updated, I've been waiting patiently..lol. I loved the lemon scene, it was about time those two got together.

    Gia
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  • From ANON - ghettoside_gangsta on May 19, 2004
    I loved this chapter. Please keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Veil of Illusions on May 10, 2004
    Great chapter. What will Aki do? I'm not sure what you have planned for this story but I hope there will be another lemon in here. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on May 10, 2004
    Wow, excellent chapter. I must tell you that you've changed my mind about long fics. This story is definitely worth the read. I'm putting it on my recommended stories list.

    Update soon

    Gia
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  • From ANON - ghettoside_gangsta on May 09, 2004
    I love this story more with each chapter that I read. Please keep the updates coming.
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  • From ANON - Blue_Saiyan_Angel on May 08, 2004
    I wanted to tell you that I am impressed that you have managed to do a "lemon" so to speak and not lose any of the story with it. It seems, in so many stories, that once they get to that pivotal point, that the story just kinda stalls. The scyou you had them in, was crude and to the point, and may I add waaayyyy sexy! But, it was to the point, not too much intimacy considering the nature of the beast. I'm glad to see you are not pushing for the kissy kissy huggie huggie kind of relationship. I think they, or at least he, has too much raw passion for that. Even though they may share affections, doesn't have them eating strawberries in satin sheets. Awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2004
    This is a neat story, but what in the world is wrong with Kagome that she wouldn't start having her period u col college? The story all made sense up until that...
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  • From ANON - Veil of Illusions on May 02, 2004
    loved the new chapter! Yeah, somtiontion would be nice. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on April 30, 2004
    Still here. Still reading. Still loving it!!!!!!!!!!
    Thank you
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on April 30, 2004
    OOh I feel a little mischief coming from Kagome...I can't wait to see what she does. Maybe she'll call Hojo or something and make Sess angry...lol

    Gia
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  • From ANON - catchfire on April 29, 2004
    Great story. Extremely well written. The plotline is excellent. Especially since you don't shy away from delicate subjects. You have a very unique and compelling writing style. Don't let ne tne tell you that Sesshoumaru is ooc He's just been 'mellowed' by age. But he's still his same old icy cold self. Any changes that you've made to him are completely believable since time changes everyone not just humans. Although when it comes to Kagome's character I think she's been a little too timid. What's happened to her fiery temper. She's always stood up to Inuyasha. Doesn't she still have all her miko powers. Like her purifying bow and arrows. Just because the well is sealed doen't mean her powers are gone. I know you wrote at one point that she kind of purified Sesshoumaru and it helpled to calm him down. Perhaps she could do that at other times (ie mating) hopefully helping him to keep his cool better. Although not too cool all us fans like him nice and hot. I think I've been reading your fanfic for far too long. I keep meaning to take a break and read something pointless but like a good book I just keep getting drawn back in. I couldn't escape until there was nothing left to read. I can't wait to see more of this. So. So please hurry up and write more. And don't even think of ever abandoning this story or you'll be haunted by all the ghosts of fans who keeled over when they found out you weren't going to continue this story. Keep up the great work.
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